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“Wrapped Up In Blue”What if I miss
the parade passing by
while watching the rain
fall from the sky
and don’t see all
of the clowns waving hi
because I was wrapped up in blue?
What if I ignore
the call of the wild
and settle for something
a little more mild
neglecting the voice
of my inner child
because I was wrapped up in blue?
What if the sun
shines on my face
while I hang it low
in a shadowy place
and I can’t feel the warmth
of its radiant grace
because I was wrapped up in blue?
What if the words
that I long to hear
are uttered from lips
I find so dear
but are washed away
in a river of tears
because I was wrapped up in blue?
What if I never
experience it all
while sitting precariously
perched on the wall
not daring to move
for fear I will fall
because I was wrapped up in blue?
But what if I smile,
join the parade…
Talk to the child,
step out of the shade…
listen more closely,
hear the love that I made…
I’d be happy, remembering you.
Life is full of what if's....most are pointless. Sometimes, it's worth it to question them....
Thank you to for her stock piece, [link]
And thank you very much to ~atomicsharkdesign for the use of his gorgeous Blue Rose photo, again! [link]
**NOTE!!** Thank you SO much to for her recommending this piece for a DD.
Original poem by me, © melanie joy 2008
I give permission to ~Unique-Manip , =PoetryPlease , and *Visual-Poetry-Club to display this in their galleries.
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Comments: 208
KuBo88 In reply to ??? [2008-07-14 06:46:13 +0000 UTC]
I'm at lost for words. You should read this [link] it's not as good, but yeah, I'd like to think its at least worth a quick read.
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meljoy68 In reply to KuBo88 [2008-07-14 08:16:27 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for the link. That was a wonderfully uplifting reminder that life isn't all bad...even when things seem hopeless there is something to look forward to... Great piece.
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KuBo88 In reply to meljoy68 [2008-07-14 14:25:00 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. I recently uploaded a new poem if you're interested in reading it. I look foreward to seeing more from you.
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meljoy68 In reply to Doodle-pro [2008-07-14 04:34:16 +0000 UTC]
Dino has an incredible gallery at flickr...still trying to get him to bring them all over here!
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bishielurfer In reply to ??? [2008-07-14 02:27:10 +0000 UTC]
Very beautiful. The poem and pictures are both so wonderful and compliment each other so perfectly. Truly deserving of a DD :3 Congratulations.
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meljoy68 In reply to bishielurfer [2008-07-14 04:36:03 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much for that.
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Eyes-Of-Crystal In reply to ??? [2008-07-14 02:13:08 +0000 UTC]
wow thats is a really beautiful poem <3
congrats on the DD
this poem is well deserved for it
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VisualPoetress [2008-07-14 01:56:15 +0000 UTC]
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO !!! YES !!! congrats on the DD !! It is an awesome piece of work. And it is about time they give a DD to a visual poem !!!
I am so proud of you !!!
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meljoy68 In reply to VisualPoetress [2008-07-14 02:17:53 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very VERY much.
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VisualPoetress In reply to meljoy68 [2008-07-14 02:25:05 +0000 UTC]
Did you join the Visual-Poetry-Club: [link]
I asked if they could spotlight you I don't know if they will, but it is VERY RARE for a visual poem to get a Daily Deviation !!! I am so excited for you, I got goosebumps ...
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meljoy68 In reply to VisualPoetress [2008-07-14 04:40:14 +0000 UTC]
Seriously?? Why is it very rare?!? I've seen some beautiful pieces, mostly in your gallery!
I don't think I did join, but maybe I will. Thank you.
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VisualPoetress In reply to meljoy68 [2008-07-14 05:06:53 +0000 UTC]
Yes my dear, the past two years, I usually watch the DD's and it is almost always a written poem that receives a DD. Maybe your poem will open doors so they recognize how beautiful and how meaningful visual poems can be.
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meljoy68 In reply to VisualPoetress [2008-07-14 06:06:31 +0000 UTC]
I'm actually surprised, I would have thought more visual pieces would win than just words....goes to show what I know, huh?
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VisualPoetress In reply to meljoy68 [2008-07-14 06:12:29 +0000 UTC]
The literary community differs on what visual poetry is, a few of them think that an image will distract from the meaning of the words, while others think that it enhances the poem.
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meljoy68 In reply to VisualPoetress [2008-07-14 08:11:14 +0000 UTC]
I guess that really depends on the two pieces...I can see how both sides would be true. Well, thank goodness for clubs like , thank you very much for sending me their way!!
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faeriecrone In reply to ??? [2008-07-13 23:45:04 +0000 UTC]
Hey! I just finished my weekly feature with this image included and ... then! I discovered you are now famous! It is well deserved!
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meljoy68 In reply to faeriecrone [2008-07-14 00:31:41 +0000 UTC]
Famous. Naw...but thank you!!!
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faeriecrone In reply to meljoy68 [2008-07-14 01:03:31 +0000 UTC]
still, I am glad to see a DD I can endorse as exceptional.
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meljoy68 In reply to faeriecrone [2008-07-14 01:29:56 +0000 UTC]
That's the nicest thing to say!!
Thank you.
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Soni12 In reply to ??? [2008-07-13 23:05:28 +0000 UTC]
Wow its so pretty and I likes the questions...even if they are pointless X]
<3
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Drac0nis In reply to ??? [2008-07-13 21:02:36 +0000 UTC]
that's some very fine poetry ^..^ very deep, and meaningful.
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loveuvlithium In reply to ??? [2008-07-13 20:31:36 +0000 UTC]
simply lovely, your piece stirs a great deal of emotion and really sets the reader thinking. Great Job!
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meljoy68 In reply to loveuvlithium [2008-07-13 20:39:52 +0000 UTC]
Wow...Thank you very much for that!
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loveuvlithium In reply to meljoy68 [2008-07-13 20:57:03 +0000 UTC]
you deserve all the praise u can get!
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mbrsart [2008-07-13 18:42:37 +0000 UTC]
*standing ovation* Beautiful poetry, beautiful imagery.
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Colombina-san In reply to ??? [2008-07-13 17:05:02 +0000 UTC]
it is amazing! even though the words are really simple they just seem to flow after each other in the most natural way
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Elestra In reply to ??? [2008-07-13 17:00:11 +0000 UTC]
I have no words to say how beautiful it is.
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meljoy68 In reply to Elestra [2008-07-13 19:07:19 +0000 UTC]
That is a huge compliment! Thank you very much!
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meljoy68 In reply to Staldren [2008-07-13 19:08:01 +0000 UTC]
I like to hear that! Thank you very much!!
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Hopethefangirl In reply to ??? [2008-07-13 15:45:53 +0000 UTC]
Simply beautiful poem, and a beautiful visual too
HUGS FO' YOU
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meljoy68 In reply to Hopethefangirl [2008-07-13 19:08:32 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I love Dino's photo, it was perfect. I'm glad you liked it, too!!
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rabbit145 In reply to ??? [2008-07-13 14:04:43 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful peice, mel. :+favs: Very movimg.
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