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Published: 2014-07-25 15:58:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 84574; Favourites: 183; Downloads: 338
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Description And page 23, Yeah, he's not THAT androgynous, but he's certainly further than just a Twink now :>

And he WILL get something stylish, yeah, at first, but keep in mind Charlie wants to minimize his female appearance as much as possible :3

I wonder if I should give the hairdresser some protagonism tho, I actually haven't decided on that yet, it could maybe be a good way to add a gay character. Or maybe just another friend of Valentina, a girl, what do you think?

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ShadowHinata In reply to ??? [2014-07-26 02:08:50 +0000 UTC]

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SolidSnake1MGS In reply to ??? [2014-07-25 20:24:04 +0000 UTC]

Can I ask if this has a nod to "Girl in my dream" I'm seeing a similar development pattern...

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MentalCrash In reply to SolidSnake1MGS [2014-07-25 20:35:30 +0000 UTC]

I actually have to admit I never read Girl in my dream, just glanced over it very quickly, what development pattern are you talking about exactly?

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darezzi In reply to MentalCrash [2014-07-25 22:19:20 +0000 UTC]

Well, it's a really slow transition to a girl, but I didn't like the end, as a different personality takes over. I hope it's not like that, but that doesn't seem like you, knowing your characters.

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MentalCrash In reply to darezzi [2014-07-25 22:24:00 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I remember reading that part, and no, I'm utterly against identity loss, mild mental change is fine, but memories should always stay there, the only changes where I think it's fine to have a memory erasing is in age regression, but I won't do that with IISY.

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darezzi In reply to MentalCrash [2014-07-26 13:51:52 +0000 UTC]

I know, I remember talking to you about how that's a horrible thing to do to someone. And like I said, it's more about coping and adapting to the situation, rather than just plain killing the character. And I knew this series wasn't gonna be like that

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SolidSnake1MGS In reply to MentalCrash [2014-07-25 22:09:12 +0000 UTC]

The guy has little understanding of what is happening to him and things like hair growth & working out make no difference in the short term as he awakes with them back to what they where like previously
Because you haven't read it I won't spoil it for you...

Its a very good story with a lovely fewΒ twists. it ends quite abruptly (Due to an illness relating to the Writer and the artist filling in the gaps) but its quite a nice LONG.... read

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MentalCrash In reply to SolidSnake1MGS [2014-07-25 22:16:01 +0000 UTC]

Well, Charlie's change kind of works that way in the sense that he'll grow more femenine each day, and if he tried cutting out all of his hair or working out it would exactly reset the next day, but he wouldn't really manage to win any extra muscular mass, the basic idea being that he's doomed to accept the change, which will happen regardless of his efforts to look masculine, I guess it's similar then.

I remember reading some sort of alt ending on Girl in my Dream, but wasn't it basically a posession story at some point? I don't really want Charlie to lose his identity, that's creepy.

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SolidSnake1MGS In reply to MentalCrash [2014-07-25 22:23:26 +0000 UTC]

Well glad to see that's the case here ^~^

GIMDΒ it's Supposed to happen... but doesn't, again its something that's worth the read, the story'sΒ a lot more complicated than that and this is the charm of it...

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MentalCrash In reply to SolidSnake1MGS [2014-07-25 22:26:16 +0000 UTC]

Aye, I liked the idea of unavoidable doom *3* but also happy endings, Charlie will suffer because the change will make him suffer, but as he turns into a she, he'll end up accepting and liking it.

Mmm, that's nicer then, but I don't really like to even mention memory loss, I think it fits in Age Regression, but not TG.

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Doodletones In reply to ??? [2014-07-25 19:40:42 +0000 UTC]

and now to patiently wait :I

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MentalCrash In reply to Doodletones [2014-07-25 19:45:26 +0000 UTC]

Sorry, I think I could start at least sketching the new batch though, while I wait for the commissions info

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Doodletones In reply to MentalCrash [2014-07-25 19:51:22 +0000 UTC]

oh, it's fine, the wait is worth it.

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MentalCrash In reply to Doodletones [2014-07-25 19:52:19 +0000 UTC]

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Doodletones In reply to MentalCrash [2014-07-25 20:16:14 +0000 UTC]

...yeah... unlike him, your art is really cute and cool...

._. I wish I had the money to commission you.

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MentalCrash In reply to Doodletones [2014-07-25 20:19:57 +0000 UTC]

Ah, sorry, really, the gabe newell pic is just because of that "Worth the weight" joke.

And you can try getting my next kiriban, prize will be free art, as always.

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Doodletones In reply to MentalCrash [2014-07-25 20:22:22 +0000 UTC]

Kiribans to me seem really unfair and difficult ._.

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MentalCrash In reply to Doodletones [2014-07-25 20:37:44 +0000 UTC]

Well, they are difficult, but you are wrong if you think they're unfair, it's a contest anyone can enter without having to pay or even sign in. Unfair would be if I said only a small group of people were allowed to win or if you had to give me stuff to enter. With Kiribans I basically offer free to stuff to whoever manages to catch it.

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Doodletones In reply to MentalCrash [2014-07-25 20:41:09 +0000 UTC]

I'll try, but as I was described it, it still doesn't seem entirely fair.

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MentalCrash In reply to Doodletones [2014-07-25 20:43:46 +0000 UTC]

Why?

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Doodletones In reply to MentalCrash [2014-07-25 21:08:51 +0000 UTC]

because (as I was explained.) a Kiriban is where people race to a certain number of page views, but what if someone is almost there already?

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MentalCrash In reply to Doodletones [2014-07-25 21:11:44 +0000 UTC]

It's a contest where anyone can win and anyone can lose, that's actually fair pretty fair, if someone has the bad luck of pressing F5 and gets the number 999,999 then F5's again and gets 1,000,002 it wouldn't be a single bit less fair.

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Doodletones In reply to MentalCrash [2014-07-25 21:16:47 +0000 UTC]

I don't know, it just sounds unfair, maybe it's just me.

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MentalCrash In reply to Doodletones [2014-07-25 21:25:20 +0000 UTC]

It's fair since everyone has the same chances of winning and the same chances of losing, you could say everyone has small chances of getting it, that's a fair contest.

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spartasko In reply to ??? [2014-07-25 19:23:44 +0000 UTC]

your skills in drawing and rendering improves every time!

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MentalCrash In reply to spartasko [2014-07-25 19:28:38 +0000 UTC]

Ah, thank you ^3^

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ashaleey In reply to ??? [2014-07-25 19:17:45 +0000 UTC]

hey i think, valentina knows why is charlie changing..see the happiness on her face...

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MentalCrash In reply to ashaleey [2014-07-25 19:20:30 +0000 UTC]

I gotta spoil this, she doesn't, the change just happened without an explanation or trigger, she's just kind of a dick and doesn't know how to support him that much.

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ashaleey In reply to MentalCrash [2014-07-25 20:44:58 +0000 UTC]

hey valentina is tom boyish but she helpin charlie out...she is kewl as well

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MentalCrash In reply to ashaleey [2014-07-25 20:46:46 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, she is supportive, and it's clear she wants to help him, but she can't help laughing at him sometimes or getting angry over things that are her fault, it's kind of her personality.

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ashaleey In reply to MentalCrash [2014-07-25 20:47:38 +0000 UTC]

i know but thats her character

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ashaleey In reply to ??? [2014-07-25 19:17:07 +0000 UTC]

hey, charlie is becoming too accepting..he might jus would start to date a guy in class...what bout including a girls nightout in between and now valentina and charlie going out together with some guys

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MentalCrash In reply to ashaleey [2014-07-25 19:18:50 +0000 UTC]

Charlie is already past shock, and not quite depressed since he has Valentina near him, but he's still far from acceptance or considering dating someone of the opposite sex.

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ashaleey In reply to MentalCrash [2014-07-25 20:40:22 +0000 UTC]

now lets see what changes with her hairstyling brings on her...may be its ashleey, the stylist bring a change in her

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MentalCrash In reply to ashaleey [2014-07-25 20:44:37 +0000 UTC]

Oh, he will try to look as male as possible, but there is no turn back in his change, you'll see :>

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ashaleey In reply to MentalCrash [2014-07-25 20:45:41 +0000 UTC]

hey no please...dont change him into male hun

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MentalCrash In reply to ashaleey [2014-07-25 20:52:12 +0000 UTC]

Oh, he will try to look male, but that's gonna be a hard thing to achieve since he's blossoming so fast.

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ashaleey In reply to MentalCrash [2014-07-25 20:55:18 +0000 UTC]

hey will get the other essentials on her body faster...

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DaichiAzure In reply to ??? [2014-07-25 19:07:10 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm...how about a relative of her's...that'd be an interesting twist

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MentalCrash In reply to DaichiAzure [2014-07-25 19:17:22 +0000 UTC]

It could be, but it wouldn't really consider that a twist.

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DaichiAzure In reply to MentalCrash [2014-07-26 01:49:01 +0000 UTC]

Hmm, you've got a point.

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raedford In reply to ??? [2014-07-25 18:32:59 +0000 UTC]

Val's a blonde?

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MentalCrash In reply to raedford [2014-07-25 18:35:41 +0000 UTC]

Yeah

Blonde doesn't necessarely means bright yellow.

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NinjaRecon In reply to ??? [2014-07-25 18:26:33 +0000 UTC]

Poor Charlie...

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MentalCrash In reply to NinjaRecon [2014-07-25 18:37:48 +0000 UTC]

Poor quite literally as well, let's not forget he was going to leave the building since he couldn't afford the rent :V

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Musicallover1234 In reply to ??? [2014-07-25 18:21:02 +0000 UTC]

Well she does like to tease him doesn't she.

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MentalCrash In reply to Musicallover1234 [2014-07-25 18:37:11 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, well, she is mean but caring, instead of just freaking out or calling people to expose him as a freak show, she helps him, and he doesn't really have much more of an option, she's not a particularly nice friend, but she does care for him.

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Musicallover1234 In reply to MentalCrash [2014-07-25 19:29:50 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I have noticed that, I have a feeling that maybe she might lighten up a bit as things go on though.

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MentalCrash In reply to Musicallover1234 [2014-07-25 19:34:11 +0000 UTC]

She actually has changed in what we've seen so far, at the beginning she was just kind of just screaming at everything. Even when right now she still seems to enjoy bothering him she will soften up more as things goes on.

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Musicallover1234 In reply to MentalCrash [2014-07-25 23:27:47 +0000 UTC]

That's what I expect.

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