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MentalCrash — Is It Summer Yet? - 023
Published: 2014-07-25 15:58:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 84566; Favourites: 183; Downloads: 338
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And page 23, Yeah, he's not THAT androgynous, but he's certainly further than just a Twink now :>And he WILL get something stylish, yeah, at first, but keep in mind Charlie wants to minimize his female appearance as much as possible :3
I wonder if I should give the hairdresser some protagonism tho, I actually haven't decided on that yet, it could maybe be a good way to add a gay character. Or maybe just another friend of Valentina, a girl, what do you think?
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The word brunette? I'm pretty sure it is gender neutral.
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Good to see that the random extras are all goons as it should be. This is a college? Really?
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wah, you haven't been to college?
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Hair length does not = gender! It's a solidified cultural norm but not a biological one.
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I am really looking forward to your next page. This is a great story!
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I really like this story. I like your idea of another friend of Valentina.
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Aye, it's about time I start working on this again, let's see if I can make the secondary characters more important
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any idea when its coming back?
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any idea when you'll have time?
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Good story and drawings. Just found it. I think Charlie's hair grew too fast, until that morning it at a lessr rate.
Muy buena historia y dibujos. Recién la encontré. Creo que el cabello de Charlie crece muy rapido, hasta esa mañana crecía a un ritmo menor.
SAlu2
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Sip, bueno, en Mirror's Cycle hice lo mismo, en un principio el pelo le crece super rápido, mi idea es que el corte que se haga le dure una temporada, aunque no quisiera que fuese el definitivo :>
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Great story. Thanks I will be interested in how it all turns out.
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Yayyy, let's hope I can find the time to update this thingie soon ^3^
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Ah, Charlie is having a rough time, but he... uh she is lucky I'd say :3
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It will be ready when it's ready :T I can't make any promises of when that'll be exactly.
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It's OK... I've just loose my patience...
Anyway you're work is great :3
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En la traducción en español pusiste "morenica bonita" o "es sólo una pruebica de sangre". Ya veo que estás usando un vocabulario muy almeriense, jajaja. Me mola esta serie, te lo digo en serio, y muchas gracias por poner más páginas... ¡Las echaba de menos!
Espero que en el siguiente capítulo no pongas cosas como: "Po' ahi voy pa' caza de mi viejo a ve' zi le pido pasta pa' la kely o no ze que..."
jajaja, es broma. En serio, muchas gracias... Adoro esta serie, ya tengo ganas de saber cómo será el nuevo peinado que le harán en la peluquería... me gustaría que fuese un peinado femenino 
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Oh, yo vivo en Cuenca, la gente habla así también por acá :V
Y Tranqui, no me voy a exceder con la jerga :> Vamos a ver que peinado le pongo, y sí, los pechos le crecerán pronto, pero aún faltan algunas páginas para llegar a eso.
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vaya... y yo pensando que hablaba en murciano...
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And she should cut his hair the way Valantina wants it
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Valentina doesn't really want to force him into feminization, she just enjoy making fun of him once in a while.
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I think you're right...that would definitely make their dynamic a bit more balanced and also provide a more enriched perspective to both Charlie and the readers.
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I'am planning to give a relationship's backstory to Valentina though, not with the hairdresser, but with Donnie, the guy who came back from that schorlarship abroad, and maybe some more people, Valentina is immature after all, the kind of character who'd prefer to be dominant most of times, but can easily make mistakes regarding people, who she trusts and what she says.
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I love the story so far...you're doing a great job with it, MentalCrash!
Since we're all throwing around ideas, I thought I'd toss one more into the mix...
What if it turned out that, in the past, the hairdresser and Valentina had a close relationship (not necessarily romantic or anything, but who knows). ...and though the two are emotionally detached now, the hairdresser could act as sort of a "bridge character", helping to explain Valentina's antagonistic attitude and thereby alleviating some of Charlie's frustration? (giving him another tier of support and allowing him to be a little more confident)
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I was thinking about making a supporting character, someone's who's sweet, Valentina supports Charlie and wants to help him with all the trouble he'll be dealing with, something that can also work in developing a love relationship, but I think another character could work, someone who's willing to help Charlie and is not rude like Valentina, also someone who wouldn't develop a love relationship with Charlie.
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When do you think the will start developing breasts
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the hair dresser should say hello mam and give charlie a very feminine haircut
those are just some of my thoughts
also when wil 024 come out
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Mmm, that was kind of the idea, yes, I wonder when I'll make him find out about Charlie's change though.
I can't say when will 024 be done, I have a bunch of commissions to take care of first.
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Well, Charlie doesn't really has a good relationship with his family, but yeah, that needs to be developed better, and if he hadn't been caught by Valentina he wouldn't have known what to do or where to go, he just doesn't want his family to look at him like that.
And true, I guess so far the best developed character is Valentina, we know Charlie is kind of shy but that's pretty much it, I still think a new character might come in handy, maybe not very important yet, but getting more protagonism over time.
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so if you know the ending, why would you even mind reading it till this page?
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The only thing that will change in Charlie is his gender, so you could say he'll become lesbian since he'll keep his tastes. But I don't want to focus on the romance all that much, just the change.
And Charlie really doesn't get along with his family, to them he's like a stranger they won't miss once he has decided to accept his new self, unlike Mirror's Cycle, where the revelation was something Danielle had been fearing for a while, but she told her parents as soon as they were home.
Here is just different, Charlie might as well be an orphan, because I want to focus on he and Valentina growing as characters, I'll keep the change elementes relatively realistic (Like he'll have to go through a certain proccess so he can legally become a she) But that won't be the main focus, the characters comes first, then legal aspect of the change, then Charlie's family which we shouldn't really care for.
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... the sister of the girl. ^^
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Who? I mean none of them has brothers or sisters, or at least I haven't though about adding them, yet .3.
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ugh ... i mean he begin to look like her sister if she would have one.
It this to understand better?
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