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Misstridd — TFP :The Energy (FanComic) Chapter 1 - PG 3
Published: 2013-02-17 12:18:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 5386; Favourites: 69; Downloads: 9
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poor Knockout :3Sorry for my English
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If that was her Motorcycle well I'll be dipped, Makes everything cool!
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You are doing quite fine with our English my dear, keep it up
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Grammar's pretty good. You've improved! There are just minor corrections I need to make. After every ',' you should make a space. This,looks odd. This, doesn't. The dialogue of the adorable little motorbike should go like this. "Hi! Alright! You're in shock, but we must go!" Also remember to capitalize the first word in every sentence and you're good to go!
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