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Well...maybe giant robots aren't very bad as i thought
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Her name is Abby 
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Awwwwww, Nanoclick is so sweeetttt 
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"This was the worst day i have ever had!!! This can't be worse!" --> "This is the worst day I have ever had!!! This can't get any worse!"
"I prefer to die now!!!" would sound better "I rather die now!!!"
"I'm going to home" --> "I'm going home" or if he/she is referring going to her home or coming with her "I'm going to your house" idk what he/she is exactly meaning sorry
And finally the last speech bubble you forgot to make ur "i" into "I". Not sure who says it but yeah^^
Awweee....Look a bonding moment between human and robot <3 Sorry for spamming you with grammar messages mostly
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Maybe giant alien robots not too bad uh ? XD He's too logical but I'm getting love him <3 Oh no don't sorry for that . You make me happy because you're very helping person thank you so much ^^ 
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I love his design <3 Love how all the colours combine look awesome
If you need any help i'm here X3
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Thank you again ! 
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