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Published: 2018-01-18 04:51:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 3413; Favourites: 177; Downloads: 0
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I suck at humans.

I wanted to practice. I put so much effort into this but the face looks all wrong and the arm looks weird and idk. -.-

Edit 1: Fixed the face I think....
Edit 2: Gave more life to the eyes.
Edit 3: Fixed the right eye, Inflated the right boob, added effects around the image.

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Comments: 35

kcsalyer23 [2021-06-08 00:37:29 +0000 UTC]

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FloridanPhotographer [2018-01-19 19:40:32 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


Okay, haven't done one of these in a while, so you'll have to excuse my rustiness on this, but here I go... *Cracks knuckles*

Okay, first off, love the coloring and shading on this. Very well done, and striking. Gets your attention as soon as you see it. Sure did with me. Really love the work on the eyes, looks very realistic there.

Now, on originality... Drawing EG characters is nothing new, so I will have to take a point off for that, but all and all, not really a bad job on this. Keep up the good work, man!

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mlpdarksparx In reply to FloridanPhotographer [2018-01-19 23:21:02 +0000 UTC]

I was considering changing her outfit, but since I'm a noob when it comes to humans I decided to be unoriginal and just draw her EQG form in a more anime looking style.Β 

And thanks for the comment about the eyes! I had a friend show me how to fix it. Originally they looked really dead and lifeless.

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FloridanPhotographer In reply to mlpdarksparx [2018-01-20 00:45:41 +0000 UTC]

I admit, I do like the Anime style you took with this. UotapoΒ is the master of this style for EG of course, but you did a damn good job here I have to say.

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mlpdarksparx In reply to FloridanPhotographer [2018-01-20 20:41:21 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow thanks!
I'm not used to drawing humans at all and this was my first real attempt in a long time.Β 

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FloridanPhotographer In reply to mlpdarksparx [2018-01-21 00:27:19 +0000 UTC]

Huh, really? Could have fooled me.

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JackTheWolfArt [2019-03-03 23:50:54 +0000 UTC]

I’m not a mlp fan but holy shit that’s badass

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JackTheWolfArt In reply to JackTheWolfArt [2019-03-03 23:51:09 +0000 UTC]

You could probably make anime

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SourSoda812 [2018-01-22 07:16:52 +0000 UTC]

Okay, this is amazing too!!
Keep up the great work, you're definitely on the right track!

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mlpdarksparx In reply to SourSoda812 [2018-01-23 04:19:06 +0000 UTC]

Tysm!

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SourSoda812 In reply to mlpdarksparx [2018-01-23 06:10:33 +0000 UTC]

Yw!

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Dark-seid [2018-01-20 19:27:49 +0000 UTC]

Excelent.

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xNickTheBestx [2018-01-20 10:08:40 +0000 UTC]

oh mama! what a beauty

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LaszlVFX [2018-01-19 14:37:20 +0000 UTC]

Great

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Jose-Ramiro [2018-01-19 05:57:43 +0000 UTC]

Gorgeousness.

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mlpdarksparx In reply to Jose-Ramiro [2018-01-19 06:09:14 +0000 UTC]

Tysm!
I've updated it about 3 times to fix the mistakes I manage to spot. It still doesn't look right to me.

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Jose-Ramiro In reply to mlpdarksparx [2018-01-19 06:57:53 +0000 UTC]

You're welcomeΒ 

Yesh, you want to perfect her even more? She looks more than great already.

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mlpdarksparx In reply to Jose-Ramiro [2018-01-19 23:26:50 +0000 UTC]

Awe thanks!

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Jose-Ramiro In reply to mlpdarksparx [2018-01-20 08:21:00 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome.Β 

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VampVixen [2018-01-18 16:03:23 +0000 UTC]

No you don’t you’re great

This is way better than any human I could draw. I love thisΒ 

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mlpdarksparx In reply to VampVixen [2018-01-18 23:06:41 +0000 UTC]

Awe thanks!
I think I'm going to try and humanize more characters just to practice. Maybe I'll find a more unique style instead of this stiff anime look.

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VampVixen In reply to mlpdarksparx [2018-01-19 05:17:13 +0000 UTC]

Ooo do it!

Humanize Glitch boi

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mlpdarksparx In reply to VampVixen [2018-01-19 06:06:48 +0000 UTC]

I might do that once I develop my own human style.

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tigerwolf54 [2018-01-18 15:12:43 +0000 UTC]

wow! That's really good! You don't suck at humans! You're way better then I am. OwO

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mlpdarksparx In reply to tigerwolf54 [2018-01-18 23:05:55 +0000 UTC]

I tried!Β 
Maybe I'm comparing myself to sakimichan's art too much. XP

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tigerwolf54 In reply to mlpdarksparx [2018-01-19 00:00:23 +0000 UTC]

X3

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Joan-Grace [2018-01-18 14:57:29 +0000 UTC]

The face is AMAZING!!

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mlpdarksparx In reply to Joan-Grace [2018-01-18 23:05:24 +0000 UTC]

Awe thanks! I tried really hard at fixing it. It still looks wonky to me though

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Alex-Inks [2018-01-18 05:43:39 +0000 UTC]

Niiiice
Although the face looks kinda strange, something about doesn't seem to be sitting correctly.Β 
Body is good though , i feel like the boobs are a little to high, and the hand is too big in compression to her arm but besides from those things, it doesn't look half bad, nicely done, my friendo
Here's a tip that you probably already know but just in case: When sketching try flipping the canvas or open a new viewing window while you draw. Flipping image helps alot, helps so you don't come used to the same image

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mlpdarksparx In reply to Alex-Inks [2018-01-18 07:07:13 +0000 UTC]

I think I saw what you saw with the face. I went back and added more highlights to the cheeks, changed the eyebrows, and adjusted the angle of the right eye. Plus added shading to the nose. I think the face looks a little better now.Β 


Also tried to shrink the hand some but the overall arm just looks too big to me. X3

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Alex-Inks In reply to mlpdarksparx [2018-01-18 14:27:26 +0000 UTC]

Ooohh~Β 

Well. Okay then X'D Keep at it C:

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mlpdarksparx In reply to Alex-Inks [2018-01-18 23:03:33 +0000 UTC]

I will. I feel bad that I'm not so great with humans so I think I may do the entire mane six as humans.

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Alex-Inks In reply to mlpdarksparx [2018-01-18 23:14:16 +0000 UTC]

Pfftt, knowing you, I'm sure you will great at it when you get the hang of it ;3 also Can't want to see itΒ  Β Β 

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xXxXDarkFlameXxXx [2018-01-18 05:04:21 +0000 UTC]

THICCC

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mlpdarksparx In reply to xXxXDarkFlameXxXx [2018-01-18 07:11:20 +0000 UTC]

Β 

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