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MMDanielson — The Torturing Dream
Published: 2013-03-03 21:01:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 2244; Favourites: 43; Downloads: 1
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Description Soft...   her skin. He knew it would be before he even knew her name.
Silent... the breath he can't catch after his gasp when she said 'Hello gorgeous. Let's go make some trouble.'
Soft...   the sheets on the bed in a room he'd never seen, but was happy to be inhabiting.
Silent... the arch of her back and the tears on her face, oxytocin induced...

Hard... the concrete he sees when he awakes from the dream
Cold... the skin on his chest where she laid her head seconds before
Hard... the sound of him lighting a cigarette in the quiet room
Cold... his breath when he exhales the first drag of another day
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Comments: 21

Achille1996 [2013-04-27 20:06:54 +0000 UTC]

You two did an excellent job on this. Everyone knows the terrible feeling of awakening from a wonderful dream . . . Beautiful work!

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XIStormIX [2013-03-13 02:57:16 +0000 UTC]

Wow! Loved it. This seriously rocks. Bravo to the both of you!

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MMDanielson In reply to XIStormIX [2013-03-13 05:09:39 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much.

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XIStormIX In reply to MMDanielson [2013-03-13 06:59:18 +0000 UTC]

You are very welcome. I hope that you have a lovely day.

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Astro-Creep166 [2013-03-12 18:49:24 +0000 UTC]

That was awesome!

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MMDanielson In reply to Astro-Creep166 [2013-03-12 22:24:40 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot man. Your username is awesome. I still jam White Zombie.

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Astro-Creep166 In reply to MMDanielson [2013-03-13 17:42:27 +0000 UTC]


Rock on my friend, rock on

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WeirdAndLovely [2013-03-12 15:02:39 +0000 UTC]

This is a great collaboration. Nice job ya'll.

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MMDanielson In reply to WeirdAndLovely [2013-03-13 05:10:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much.

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WeirdAndLovely In reply to MMDanielson [2013-03-13 13:12:36 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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UselessItalian [2013-03-12 01:52:23 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful. I really enjoy the twist at the end!

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MMDanielson In reply to UselessItalian [2013-03-12 05:05:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much.

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UselessItalian In reply to MMDanielson [2013-03-12 11:59:19 +0000 UTC]

Of course. ^^

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Y-O-D-H [2013-03-04 19:23:41 +0000 UTC]

Reminds me of lockup.

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MMDanielson In reply to Y-O-D-H [2013-03-05 17:55:50 +0000 UTC]

Good parallel.

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CalleighBlack [2013-03-04 03:11:48 +0000 UTC]

I'm so happy you came to play with me on this. I am honored to have gotten to play a part.

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MMDanielson In reply to CalleighBlack [2013-03-04 03:24:11 +0000 UTC]

The honor was all mine.

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CalleighBlack In reply to MMDanielson [2013-03-04 14:00:25 +0000 UTC]

Stand up so I can you.

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gabbyMrgn [2013-03-03 22:11:46 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful.....all of it!!! WOW.

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MMDanielson In reply to gabbyMrgn [2013-03-05 21:01:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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gabbyMrgn In reply to MMDanielson [2013-03-06 02:03:37 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome

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