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Moepling — Softness II
Published: 2009-10-26 13:45:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 427; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 0
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I thought I could get a little closer, so I took this one at four times lifesize with the Mp-e 65mm lens and my Eos 400DI'm sorry, but I cannot thank you for every fav anymore. It has become to time consuming for me. Nevertheless I am grateful for every one. Thank you!
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You requested a critique from the club:
I've seen several pictures from this series of yours and I would like to say that this one is far from being the best one.
While the color is certainly rather interesting, I don't see anything significantly interesting about it: poor composition (I would move vertical line a little bit to the right) and lack of details. Honestly, I see no point in this picture: it's not very beautiful - so it doesn't bring pleasure for the eye and I don't see any interesting idea in it.
I'm sorry to say that, but I think you can do better. You know that I like a lot of your works, but this one is not a very successful one, imo.
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thanks a lot for the critique
Actually that is the best critique I could have hoped for, as this gives me a lot to think about and (hopefully) a lot to learn and improve.
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I'm glad that you feel this way
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hehe of course 
I asked for critique and I know it isnt my best shot
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