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Published: 2013-06-13 03:52:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 420; Favourites: 11; Downloads: 0
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Description Paladin/Tiamo-inspired character
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Comments: 4

MangaFroAngel101 [2013-06-13 06:33:34 +0000 UTC]

Concept, orginality, and a design are clever as well as the spear it is a nice touch and cool design. But I bet you can make mix up the weapon. Other than that this is awsome dude.

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KYRaptorN [2013-06-13 03:56:34 +0000 UTC]

I like how you captured the essence of a action pose and it does look like she is about o lunge and stick that spear into some poor fellow. One small criticism is that her calves and thighs look a little too thin to be armour-clad. however that does seem to fit her design so its probably ok here.
Well Done

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monjava In reply to KYRaptorN [2013-06-13 04:16:10 +0000 UTC]

thanks for viewing! yeah I've never really tried drawing armor before so I got a ways to go (i try to cheat through exaggeration XD)

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KYRaptorN In reply to monjava [2013-06-13 04:31:53 +0000 UTC]

some exaggeration would be interesting here. The armour design you chose seemed to be a more plate armour type which is generally more bulky on the body. I'll leave it up to you on how you want to improve on this.

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