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Published: 2003-12-20 03:40:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 241; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 8
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Alone you stand upon the hands of timeEver moving slowly and yet
The hours fly by with rainbow wings
Just as sure as the sun melts
Leaving nothing but the thousands of twinkling stars
Shining as brightly as your mind's eye
The moon fades away
Wishing good morning to the sun
Just as the sun paints the clouds
Forming the crown upon your head
You belive that time is as beautiful as a
Rose sparkling with dew
In a young maiden's garden
You embrace time as tenderly as a
Young lad embraces his true love on
Their wedding day
Time is your friend
Your healer and your lover
Alone you stand upon the hands of time
You're aware that even though love will leave you
Time will stay with you for eternity
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Comments: 4
Jason promised he’d check out your gallery, and by golly, that’s just what he did!
Looking at people’s writing is a gamble, because often it’s a practice in using a thesaurus:
“The alabaster moon laments the osmosis war with the egregious sun.”
Great…now I have to look up every third word in a dictionary just to figure out what the crap you’re trying to convey.
Conversely (that means opposite!), you have a knack for using everyday words to create some impressive imagery. Some of the lines had me go back over them to see any possible hidden context, and the last few lines had me going “oh snap!”
You definitely have talent. And now that you’ve dusted off your account, I’m hoping to see more prose from you in the future my fellow art buddy!
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