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And finally the big bad is revealed in this Chapter, and drawing him is simple on one hand, yet very difficult on the other in terms of his head. For the primary frame, all I need to do is flip Messor's head upside down, then I need to design the teeth, eyes, ears and nostrils, which I also drew by hand, which takes a while to get right. And I only have one more Chapter to go to complete my story.
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Story
What Messor the Destroyer Deity of the Yin revealed to everyone, didn't make a whole lot of sense to Master Fiendish. Aren't Creator Deities supposed to be benevolent, angelic and pure of heart? After all, they are the ones who bring forth existence, which leads to life, and have been depicted so much in a positive light in many cultures. Plus Fiendish's creator was the one who granted him the tools he needed to evade Messor's wrath. Yet whatever the case, despite being cracked to the point of shattering, Fiendish taps on his Jade Emerald cane to start recording the case.
Master Fiendish; "He's the string-puller?"
Messor; "...For my brother Provisor, suffering is one of the many things that originates from him-"
Messor's explanation is cut short due to something horrific happening to her. All kinds of infectious life forms start erupting from Messor's body as she screams in pain and agony! This should have been impossible due to her destructive barrier that surrounds her, yet Fiendish discovers that right behind her is the hand of her brother, piercing through that barrier with his hand and stabbing her in the back. As Messor's once proud stance withers away into mere squirming through the excruciating pain wile collapsing to the floor, Provisor reveals his profile.
The newly arrived entity had similarities, yet also opposing features to his sister. For starters, he had a more robust and humanoid build over Messor, like an Olympic athlete, yet like Messor he's a digitigrade and also had bladed hands. His head looked as if Messor's was turned upside down to make the shape of the Yang, with a long bladed chin and his nose was curved upwards to link with the shorter pointed tip of his head. Yet his facial features such as the eyes, the ears and the teeth were the same as Messor's except they were of an inverted black and white, like the rest of his body. The one opposing feature that unnerved Fiendish, Wyrm and Vindicta the most was that whereas Messor bared an angered grimace, Provisor bared a hellishly sadistic grin, which fits well with what he says to finish Messor's explanation.
Provisor; "...And suffering is what I love most about my role as the Creator Deity of the Yang!"
Provisor eyes Vindicta and widens his already bone-chilling grin at her. Startled, she tries to call for the aid of her kingdom, yet remembers that they are still frozen in space and time by Messor's power.
Provisor; "And what I love most about the suffering, is all the wonderful possibilities and elements for making the most depressing of stories I create upon my victims!"
Provisor advances towards Vindicta, baring yet an even wider grin, while Vindicta backs away in dread as Wyrm jumps in to defend her.
Provisor; "Take the for example, you Vindicta, a filthy heathen witch. I have noticed that quite a few fantasy stories, most often targeted towards the female demographic, focuses on Romantic Love dominating over the wicked in the form of lethal magic spells that would destroy anyone who hates it. A perfect torture device to throw this poor, helpless, unsuspecting little cretin like you into a world that would torment you with its presence and mock you at every turn, forcing you to live a life of terror, fearing it's destruction upon you. And I made certain that you would see it as also the bane of your life by threatening your family and your so-called spouse with immediate suffering by my hand, if they refused to bide by my command to hate you against their will. A shame that my overly-merciful sister ended such amusing entertainment, I always had the satisfaction of watching this forced and torn trio sobbing over the fact they had no freedom to truly love and care for you, my neglected little pet. And not even the brute dimwitted strength of your own pet, who by the way wreaks of worms from the stench of his breath as he stands in my way, would save you from the agony of your harsh world. Your demise and eternal damnation by the magic weapon of any form of Love would make such a glorious end to my story!"
Wyrm bared his teeth in aggression and Vindicta's fear of Provisor was slowly fading away, being replaced by rage, trembling furiously upon such a twisted putrid ideology. Provisor suddenly snaps his concentration to Fiendish, who's face was green in nausea upon hearing that the life of his dearest friend was nothing more than to exist as a marionette to Provisor's sick joke!
Provisor; "And you Fiendish, were originally created as nothing more than an inferior two-dimensional cartoon character, with a one-dimensional villainous mind. Hence the reason your planet of origin I designed to literally be an animation desk. Created as nothing more than to piss off my stick in the mud sister so that she could cleanse this universe of your pestilence!"
Master Fiendish; "...So the only reason you spared me from Messor's wrath-"
Provisor; "-Is because you make me laugh my ass off, especially when you scurry about like a pathetic little rat, you even squeak like one!"
Wyrm Lung; "We may be villains in our own right, but I have never encountered such an evil heartless abomination in my entire life!"
Provisor; "Oh, I wouldn't say heartless..."
Provisor shoves his hand down his throat and literally plucks out his heart. It was black and frozen. Yet when he activated it, it was glowing white hot and and started to rapidly beat. Fiendish started to lose control of himself as Provisor puppets him to look at Vindicta deliriously, as if about to flirt with her. Provisor tightened his grip on the heart, causing Fiendish's eyes to turn pail and he began to drool as he became limp and barely able to stand. Vindicta's fears once again crawls back up her spine!
Vindicta Witchcraft; "Fiendish, what's happening to you!?"
Provisor; "I would say it's more like the heart to Fiendish's suffering! You see I gave Fiendish one that would be linked to this. Once activated, he will think only of romance, which was how he kept losing in his schemes during his melodrama days. And then I thought, Vindicta, wouldn't it be so ironic that this control over him would become your undoing? Unfortunately, I failed to execute that experiment when my true form got into yet another squabble with Messor in the Omniverse. And that was when you first meet Fiendish, yet this time, I will have no distractions."
As Provisor squeezes his heart, the completely zombified Fiendish raises his arms forwards and walks towards Vindicta like Frankenstein's Monster. And while passing by Provisor, Fiendish is handed a fancy red case, which the Creator Deity opens to reveal a gold ring with a shiny clear glittering diamond. Provisor then fuels that ring with Romantic magical properties, with hearts, flowers and butterflies emitting from it. Vindicta began to quiver as she backs away!
Provisor; "You know exactly what happens to you once I force Fiendish to propose his marriage to you... Death, disintegration, evaporation, vaporization, reduced to pixie dust screaming in despair, or how about deliquesce!? Yes, yes like that classic Wicked Witch of the West's "I'M MELTING! MELTING! OH, WHAT A WORLD! WHAT A WORLD!"
Unable to tolerate this rancid freak and fearing for Vindicta's Life, Wyrm Lung tries as best he can to attack Provisor. Yet with a wave of the Creator Deity's hand, the once mighty dragon is smashed, crushed and broken on the ground, as if the planet's gravity was multiplied ten thousand fold. Vindicta screams in horror as Provisor keeps Wyrm alive with his black magic to savor his pain! She turns away and tries to run, but Provisor snatches her by the back of her hair and faceplants her to the floor to weaken Vindicta, so he can shove her towards Fiendish. The closer to the wedding ring she was shoved towards, the more excruciating pain Vindicta felt as she slowly starts to melt! At the same time, Provisor warps into the scene every one of Fiendish's sharks, including the pup Fiendish gave to Vindicta as a present, suspended in the air and suffocating with their tails pierced with meat hooks!
Provisor; "Despite your understanding and acceptance of True Love in terms of family and friends, as well as petty pets..."
Through his unnatural forces, Provisor violently rips off every last fin off of each shark, dumps them into a cauldron he had materialized from thin air, and then leaves the dismembered sharks hanging to choke to death on their own blood. He then hoggishly guzzles up the soup and then plugging one of his nostrils, he pukes the soup out of the other nostril at Vindicta, right in her face!
Provisor; "...You still fear and hate Romance! It's just my simple "programming" of you to perish over such to my delight. After all, I am the one who bastardized nearly all definitions and synonyms of Love in this world into the destroyer weapon of Hate! A fitting end to a miserably enjoyable story to satisfy my obsession for suffering!..."
Yet as Provisor turns to look at Fiendish, he discovers to his surprise that in the mastermind's pocket, the green cane has been recording all of Provisor's true intentions!
Provisor; "Ah, I'll need to relieve you of your life support."
As Provisor is distracted, Vindicta rips herself free of the Creator's grip, with some help of the abomination's bladed hand inadvertently cutting off half of her hair. Vindicta at this point, has had enough of this complete insanity, as she flips out the Colt New Service Fiendish had given her back when they first meet, shatters the wedding ring off of the case Fiendish was forced to hold in one shot, it's magic glow dispersed into nothing, and shooting Provisor's heart three times, causing the Creator Deity to screech in shock! Fiendish's manipulation wore off as he shook his head in lack of memory to what had happened. As he looks up from rubbing his head, he saw Vindicta pull out two STENs and aims them at Provisor!
Vindicta Witchcraft; "I kept my word for you, Fiendish! Whatever it takes to destroy such a curse! And as for the reprobate!..."
Provisor; "You dare call your lord and story designer a REPROBATE!?"
Vindicta Witchcraft; "YOU AND YOUR STORIES CAN GO BURN IN HELL!!!"
Vindicta opens fire at Provisor with the STENs, scattering bullets at her arch-nemesis all over! Unlike Messor, it turns out Provisor not only refrained from shielding himself with any form of invisible barrier, yet to Vindicta's shock, he swallows back his heart and then deliberately tears open his rib cage, exposing his most vital organs at her!
At the same time due to his distraction, the gravity pressure Provisor had cast upon Wyrm Lung had lifted, recovering him back to his normal state. As the dragon looks up, he saw Vindicta now firing with her left hand a Bren Light, after emptying the magazines of her two STENs and casting fire, ice and lightening spells with her right hand at Provisor! On her right, Fiendish joins her side with his reloaded M1921s and hailing even more copper, yet also accidentally dropping his near broken cane!
Wyrm recovers the Jade Emerald Cane, yet as he is about to join in and attack Provisor, he is held back by a hand gripping his shoulder. It was Messor, who's infection has rendered her incapable of forming her destructive barrier, due to having to concentrate on anti-bodies against the parasites!
Messor; "Cough-Cough!... Wyrm Lung, is it? That Cane has just the recordings needed to expose my brother's avatar to the authority of this universe! Hand it to me and we will aid you in his sentence for crimes against the cosmos!"
Wyrm Lung; "And then you'll promise to leave Fiendish be?"
Messor snatches the Cane without answering, uses what little power the cane has sparingly to rewind the infection inflicted on her to nothing, relieves all of Wyrm's soldiers from their paralysis, and takes off with the relic before Wyrm could do anything about it. With nothing else to lose, Wyrm charges at Provisor and breathe fire in his face while pulling out a pair of M2 Brownings and smothers Provisor in its ammunition as his army follows right behind with their firearms upon seeing the Creator deity avatar as a threat!
This whole time however, Provisor had not once showed any signs of physically attacking back at the three nor their army! He simply lets himself flail across the citadel with all the bullets and shells penetrating him from all directions, cackling his bladed face off like a bobble head toy!
Provisor; "Yes, YES, throw all your wrath and vengeance at me, oh how I love the suffering so much!"
And instead of brutal attacks, Provisor instead returns assaults with a long list of further insults at his victims, particularly towards Master Fiendish, as the fight carries over towards the castle!
Provisor; "It just hit me due to all the metal you're firing at me with, Fiendish, that you and your toxic excuse for friends suck as villains!"
Provisor looks around the kingdom he is being assaulted in and sees a diverse and thriving city, which made him sick!
Provisor; "For example, what the Hell even is this shitty kingdom you have built from the dirt!? You should be leveling it to the grave, leaving all your subjects homeless!"
Again with a wave of his hand, Provisor levels the entire kingdom to its foundations!
Provisor; "Another thing is what the Hell is with this balance of wealth and natural resources you have been sharing with these maggot subjects!? You should be hoarding it all for yourselves and have your people die of starvation!"
Again with a wave of his hand, Provisor destroys all valuable supplies, burns away all sources of food and evaporates all water in the kingdom!
Provisor; "And yet what sickens me the most about you is what the Hell is with this respect of yours to the commoners who's rival kingdoms you have conquered!? You should be unleashing your weapons of destruction upon them!"
And once again with a wave of his hand, Provisor grips every conquered rival civilian who had been given such mild treatment from Fiendish, Wyrm and Vindicta despite their capture. Next, like a magnet, he sends them all flying straight into him, merging with him until he looked like a Lovecraftian horror. And finally, Provisor multiplies all of the weapons being fired at him a hundred fold, slaughtering the innocent that have been merged with him until there was little left that could be recognized of them! Provisor then haults all fire against the will of his enemies.
Provisor; "In fact, you of all people should have exterminated every hero and innocent victim to ensure that no one will oppose you!"
Provisor then swings his hands and unleashes swarms of lethal parasites to kill all of those that he had mentioned!
Provisor; "That is what it's like to be a true hate filled villain with no soul!"
There were no longer any heroes or innocent victims left on the Planet of Fairy Tales. Only the sinners and monsters who had once been outcasts from royalty. Traumatized by these acts of atrocity, Fiendish, Wyrm and Vindicta didn't know what else to do, their conventional weapons and spells against Provisor only feed his sickly nature. Yet with such a flawed ideology from Provisor, Fiendish stepped forward to call him out on it.
Master Fiendish; "I can see what it's like to be such from you, yet for us minors our villainy is not about being as pure evil as possible, it's about succeeding at it!"
Provisor's horriffic grin turned into a frown of disgust.
Provisor; "And that is what I find most disappointing about you and is why I felt I had made a mistake creating you as it seems that you have grown a bit too attached to the worm and the witch!"
Provisor then proceeds to advance towards the trio and offering his hand.
Provisor; "So come join me and suffer eternally for your failure!..."
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Comments: 7
AudeS [2017-08-25 09:25:44 +0000 UTC]
So then, it took me a bit too long, but I am most certainly happy to exclaim... Provisor is a pretty huge jerk. That he is in contrast to his more serious in tone sister, since unlike her he plays games with the lives of people to a point that it is basically making you think about how we as storytellers do have the same capabilities. And, it is truly quite reflected in his demeanor, he is outright mocking his creations with his own invulnerability by exposing what would normally seem a weakpoint. He also has no more pretense of being all high, but he still is mighty. What I mean is, it is funny how he takes such a vulgar mannerism that reflects however truly well how corrupted he is.
And it is pretty much bad for our three villains, as Wyrm is most certainly suffering a lot of physical pain, like, basically enough to reach the maximum of what the brain is capable to produce, and while Vindicta is threatened with the one thing that Provisor made her vulnerable to in both a physical and a emotional sense. And by using Fiendish no less, who is not under his own will, and also has lost all his pet sharks. Seriously, all in one chapter you very well made my hate Provisor, and I am looking forward to see what comes next for him.
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Mustache-Twirler In reply to AudeS [2017-08-25 19:43:45 +0000 UTC]
No problem, I'm glad you took your time. And thank you very much as well, I also like how you summed up Provisor for who he truly is. You are correct that he is a reflection on the dark minds of what a storyteller is capable of. I wanted to go all out with how ludicrously vile this piece of work is without having to filter this page for maturity, from his sadism to his masochism and how he pukes upon the hopes and dreams of others. He has no care about looking respectable and appear his best in terms of position since he just has to terrorize everyone to get the message across on who is superior and sees his own corruption as a gift rather than Messor's view of it as a curse. All three of my leads had to take the brunt of his sickly nature in this Chapter, showing how helpless each of them are against him, on their own that is. Yet for such a Villain that invests so much on how evil and hated he makes himself out to be, Provisor's weakness is the dangerous crowd that he is unwittingly attracting for the final chapter.
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Mustache-Twirler In reply to SwordSparks [2017-08-19 21:22:27 +0000 UTC]
And he's going to get his ASS whopped for being such a jerk too!
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Gamma-Wings [2017-08-19 14:52:57 +0000 UTC]
The designs of the creator and destroyer are interesting, as they remind me of bird skulls. They both look rather creepy and the colour choices are quite suiting.
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Mustache-Twirler In reply to Gamma-Wings [2017-08-19 17:11:25 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, unlike my main characters, I wanted the two main antagonist's design of their heads specifically to alienate and repel the reader, as if one will never look at a Yin Yang the same way again. Also, neither of them are benevolent, the Yin is cold heated and calculating though only wants to get the job done, while the Yang on this post flips the bird at the face of his original purpose. If they looked at you face to face, you'd mostly see a thick blade with eyes sticking out of each side.
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