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Nachooz β Animation - Jump Flip
#animation #girl #jump #flip
Published: 2014-10-18 03:41:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 178242; Favourites: 1266; Downloads: 314
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Drawn like a month ago...LAWL I dunno wtf I was doing with this one. I wanted to try something action-y?? OTL *not use to doing something action-y*
Question: Is the playback looping for you?? its not looping when I look at it on my laptop but it loops when I look at it on my phone... OTL
Tools: Sai, AzDrawing2
Frame count: 25frames, 15fps
shameless plug *shot*
Animation Commission? [1/2 OPEN] ONE SLOT LEFT. 11HOURS UNTIL BIDDING ENDS 8D
HI GUYS 8DD
This is sort of an experiment of some sorts so bare with me orz. I've been meaning to practice some animation BUT since Im always working on commissions, I never have much time to practice them (plus, I seem to not be able to draw cool looking characters in my animations...). So I figure, since I seem to always have a never ending supply of people asking me for animation commissions, I might as well use that to my advantage and try getting some much needed practice and try working with a variety of characters and stuff while im at it. :iconlazepoolplz: (plus I need the money Orz) BUT I don't really know how I should price them, so I decided to hold an ANIMATION COMMISSION AUCTION
Please read the terms of service before you consider. QuQQQ
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This animation overall looks fantastic, it's immediately striking and very clear. There a lot of great things about this piece:
The volumes and forms are remarkably consistent. Each frame looks smoothly connected to the other, especially considering the relatively lowish frame rate. There is nice snappy follow-through and nice anticipation. Each individual frame has nice line work and looks really good.
However while each individual frame looks great, the whole animation kind of has a weightless/"physics-less" feel to it. I think this is down to a couple of things:
First off there is only one frame with the girl off screen... It seems like the off screen speed is a bit too high especially considering the distance traveled and the implied arc. Also there is nice anticipation and almost no vertical reaction, I would suggest a bit of a squash after landing.... probably by lowering the back for a frame or 2. On the other while the vertical reaction is non-existent the horizontal reaction is far too extreme. It almost appears as though the girl is pushed back by an external force. This is because the the jump arc looks fairly steep, so most of the horizontal momentum was lost in the air.
As I said before, overall a really nice piece of animation.
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Thank you so much for the critique QuQ i will they to keep those things in mind the next time I try something like this
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ITSSSS AWESOMEEE CUTE AND BEAUTIFULL
I LOVE UR ANIMATION Neko Emoji-29 (Nyaa) [V2]
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This is amazing, and would take a while for me to do, but what sparked something in my mind was the was she slides as if on ice at the very end, and I see why you added that, but what I'm trying to get at was that there wasn't much friction. The other thing is how suddenly she jumps. Possibly add a little eyebrow raise or something before she jumps. Other than that, you did awesome. Keep up the great work! I haven't passes the minimum so ignore this: bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla
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I really like the animation you have done here, the girl jumps pretty smoothly. And yes, it's looping haha! Anyway, again the jump animation is really good, not much to worry. Her position as she jumps shows how accurate she will be able to make such a flip, and the seriousness of her her expression shows that there is a reason to jump from whatever is getting her. Although, what I do reccomend when she is about to jump is to make her look "ready." She comes in a little too quickly. All and all, this is good! ^^ Well done!
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I see. Thank you so much!! QAQb
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very good using legs, but too quick in air. i suggest twist the body to touch down the ground make it noticeable and use hands to skid on the ground. however, your landing is very good and hit it on bulleye. top chest should lean forward a bit to take on weight to land on ground, skid backward with hair fan out not only to side. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
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Thank you so much~~QAQ
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you are welcome and i am honored to give feedback.
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So when are you going to post this onto Sakugabooru?
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now I really feel stupid that I judge your animations without even looking at it! It's so great!
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This is great! Your art is so cute and organized in ways.Β Β
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Woah! That's so cool!! 
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Thank you! 8D with lots of tears, sweat, and blood OTL OTL OTL
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XD No problem!
*Starts drawing stick figures like crazy*
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so awesome acrobaticsΒ
wonderful flowΒ
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hi love u r work do u do free lance i wont to animate feet bastinado shot for 20 second i will pay u 60 dolar for the shot if u intrest contact me on my mail superashour@hotmail.com ok
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No one is going to do a 20 second animation for shit pay like that.Β
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sorry its not me ho ask its my friend its a mistake i meant that i wont to animate just 1 shot thats aall can u do it or not
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This is really cool! ^_^
Also yes the playback is looping. ^_^Β
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could you please do a tutorial on how to animate in azdrawing :3
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COOL! Movement is awesome xept when it look like she hit the floor and slid back on purpose. That part didn't flow right but other than that, coolio!
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I like it but it looks like she slid back while she was on the ground :/ She stopped for a split second and then slid back.
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Great job, looks fun. I think it can use more tension/impact when she hits the ground again. But otherwise good job.
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........................................I think that there will come a time when I will be a helluva more surprised of your failture than your success.....................
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I can't stop staring at this! I just love how amazing this animation is!
- Yennie Fer
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Very nice! Just a couple things: It seems like she slides too far back at the end. The jump's arc looks more vertical than horizontal, so I think her momentum would be more likely to stop when she landed. Also, the perspective makes it look like she jumps back and to the left instead of just straight back (which I think you were going for). If her position were shifted just a bit to the left of the frame at the beginning, the action would make more sense spatially. Other than that, great job!Β
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Ah! I see, that makes sense. Thank you~
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Woah, this is just amazing 
Anyway, hope you get a critique soon 'cuz this is a really good piece ^_^ Hope you don't mind the 
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