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Published: 2009-10-08 20:19:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 1065; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 15
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Description Everyone around is glad
for eachother and yourself
Reminds me of the days I had
a teacher who often said

Pair up, form a row,
hold your partner's hand,
keep it there, don't let go
until you hear my command.
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Comments: 21

Karu12 [2012-10-13 23:10:01 +0000 UTC]

The poem is amazing. I hope to read more.

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namenotrequired In reply to Karu12 [2012-10-13 23:11:19 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Karu12 In reply to namenotrequired [2012-10-14 02:59:44 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome x3

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mindlessmaze [2009-11-17 02:08:29 +0000 UTC]

lovely!

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namenotrequired In reply to mindlessmaze [2009-11-17 10:36:13 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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shining-armor7 [2009-10-15 19:39:24 +0000 UTC]

nice

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namenotrequired In reply to shining-armor7 [2009-10-15 19:44:09 +0000 UTC]

thanks ^^

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S1v1 [2009-10-09 18:25:08 +0000 UTC]

simple and clean ^^ this is the work!

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namenotrequired In reply to S1v1 [2009-10-09 18:39:57 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot for the fave as well

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3wyl [2009-10-09 12:13:51 +0000 UTC]

Interesting... especially towards the ending.

I like the phrasing and how you emphasise the concept with the second part. The atmosphere adds a bit of depth to things too.

It's like... safety, and reassurance, almost.

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namenotrequired In reply to 3wyl [2009-10-09 15:01:51 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot wow, you see things in it i didn't even see

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3wyl In reply to namenotrequired [2009-10-09 18:31:12 +0000 UTC]

Eh, I pretty much go.. beyond.

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namenotrequired In reply to 3wyl [2009-10-09 18:36:13 +0000 UTC]

Lol, thanks, that is great! I do love deep-going comments, if you get what i mean ^^

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3wyl In reply to namenotrequired [2009-10-09 18:55:24 +0000 UTC]

I do, indeed.

Who doesn't?

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namenotrequired In reply to 3wyl [2009-10-09 19:09:29 +0000 UTC]

Well I know people who cant take even a bit of constructive critique

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3wyl In reply to namenotrequired [2009-10-09 19:14:30 +0000 UTC]

Hmm... Me too. >.>

I got into a bit of a pickle because of that. <.<

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namenotrequired In reply to 3wyl [2009-10-09 19:16:21 +0000 UTC]

Aww Yeah it's usually better to ignore their reaction i guess.

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3wyl In reply to namenotrequired [2009-10-09 19:17:26 +0000 UTC]

Hmm...

It's just sometimes, they're... two headed, you know?

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namenotrequired In reply to 3wyl [2009-10-09 19:20:44 +0000 UTC]

what does that mean?

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3wyl In reply to namenotrequired [2009-10-09 19:22:52 +0000 UTC]

Or two faced, as they say. >.<

They appear to be this... person, when... underneath it, there's this... Eh.

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namenotrequired In reply to 3wyl [2009-10-09 20:01:52 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I see what you mean, yeah i strongly dislike those persons ><

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