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Partial correction for [link] byCan't really help with the folds/clothes since I'm not familiar with the characters at all and what their clothes are supposed to look like.
And you'll notice that Manga isn't my usual style. All I did is try to give some ideas on how to adjust the pose to make it work.
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geonex [2011-06-11 10:05:19 +0000 UTC]
thank you for all your help, i'll be doing a revision of the picture soon.
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Shattered-Earth [2011-06-11 01:48:53 +0000 UTC]
Awesome redlines! I love the fist actually haha. To the original artist, i would have picked something other than profile, profile tends to be flattening and static.
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Nephtis In reply to Shattered-Earth [2011-06-11 18:38:19 +0000 UTC]
I thought the fist would be funny, but it depends a lot on it will be fitting for the character / her behaviour and usual attitude.
Instead of angry she could also be pouting.
And personally I agree about the choice of profile, but in the description problems with perspective and foreshortening were mentioned so I guess that was the easiest way to achieve the scene.
Some times you settle for what you can do if you have a scene in your mind that jus needs to be drawn. I do it all the time, finding a compromise between skill level and vision is a art in itself.
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Shattered-Earth In reply to Nephtis [2011-06-11 21:12:07 +0000 UTC]
You're right, i make those sacrifices all the time too. I guess i could have said the same thing about any drawing really xD "NEEDS MORE DRAMATIC ANGLE.. MORE MOREEE!"
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Nephtis In reply to Shattered-Earth [2011-06-11 21:20:42 +0000 UTC]
*ggg* More drama, babe!!!!
Joking aside, I love unusual perspective but have failed more than once myself and settled for something easier so I can understand.
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