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This is my favorite page, just for the bottom panel. The perspective was a complete bitch to do, but I'm very happy with how it turned out.
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.....She is down right creepy...o_O
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AAAAH!!!!
(The one thing that holds true no matter what show you watch, book you read, or radio you listen to: No matter how many times, how loud, or how brilliant you warning is, they NEVER HEAR YOU.)
(Knowing this, I can only do one thing whilst reading this comic
....scream.
RUN YOU FOOL!!!!!
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Haha, it'd just ruin the book/show/broadcast if they DID! XD
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I THOUGHT OF ANOTHER QUESTION! AREN'T YOU PROUD?
Why would Axis think Shockwave would keep Galeforce's legs around? Suspicious comment is very suspicious.
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I think I originally wanted to work a foot/leg fetish into his comments, but this flowed better and took up less space.
EITHER I'M THE BRAIN TUMOR OR WE'RE SEPARATED SIAMESE TWINS WHO USED TO BE ATTACHED AT THE SKULL. STOP READING MAH MIND.
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WE THINK ON THE SAME FREQUENCY.
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Where did panel 2's mini-Axis go?
The last panel is beautimous. It's set up really great and you've got such a range of line thicknesses. You did battle with perspective and I think we can call this one a victory.
The dialog is hilarious. Half Pint's so abused and she doesn't even know it.
TikTik's tongue is just .... I hate it. It's an important part of her design but I hate it. It's disgusting.
One thing that's confusing me is the fact we can see the tops of the cubes in the first panel. Are they not stacked very high or are we looking at Clyshot from an angle? If it is at an angle, then I'm a little confused on TikTik's height compared to Cly's. He'd be a behbeh compared to her, which is technically not an issue considering he's about to get onomnomnom'd by a baby eater but still.
TIKTIK STOP BEING BOTTOM HEAVY.
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It looked like crap and I got ride of it to make room for text. :I
VICTOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE. It really is my favorite, especially because of the angle and the line variety. I'm not happy with the ceiling lighting though, since I wanted to show that every other rafter had lights down the middle and Tik Tik was in the in-between one, but her lower half cut out the next in-between one.
I'm actually really happy I kinda got to express that Clyshot tries to look out for her, even if I'm not showing it.
....Actually, now that you mention it, that's a very good point. I think I was trying to focus too much on show that he's farther back in the room, but now that I look at it again, it just doesn't make sense with the angle. Thanks for pointing that out.
Theeeeen you're not gonna like pg 4. I ended up making them almost nearly the same size since she's a torso. Dammit, I didn't think that one through.
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Awh, too bad. Mini-Axis lives on in our memories.
Even if we don't get exactly how the building is constructed, I think we get enough information to know what TikTik's doing.
It's subtle but it's definitely there. If nothing else, we know Axis thinks Half Pint is important enough to Clyshot to make digs at.
Now you know *patpat*
Wait, why am I not going to like page 4?
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He shall be missed. But not really.
'cuz of the NOT size-differences. :I
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Doesn't Backdraft have an unusually long tongue too, though?
BTW HOW YOU BEEN LAYDEE? I MISSES U.
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He does, but it's not that long.
I MISSES U 2. Gimme a buzz sometimes, man. D:
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Oh crud. Darn it Tik Tik, why do you have to ruin people's fun?
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She is anti-fun and pro-babynomming.
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Ha, sounds like the kind of chicks I got stuck doing highschool projects with.
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I'm sorry to keep thread-jacking you but this comment raises so many questions. So many.....
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Lol, it was a joke. MOST of the people I knew weren't that bad. Most. XP
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Yeah, well, there are kids that like to pick on the awkward new girl in every school. The ones who picked at me just happened to be rather... well, let's just say half of them were "militant feminists" and the other half were BOYSBOYSBOYSMAKEUPBOYSOMGYOUDON'TDATEYOUMUSTWANTTOBEANUN. That's just the ones that picked at me, though. Most of the kids were just normal kids. :3
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Come now. She doesn't ruin everyone's fun. Just people ages 0 to 4 and new/expecting mothers.
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So all the coolest people, then.
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Hm, true enough. She probably wouldn't want to eat them because they'd taste all... old. I was probably going somewhere with that. Oh well. *Chases something shiny*
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I am anticipating some Axis vs. Tik Tik action. I will be disappointed if there is none. At the very least, save Clyshot! D:
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Haha, I adore Axis' digs at Half Pint! They are so terribly true XD
EEEE-! BEHIND YOU, CLYSHOT! LOOK BEHIND YOU!!
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Terribly true, but oh so funny. I feel bad I didn't draw her in here, though. :<
Also, I LIKE Half Pint's quirks. She's on of my favorites because she's not the usual variety of 'con. 
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..... you could totally make up for it by drawing her elsewhere... with Cly. >3>
Just so long as she works! I've probably mentioned several times how I love making characters that are opposites of what they should be but work.
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What should I draw? :< Like, cuddley pics are all well and good, but I'm trying to think of things Cly might do to cheer poor HP up.
She works very well. It's her reactions that make her memorable. And the cute things she does that make her lovable.
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HP's a big fan of koala bearing when she's upset if he doesn't mind going everywhere with a leech attached to him. Or use her dolls to try to talk her into eating something...
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This so reminds me of Star Trek First Contact where the borg queen is nothing but a head, neck, shoulders, and a cybernetic spine that wriggles like a worm and then connects with the rest of her body.
Very awesome!
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You make me soooooo happy~! I absolutely had the Borg Queen in mind when I was working on TikTik.
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WOOOOT! I am such a Trekkie, and a Warsie (Star Wars) and a Gatey (Stargate). The three big 'Star's of SciFi!
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Me: Sweeeeeeeeeeeeet!
You:Tooootally!
(Never forget the turtles from Finding Nemo!)
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When did we turn into turtles and do we get nunchucks?
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No, I was quoting from the two Sea Turtles from Finding Nemo.
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...why does that last panel somehow remind me of Dead Space...
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Pfft, I only WISH I was capable of the level of creepy and 'ohgodidon'twannago'roundthecorner' feeling Dead Space can produce, but thanks anyway! XD
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it was the fact that that femme is lacking her legs; she looks one of those creepy scorpion looking thingers from the game
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lol WHICH creepy thing?
I kinda only got to the freakishly creepy and haunting incubation room before I sent the game back to Gamefly. I'm such a wimp, but I just couldn't play this game because I was always scared to so much as peek around a corner.
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I've never played the game either XD I watched it on Youtube and laughed as a pair of guys played it. I'm not sure what it's called, but it crawls around on its belly and has a kind of tail...
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GFFFFFFFF LOOK OUT ORANGE AND BLACK.... character... that I forgot the name of.... THAR BE A PISSED VAMPIRIC BEASTIE BEHIND YA! DB *Flails, hand signals and waves every kind of warning sign involving arms possible and one or two ways some just weren't sure of.*
I like how Axis and his... Brainchild? act like they're total drinking buddies/partners
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That's Clyshot . And you are right, he and Axis have a bit of an odd relationship, despite Axis technically being his 'dad.'
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...how could I forget that name...? =A=;; s'like... so simple.
That happens alot, it seems, like a parent being mistaken as a sibling to their offspring...
Must mean Axis is a good dad... o_o *shrug.*
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Dude, it's cool. There are TONS of TF OCs roaming around so I'm not hurt if no one remembers mine.
That's really not how I'd describe it. Axis build Clyshot for a specific purpose--that I've yet to reveal to anyone other than ~Insanity-24-7 and ~Aaron-Smiley --so he tries to keep him around because he's useful and because he's put a lot of hours into creating him/keeping him functional. Clyshot's just kinda taken it all with a grain of salt and goes with it.
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