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Published: 2011-05-31 13:55:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 2990; Favourites: 63; Downloads: 52
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I am so unsure about this. Not only editing, composition and lighting are boring, also the pose is so ... unexpressive. I hate how it just won't work out.
Seems that I have to try even harder.Don't judge me.
PS: Second & very similar image will follow, I wasn't sure which one is better.
For *Sortvind 's 'water & clock' contest.
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photography & edit (c) me
model: Sheila.
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Well, I really think you are right.
there is some lack of dynamic in this piece.
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she looks like she's watching time pass by with the insecurity of what is to come and when the water's level may rise. It's beautiful!
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The Time II gefΓ€llt mir von der Bildaufteilung und uach von der Pose mehr, allerdings hat the time II einen schlechteren Fokus
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i actually think this is quite good, the way she is holding the watch is ,, wel i dont know but it certainly draws your attention to it, but the expression is a bit, well dull for lack of a better word to explain it, but all in all i would say it is fair at the very least
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i love this! it's so still and beautiful, i love how calm it all is despite the fact it's in water! took me a while to realise but it's lovely!
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Thank you a lot.
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you're welcome
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hmmm... I actually quite like the watch and the fact that she's in the water - I appriciate the idea behind it - it looks like she's realizing something very important.
I'm not judging - but just as an idea, it would be interesting to get a 3/4 turn view of the pic - would show her a bit better, change up the pose a little - but who the heck am I to say anything about photography?!
I also love the colors of the water and trees. 
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a 3/4 turn view? what do you mean?
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it's just a 3/4 view of the body - basically turning them slightly sideways so it's not a full front view of the body but it's not the profile either - it's waaay more simple than I'm explaning it. sorry.... hahaha just google it or something. It's just an idea. ah well. good luck on the contest!
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Oh, I got you!
Yes, maybe you're right.
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gutes Bild, ich mag auch dieses hier lieber als das andere. Auch wenn bei dem anderen ihr Gesicht schΓΆner aussieht, hier sieht es einfach interessanter aus, auch weil ihre Haare noch so ein bisschen zurΓΌckfliegen. Und die Uhr hΓ€lt sie hier auch besser. Ich hΓ€tte es noch schΓΆner gefunden wenn sie mittig gewesen wΓ€re, aber das ist wirklich Geschmackssache, ich mags lieber symmetrisch
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Ich mag bei der Komposition diese Dritte Regel total gerne, deswegen positioniere ich meine Models so gut wie immer auf der linken oder rechten Seite.
Schade, jetzt habe ich schon das andere eingesendet. :/ Naja, danke dir trotzdem!
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I saw both of these. And I think I preffer this one! Because shes not really looking at the camera it looks more natural and less like a pose. I really like this one 
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Thank you!
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The was she's looking is just not expressing enough
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Well, being in the water with that expression which is mystery is more worthy! The other photo is a bit boring to this one.
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Personally, I think the time II is better just because the model is more focused on the camera, and there's a bit more expression. To me, this just seems like a shot taken in between shots, like when the model was moving to pose - that's just the way I think things turned out.
But honestly, the lighting is excellent and I love the composition. It's not a bad photo!
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I prefer time II, too!
I'm glad you like it.
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I disagree. This photo is great.
The only problem I see is the facial expression seems a little forced. IMO, the emotion she was trying to convey fits with the picture, but it looks like she had to force that emotion on her face.
Other than that, I like it.
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Thank you a lot.
I am not quite sure, she said herself she wanted to express an ... emotion of being lost, with some insanity at some point, but just slightly.
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I see your recent doubts crippled you,huh?
Simple not always boring,you know,and this is your situation)
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Why? You haven't reasons for being in such feelings. Just not allowed)
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It's hard to not feel this way.
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What's happened with the boy who has a real talent?! And what's the real reason for your feelings? You worry because you have no bad feedbacks?
Be careful,talent can take offence at you)
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No, I'm worried because I don't really like my latest photos or I feel like they are not as good as other work I posted before.
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Well,everyone has moments as you have-it's just a crisis. But you're wrong,your latest photos are not worse than your previous works! One is better,another one is worse-everything is like before) You're a human,you can't always do everything perfect) But I repeat,you still make good photos and the thing is that their quality is different.
Don't give up!
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1. wo steht sie da drin? will auch!
2. Ich dahcte du wolltest keine 2 gleichen photos mehr hochladen D:
3. das konzept des bildes is geil aber cih hΓ€tte villeicht nochn bisschen mit licht und schatten rumgespielt, aber ok das kommt natΓΌrlich auch aufs wetter und tageslicht an. Aber ein bisschen mehr kontrast wΓ€re schΓΆn.
Ansonsten wie gesagt: geiles Konzept, gute arbeit vom modell...geiles wasser! Will auch!
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1. In einem See!
2. Ja, ich weiΓ auch nicht, ich konnte mich nicht entscheiden und das ist fΓΌr einen Wettbewerb.
3. Danke dir.
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I disagree with the photo being boring, since she is standing in a body of water, but her expression is a bit unnatural or rigid
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ich kann leider auch in der kleinen ansicht die uhr kaum richtig erkenne.. weil sie so ΓΌberbelichet ausschaut
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Hab sie ein wenig dunkler gemacht?
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OMG! Is she in a pond? Very original and brave!
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She's in a sea.
Thank you!
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uhm..I think the frame is not the best . Her body looks chopped in half . I do love her dress and the watch though
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