HOME | DD
NikolasBrummer — where did it go wrong?
Published: 2011-05-26 21:03:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 4145; Favourites: 109; Downloads: 93
Redirect to original
Description
Another photo with amazing Donna.
I kept this mostly unedited, I don't want to disturb my images with tons of tones and curves and i-don't-know-what. 
On a side note, I have a couple of other shoots to submit.
With Henrike for example.photography & edit (c) me
model: ~DonnaSingsAlong
- do not use my work without my permission!
Related content
Comments: 56
Vielen Dank für diese interessante Kritik, mir gefällt deine Interpretation total!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Nichts zu danken, Nikolas. Es macht Spaß, sich auf deine Fotos einzulassen, weil einfach eine Menge dahinter steckt.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
So jetzt komm ich mal zum Schreiben.
Hast mich sicher schon vermisst!
Ich liebe dieses Foto einfach! Wirklich! Alles passt so wunderbar zusammen, das Kleid, Donna und ihre Haare, das blühende Feld die Kette und dieses SCHIFF! (: Vorallem von den Farben echt toll. Und so eine schöne Idee!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Ich habe nicht gesehen, was Bo in deinem Foto wahrgenommen hat, aber mir gefällt die "Geschichte" dahinter. Und Donna ist einfach außergewöhnlich schön.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Jeder hat seine eigen Interpretation.
Trotzdem Vielen Dank!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Ein unglaublich schönes, sehr intensives Foto!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Aww, the title could be a hint for a background fictional story. 
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Oh, didn't even think of that.
But yup, it sounds nice. Thanks a lot!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Hehe, ever consider writing mini-stories for your pictures? :3
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
No, not really.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Aweh. Maybe I can help you come up with stuffs? :3
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
It's no the lack of inspiration, it's the lack of time!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Ouu. I sees. School busy?
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
*pats head* 'Tish okay.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
It's beautiful!! the only thing I would critique would be the use of lighting and color, which could have been emphasized more. But it's so expressive, and I like the scene/scenery
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Yes yes, I agree! I definately could have done more, although I'm still not sure what exactly.
But thank you, a lot!
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
the flowers remind me briefly of sea foam, so the nautical touch of the model is wonderous with this.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
ui, wieder so ein schönes bild
gefällt mir sehr gut mit dem schiff und die wiese passt irgendwie auch ganz schön dazu.
Ich ich hab n bisschen drüber nachgedacht, und obwohl ich zuerst dachte n bisschen bearbeitung würde deinen bildern ganz gut tun, find ichs eigentlich echt toll des du nicht so viel bearbeitest. mit digitalen farbspielereien kann man ja jedes bild verschönern, retouchieren oder manipulieren, aber deine fotos sind halt einfach von "natürlicher Schönheit", die wahren unverfäschten bilder der augenblicke eben. (das klingt irgendwie kitschig, aber ich wüsste nicht wie ich es besser ausdrücken soll)
Seh das nur ich so oder werden solche Bilder gegen dem trend zu digitalen effekten tatsächlich immer seltener?
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Vielen Dank!
Hier auf DeviantArt sehe ich auch noch ein paar 'natürliche' Bilder, die inspirieren mich dann einfach. Aber generell wüsste ich auch gar nicht, wie ich dieses Bild bearbeiten sollte, für mich ist ein Bild so schnell überbearbeitet ...
Freut mich, dass es dir so gefällt!
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Its nice! :3
I wanna be photographed by you too one day. ;D
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Yes yes, that will be fun!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
This is awesome!
I like the simplicity, actually, because it manages to capture things... in a graceful way, almost. The way you've off-centred her makes the composition greater and I like the colours of the background. It's just a small shame that the sky is so white and bright as it makes things slightly harsh, but I don't think it's that bad all in all.
Her expression is an intriguing one... it's almost uncertain, but not at the same time, as if she was trying to appeal to us in some way.
Profound stuff.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Towards the sky - I'm a fan of back-lighting, so I believe I will most likely never have a colorful sky. 
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
That's interesting...
Not really, no... I mean, you could integrate a blue one, but that requires manipulation.
I prefer a blue sky myself, but then that's just me. o.O
It depends, because the white can suck the colours out, almost. >.<
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Yes it's true. That's why I love sundowns.
And I'm looking forward to my new lense, maybe this will change everything a little.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
This reminds me of Eleanor Hardwick's work; it's amazing!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
I understand wanting to be able to say, "Oh yeah, this is SOOC."
but at the same time, sometimes tons of tones and curves and i-don't-know-what can help an image.
I'm gonna be a backseat driver for a sec. Kay? Kay.
With this image, for instance, I'd probably use curves to boost the blue tones in the image, and maybe a little red - because, that would create a lovely lavender tone to skim over the green, and (I think) would develop a melancholy feel to fit with her pose, and expression.
Oy.
A run-on sentence, too.
I'm sorry.
That being said, often I over-edit.
So. It's your art, do with it what you wish. : )
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
you, my dear, just gave me a perfect idea of how I could edit it.
Thank you very much, I appreciate it a lot!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
If you do edit it as such, I'd like to see it!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
I tried and failed.
So I edited it just slightly, no big difference now.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
confused the picture I'm sorry, I'm new at this
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
I like that song! on the photo, the color brings to life the feeling of the picture, reminds me of autumn, very beautiful.
mm, One question, you're from Argentina? (:
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Very beautiful! I really love the ship. And I totally agree with you on minimal editing. I try to do the same with mine!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
You're very welcome!
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
The colours and tones are pretty as always
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
| Next =>