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character reference sheet for the contest taking place inI hope you dont mind another Vulcan character >.<;
I have other characters , but this is the one I got the most information on and can work best with,
the comic for the audition round is already in progress too.
I also hope she isnt too sueish or anything ),:
other notes that didn't fit into the sheet:
in certain situation , she has a habit of taking risks wich could endanger her life. Aside from her unusual curiousity and risky actions , she is a tipical vulcan , very logical and so on. Because of her curiousity , she might try doing very random things , for example pokeing people ( after asking if she could ) to see their reaction , trying out strange foreign food and other similar amusing things.
Before she went to Starfleet , her ponytail used to go down to her knees , now she keeps it at her waist , so that in isnt in the way during work and away missions. the adornments she uses to keep it together may vary.
When she was young she used to tease her little brother to observe his reaction. She didnt keep it up for very long though , exept for some rare occasions.
her friend Levrance can be seen in this pic [link]
you can ask for more information if you wish
critiques on the character are very welcome
audition comic pg 1: [link]
round 1: [link]
round 2: [link]
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Wow, sie sieht wirklich nach einem interessanten Character aus, und ich bin gespannt, was du dir alles fΓΌr Storys ausgedacht hast. Und die Frisur ist cool.
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Oh no, this is soΒ old, I'm notΒ goingΒ to do anything withΒ itΒ any more.
Thank youΒ Β for theΒ offerΒ thoughΒ ^_^
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LOVE YOUR WORK! and it took me forever to find you back!
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I noticed that you gave her your own vision weakness.
It's not a bad thing to base a character off of real people's traits. It makes the characters more realistic. I quite like her design and bio.
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I love the layout you used here! It manages to have a lot going on but not look crowded or too busy.
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Beautiful! Her hair is so cool! I love the way you angled it in the back but still kept the ponytail.
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thank you C: , I'm glad you like her ^^
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I love how you designed her! What region is she from?
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Can ya tell me a little more about Levrance? If I do a short story it seems fitting that he'd be in it too...
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well what can I say about Levrance xD , he's kinda funny , ment to be a contrast to T'Vean in some way. He's kinda paranoid, get's histerical when he sees his own blood and gives off sarcastic comments. But he can control himself if someone else is in need of help. He will do anything he can to help his friends. he complains when T'Vean wants to go explore weird stuff , but comes along everytime because he cant just let her go off on her own incase something happens ( he is also abit curious , but denies it everytime someone says it ). You could say they got a similar friendchip to the one Spock and McCoy have , just ... nicer and more understanding XD and Levrance is pretty used to T'Vean since they've had to deal with eachother since they are in the academy.
other information would be that he has diabetes and is afraid of bugs and similar animals.
anything else?
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Man, even in the 25th century we haven't defeated diabetes? That sucks. I like him!
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XD he likes to look inside other people, but he doesnt like it when other people look into him, I guess he likes the simple insolin treatment , I dont know xD; haha
C=
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Very little is simple about insulin, it's hard life. Perhaps there could be some medical reason, may make a good character flaw...stuck on a planet...no insulin...very life threatening....
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yeeeeess~ *holds her hands in a ploting manner* muahahahaha
I guess that was the point of him still using it ;D
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Heehee, yer welcome.
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oOo she's quite nice and I think one of my favorites so far!
oh and BTW this amused me [link] scroll waaaaayyyy down to trakker' comment about the clothes!
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hahaha oh that Trakker xD
hehe swtich clothes
glad you like T'vean C:
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I just can't get the image of Fys in her shirt out of my head, it'd be like a mini dress on him@
and yes she's lovely!
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haha oh my , that wouldn't realy resolve his "dress" problem now would it xD
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nope-it'd just be a baggy micro dress then!
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Awesome!
I think I know what the favorite species in the Star Trek universe is....
VULCANS!!!
Lol everybody and their mother wishes they could have/be a Vulcan.
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well vulcans are cool xD and logical
hahaha but most of my other characters are human though, besides her family
T'Vean is the only vulcan character I got
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I find it too hard to get into a Vulcan's brain. Unless it's Spock's. I'm much better at being a human observing Vulcans.
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true again xD maybe that's why they are so popular =v=;
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Awesome! I agree with everyone else - the hair is really nifty. Very original and still very Vulcan looking.
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c: ich denke
jetzt weiΓ ich wie alt du bist~
ausser du hast dich dort jΓΌnger gemacht D:
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hahaha ,oh mein gott , nein , das ist nicht mein alter ;D
ausserdem soll die figur gar nicht ich sein =V
ich habe sie nur auf das star trek protrait bassiert weil mir das design so gefallen hat.
ich bin ganz anders als T'Vean xD , auserdem bin ich nur 1,68 groΓ XDD
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hab ich erst gedacht I:
mich wohl mal wieder i.woe verlesen xD;
xD achso
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First of all, don't worry about Sue-ing, or any of that silly nonsense. I personally don't give a fig about Mary-Sues. If you can take a character with a basic background and do something interesting with the story, then by all means.
*mutters a little*
Sorry. xD
Anyway! I happen to like Vulcans. 
I REALLY REALLY REALLY love her face. 
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thank you XD
I will try to make it original
me not being a good writer is kinda a problem though , it makes my dialogs sound
weird sometimes and my english vocabulary is rether limited too xD;
the audition comic will be in a slightly different style , and the coloring will be more complecated
I wanted to keep this ref simple ^^
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Hey, whatever works, and you think will work for you.
And don't worry about the dialog or English. If you have any more English-speaking people, you could run your entries by them first to make sure everything is good.
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Very interesting character and very believable. One small point, her brother can't be 11 years younger as Vulcans have Pon Farr every 7 years.
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I'm not sure but I think that it is possible for vulcans to mate outside of pon farr, I will have to check the memory alpha wiki again
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Yes, Vulcans can mate outside the 7-year cycle. xDD It's a common misconception, but it's perfectly understandable for her to have an oddly-yeared brother. ^^
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I'm sure pon'farr probably isnt followed to the exact letter by every vucan, mabye some have 5 or 10 year cycles lol
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actually the pon farr really is every seven years , and between 5-10 years.
I just think that it only starts after hitting the teenager age , a seven years old vulcan and pon farr just seems very weird and nonsencesicale.
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no sorry, i didnt mean pon'farr starting from age 5-10, i mean once they have started pon'farr'ing (17-20 mabye) after that, it could vary in 5-10 year gaps
which would explain your character having a sibling that is 11 years younger rather than 7, her parents delayed ponfarr for a couple of years lol
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If only I knew more sbout the Star Trek series but other than that, she is a pretty nice character~
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Wow! Awesome OC! Your drawing skills are amazing!
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thank you very much XD
I was getting worried about her being vulcan though , since we already got quite a few of them around as well as many female charecters );
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But what I really like about your character is that she ACTS Vulcan. If you read the bios, several of them are Vulcan but don't act it. And I have nothing against them for that, I look forward to seeing how each person portrays their character. I just enjoy seeing a Vulcan who acts Vulcan.
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I agree with you there C=
glad my character seems vulcan enough xD
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You mean she wasent fond of the miniskirt? how dissapointing lol judging by male attire though, shes from the Kirk era, pretty good, i never did like the one piece jumpsuits they ended up with :/
she seems quite nice, and doing thoses random teasing things would lead one to belive she possibly dose them with abit of reppressed enjoyment, aswell as reaction study XD
ponytail is nice, although id recon starfleet would keep badgering on that it should atleast be tied up in a bun or something, waist hair is still pretty easy to snag on stuff XD
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the female uniform was illogical ;D ruinning around in miniskirt on alien planets seems kinda weird. as for the Kirk era thing , The contest takes place in the TOS timeline , the character herself indeed exists around in that timeline , but she later one gets a diffrent uniform , one I designed myself C:
the hair is a family tradition D,: she can't cut it. At least she shortend it to about half of it's original length xD haha
thanks for the comment C=
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sorry i didnt mean cutting i mean doing like this [link] for on duty and away missions, long, and out the way X3
be good to see more, your character is very nice XD
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