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Published: 2012-03-16 00:17:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 26343; Favourites: 665; Downloads: 0
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Description Wheatley trailed off again, this time out of sheer shock. It was his turn to be speechless for a change, too astonished to do anything more than meet her grim, clear gaze. Her voice had been low but perfectly distinct, and it was plain from her expression that she wasn't about to repeat herself. She knew he'd heard. Her very look defied him to say any more, to ask for clarification, bargain, explain. As far as she was concerned, the subject was closed, no more needed to be said, and no more would be welcome. He'd offered his apology, and she'd set her terms; it was as simple as that.

She'd never spoken, never said a single word- down here. Here, where nothing else was under her control, not even the ground she stood on,where everything was demanded of her, her voice was the only thing she could always withhold. Even two short words felt like a jinx, a bad mistake, but she'd never had much truck with superstition anyway, and if he was coming with her this time she meant to make sure as hell he understood her terms.

Wheatley, for once in his life, took the hint.

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People have been requesting a link, so here it is! The first chapter: [link]

More Blue Sky because I can't resist. This is one of my favorite parts in the story. Chell don't take shit from NOBODY ya hear? Drawings robots is haaard. Especially ones that only have one eye.
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Comments: 76

MayBeHeir [2017-05-20 15:24:06 +0000 UTC]

I've figured out the best way to explain Wheatley and why I want to take him back on Earth: "He's a moron, but he's OUR moron"

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JuliusxKarina [2016-10-14 14:32:36 +0000 UTC]

Is that wheatley?

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Melina-the-Thief In reply to JuliusxKarina [2016-10-18 23:06:28 +0000 UTC]

Yes.

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Araceku [2015-11-22 19:31:12 +0000 UTC]

this is so perfect!

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MintyBlu3 [2015-10-18 22:07:28 +0000 UTC]

   whyyy whyy is diisss so... umg feels.

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Spacey-Xannabelle [2014-09-18 10:14:24 +0000 UTC]

One word : AMAZING!!!!!!!!!

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Araceku [2014-07-08 23:40:43 +0000 UTC]

"Prove it"
The first words Chell ever said to the moron core.

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bbeartusks [2014-05-25 18:17:37 +0000 UTC]

Ahhh this is amazing ; u ;

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LadyMaid-of-Pokemon [2014-03-11 01:53:59 +0000 UTC]

best pic ive seen in awhile!

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Angel-Sorano [2014-02-18 08:42:33 +0000 UTC]

Fantastic! 

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JOCKPRIEST [2013-09-08 19:20:36 +0000 UTC]

This is excellent! SO much raw emotion portrayed through both Chell and Wheatley's expressions... awesome work!

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xXxJennyGirlxXx [2013-08-05 03:34:28 +0000 UTC]

Wait did she..... Speak?

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ZoicZeph [2013-07-11 18:09:12 +0000 UTC]

You did a great job! I LIEK ITZ.

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iSpazzyKitty [2013-02-05 00:36:47 +0000 UTC]

I love this so much! You did really great illustrating this wonderful scene!

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ThePumpkinQueen712 [2013-01-22 06:17:55 +0000 UTC]

You. YOU ARE THE EVIL PERSON WHO MADE ME READ "BLUE SKY"! I'm still crying... *sobs in desolate corner*

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Kittybabe45 [2012-12-30 04:10:37 +0000 UTC]

I am reading this fanfiction now!

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TheBattyCrow [2012-11-20 21:28:57 +0000 UTC]

Awesome how you portrayed this moment^^ I remember my jaw hitting the table when I read this part.
"WHa-wha-whaaaat? Chell SPEAKS?!"
Brazilliant^^

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MadamMayh3m [2012-10-03 02:33:55 +0000 UTC]

Urgh, if I was as awesome as you, I would do a whole freaking blue sky comic. I mean, this literally made my jaw drop the first time I saw it.

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dulce-de-amaranto [2012-06-18 04:14:34 +0000 UTC]

I just wanted to say thank you for this nice piece of fanart, and for introducing me to that piece of pure awesome that is Blue Sky... This drawing intrigued me and made me want to know more about it and wow!... seriously, that fic now is my favorite! I'm blown away by the quantity of fanart that exist for it!

About this piece, I liked how it is drawn in shades of blue, and the expression in Chell's face (specially the last panel). She sure is a lady of few words, right? And of course, I like Wheatley's faces too, even if he's a core you could still feel the guilt transpiring from his face. Great job!

(LOL, your comment at the end makes me laugh so hard) :3

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AlanonSilverblood [2012-06-11 03:41:29 +0000 UTC]

That's so perfect.
Wheatley's speechless face, however brief, if amazing.

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msfcatlover [2012-05-22 03:47:47 +0000 UTC]

You. My friend. Have won.
For perfectly rendering this scene to the point where my jaw, literally, dropped.
Have some cake.

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Melina-the-Thief In reply to msfcatlover [2016-10-18 23:07:10 +0000 UTC]

The cake is a lie. :/

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kittyinequestria [2012-04-12 03:58:18 +0000 UTC]

Wheatley is also a moron. Don't deny it, Wheatley. You know it to be true.

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onthefritz [2012-04-01 04:35:12 +0000 UTC]

This is wonderful ;___;! Love the way the draw Wheatley's expressions especially. They're perfect! The whole thing is really heartfelt.

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SafaiaSeidenki [2012-03-28 04:15:13 +0000 UTC]

I'm so envious of the way you draw Wheatley's expressions. Perfect.

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Pyore [2012-03-27 07:37:01 +0000 UTC]

P-perfect....This catches the moment perfectly...Her Facial Expression on the last panel, it's the detemined look of a broken and a bit untrusted Chell...Perfect, even the core expressions are impressive! Totally gonna fav that!

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halley42 [2012-03-26 09:07:12 +0000 UTC]

Baaahhhh this is absolutely lovely. I love Chell's expressions, particularly in the last panel, and Wheatley's 'face' is really expressive. I think you really captured how the scene went (in my head, anyway)- great job!

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nooby-banana In reply to halley42 [2012-03-26 19:13:27 +0000 UTC]

Wow, thank you! It's awesome to know that the author approves. I really wanted to include some of went on in Chell's head after Wheatley's apology, but I couldn't think of how to make it flow with the rest of the comic's style. Maybe I'll make an updated version later, because seriously that scene is amazing.

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Amuris [2012-03-24 04:15:29 +0000 UTC]

Chapter is quite well written, your art compliments that. ^^

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Dragonling140 [2012-03-19 21:01:37 +0000 UTC]

Holy crap, that fanfic! I JUST read it, like, yesterday. Amazing job, especially on getting Wheatley to emote.

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Jeremy-Burner [2012-03-19 11:50:59 +0000 UTC]

love it

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Tiedie-r-die-tonight [2012-03-17 21:25:34 +0000 UTC]

I love this. Both their expressions are brilliant. Pitch-perfection. And the fact that it's Blue Sky art makes it awesome in my book.

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darkfire-kitty [2012-03-17 16:49:18 +0000 UTC]

I saw this picture at nine last night and, because of that, i went to sleep at about five in the morning, then woke up at ten to read the last four chapters.

I CANNOT.
THANK YOU.
ENOUGH.

That was the best fanfiction I've read to-date, without a doubt - and your comic captured the emotions (and my attention) perfectly!!

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nooby-banana In reply to darkfire-kitty [2012-03-17 20:05:44 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha, I did the exact same thing! Between classes and homework all I did was read this for two days straight. I seriously have never read a better fic. Hell, it's better than some published works I've read.

I'm glad my artwork was able to grab your interest!

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Aryashi [2012-03-17 15:32:00 +0000 UTC]

DUDE. DUDE. OR DUDETE, I DON"T KNOW YOU.

This. Is. AWESOME.

The expressions on both Wheatley and Chell are so subtle and nuanced that I can't even believe it. I mean, this is one of my favorite moments in the entire fic, and you capture it absolutely perfectly! I'm going to link this to Waffles right NOW!

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nooby-banana In reply to Aryashi [2012-03-17 20:03:42 +0000 UTC]

Wow, thank you very much! I tried especially hard on Chell's final expression. I wanted it to convey that she very much remembers what he did and that she's still quite hurt and angry about it. This is one of the scenes I REALLY want to animate once the audiobook is released.

And eep, thanks for showing it to Waffles! ^_^

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Aryashi In reply to nooby-banana [2012-03-17 21:57:38 +0000 UTC]

you're going to animate this...? 0_0


.... AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!!!!

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nooby-banana In reply to Aryashi [2012-03-17 22:32:25 +0000 UTC]

Yes indeed! Well that's the PLAN anyway. They have to release the audiobook first.

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Aryashi In reply to nooby-banana [2012-03-17 23:23:30 +0000 UTC]

Well, I'm eagerly looking forward to both!

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wacky-w [2012-03-17 14:34:23 +0000 UTC]

sakjgfdifjlahlfhahg This is so beautiful! You've drawn this tender scene so well! Fantastic work!

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nooby-banana In reply to wacky-w [2012-03-17 20:06:55 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much!

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wacky-w In reply to nooby-banana [2012-03-17 21:09:17 +0000 UTC]

No trouble at all

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Rathdrgnknight [2012-03-17 05:41:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for hooking me on this fanfiction. SO. GOOD. *is obsessed*

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nooby-banana In reply to Rathdrgnknight [2012-03-17 08:57:44 +0000 UTC]

Haha, it really is! I'm glad that I'm able to get a few more people to enjoy this story.

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Rathdrgnknight In reply to nooby-banana [2012-03-17 09:05:42 +0000 UTC]

Can't wait for the audio book of it. It's probably the only way I'll get my portal-obsessed boyfriend to take any interest in it.

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nooby-banana In reply to Rathdrgnknight [2012-03-17 09:20:09 +0000 UTC]

Oh my gosh I knooowwww. I freaked when I found out about the audiobook. Have you listened to the cast yet? Pretty amazing stuff. I spoke with one of the producers and got permission to use the sound files, so I'm actually planning on animating a few scenes from the audiobook whenever they release it.

This whole story just *begs* to be animated.

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Rathdrgnknight In reply to nooby-banana [2012-03-17 17:36:35 +0000 UTC]

I KNOW! I kept imagining how the animations would look in my head. I now have several pieces of paper doodled all over with fanart. XD Most of them are me trying to figure out what human!Wheatley looks like, though, since I don't really want to copy everyone else, but I do picture him as a Stephen Merchant caricature...

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nooby-banana In reply to Rathdrgnknight [2012-03-17 20:00:32 +0000 UTC]

Well even the TVtropes page says this Wheatley takes a lot of physical characteristics from Stephen, so it'll probably be more accurate to the story for them to look alike. xD

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Rathdrgnknight In reply to nooby-banana [2012-03-18 06:22:28 +0000 UTC]

True. (I couldn't help it after reading the in-story description, lol)

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Whimsy-Floof [2012-03-16 13:55:03 +0000 UTC]

I want a link to this fanfic. It looks awesome. D:

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