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NordicAngel — Vampire.
Published: 2005-11-11 22:51:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 15477; Favourites: 328; Downloads: 55
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Blood.Seeping slowly from two holes in his neck.
I see bitemarks.
My bitemarks.
I lick my lips.
Metallic taste.
He didn’t fight me.
Thought I wanted a one night stand.
I was just hungry.
He yelped when I sank my fangs into his neck.
His heart started beating.
He fainted.
Became heavy, but that was no problem.
I pushed him firmly against the brick wall.
Sucked him almost dry.
Blood is best when the heart is still beating.
It’s fresh.
The police won’t find anything after me.
Except for the bitemarks.
I’m a creature of the night.
Mysterious.
I’m on the prey again next night looking for more delicious blood.
I am a vampire.
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lol your funny but i really did make that when i was bored and tired out of me flip en mind
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ya but not when your also half asleep
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try making a story falling asleep at 1 am
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Hehehehe.
I create stories in my head, to be able to fall asleep at 1 a.m. XP
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i do that and forget them
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Me too!
And I'm usually more creative when I'm supposed to sleep, so when I wake up the next morning I know I thought of something genious but I forget them! Irritating...
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yes i do that but i get from the dreams that i have
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oh wow! we're like the same person gust in two diffrent bodys
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Hehehehehe, I know!
Weird huh?
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oh ya but you should see me and some of me friends we're called the separated twins.
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Heheheh. That's kinda awesome!
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ya we are the complete opposite of each other but me think the samething at the same time
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Cool! A deep connection, I see.
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ya but ya ...................................... never mind
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well you are i'm not kiding
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I thank thee for the warm comment.
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love this! i totally Love vampires, i really wish i was one, wish they were real. love this poem, very poetic and beautiful
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Thank you very much, I really appreciate your feedback!
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vampire's are wonderful.
blood.... it tastes so good...... sunlight hurts my eyes and makes me sleepy..... even if im tired as soon as its dark im wide awake....... man, maybe id be better off as a vampire
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Maybe, maybe not. Its not for everybody.
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SPAZ! I love what you did!
I once read a book sorta like the idea behind your poem.
it was called the Silver Kiss GOOD BOOK!!!
U HAVEN"T READ TWILIGHT?!?!
good, New Moon is better
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I've read The Silver Kiss. Good book
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Hehehe, I'm glad you did!
I haven't read any of those books so... ^_^
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wow... this is really good! Straight and to the point, but not bland. Very poetic!
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Thank you, I'm glad you took the time to comment! ^_^
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my frind loves your writeing ^^
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Thank you, I'm glad she/he does. ^_^
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he lol, does likes it to just let u know lol i showed him it ^%5Pr
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That makes me all warm and fuzzy inside. I'm glad someone likes what I've done. ^^
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Thank you for the heart-warming comment, I really appreciate it!
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