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This is my entry for the "Mystery of the Far East" by lucretia-stock and alegion-stock

A Detailed Close-up of her Face and an Animated GIF of the image creation progress is HERE

The stock image had such an emotional quality I wanted my image to portrayed that ...the Geisha's whole stance captured a feeling of release and joy.

I also wanted to incorporate a Haiku feeling; simple with subtle depths. The title is derived from the Haiku I wrote for the image (see below). It is almost too cliche but I couldn't resist

I had a lot of trouble with the hair ... I tried to do a traditional Geisha Wig and then have it look windblown ... not as easy as I thought it would be! The make-up is less traditional than I originally had planned ...just did not work with the emotion in the piece so it is modified and I hope the Traditionalist out there will forgive me.

Last but not least I wrote a Haiku (my very first and with help from A word about haiku - by Michael James plus I noted him and he was kind enough to respond and it helped a lot. Any errors in the style and format of the poem are all mine ...and the title is not for the Haiku but the image as I don't believe you are suppose to give Haiku a title!

Spring wind moves
Winter clouds
Soon the dragonflies!


The wonderful images that inspired this piece are from

The Geisha: lucretia-stock Grass Hill: Alegion-stock

The Sky is altered from an image of my own over an extension of the original Alegion image to create a "raincloud" look. The Hairpiece is created from her dress and drawn in PS

View all contest entries here: lucretia-stock.deviantart.com/… )

Please, absolutely no reproduction, copying or duplication of this image, in part or in whole, without my permission and written consent! My images are not Free Domain!
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Comments: 119

NTGreen In reply to ??? [2013-02-10 23:48:07 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for the lovely comment ... it means a lot to me and particularly coming from such a wonderful artist!

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Stolvezen [2012-12-15 10:20:56 +0000 UTC]

Very nice !

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mogster58 [2012-07-09 08:41:49 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful, love the colour and movement you have created here!

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saiomshriver [2012-02-24 07:34:21 +0000 UTC]

sublime

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SilentPlea [2011-02-24 21:09:20 +0000 UTC]

Featured [link]

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hereisanoop [2010-11-23 03:30:19 +0000 UTC]

I will not forget this....... such a beautiful creation...

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Amaranthiel [2009-07-06 12:24:21 +0000 UTC]

this is gorgeous I love the clouds!

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NTGreen In reply to Amaranthiel [2009-07-09 07:32:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! Big Hug!

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waterdrup [2009-02-23 11:59:40 +0000 UTC]

wow that's amazing! I can't stop looking at the beautiful dress ^^
and the details of the grass made my mouth fall open XO
really lovely job!

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NTGreen In reply to waterdrup [2009-02-24 09:40:18 +0000 UTC]

The original dress on the stock provider is what drew me to it ... but it just called out to have more movement! And the photo by ~Alegion-stock of the seascape was a perfect setting to allow me to add that movement.

Again ... thank you so much!!!

Many more hugs!!!

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waterdrup In reply to NTGreen [2009-02-24 11:26:04 +0000 UTC]

you're so very welcome!

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Sitara-LeotaStock [2009-02-03 03:22:22 +0000 UTC]

Wow, this is so stunning. The colours are beautiful.

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NTGreen In reply to Sitara-LeotaStock [2009-02-03 07:10:00 +0000 UTC]



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viaviolet [2008-12-03 23:11:19 +0000 UTC]

A standard message, just to let you know,that this work of you has been featured in my newest journal !!!

Via

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NTGreen In reply to viaviolet [2008-12-05 22:54:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!!! What a lovely journal! I am still hoping to someday learn about CSS ... I have copied the links you have on learning CSS ... the Tips and Tricks link is pretty cool too!!!!

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viaviolet In reply to NTGreen [2008-12-05 23:11:31 +0000 UTC]

he he he I hope also to learn some day CSS coding ... this journal is just a journal template by=kjherstin . She has also other styles,they are pertty also... But I m glad ,that the links in my journal could be useful for you ...


Via

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NTGreen In reply to viaviolet [2008-12-11 05:32:32 +0000 UTC]



Well ... I had great plans to do some CSS work last weekend and then my Computer crashed so have spent the last 5 days working on it!

I am almost done ... thank you for the link to :kjherstin: her Site is great ... lovely work and very informative!

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Sathoro In reply to NTGreen [2009-01-17 04:09:14 +0000 UTC]

Hey I am basically fluent in CSS so if you need any help at all feel free to just ask me

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NTGreen In reply to Sathoro [2009-01-20 08:07:54 +0000 UTC]

I will keep that in mind! THANK YOU! I won one but I've been very neglectful about persueing it. I had an idea and then life just got in the way and I got busy with stuff. I have to note the wonderful lady that donated it and see what we can come up with.

But again Thank you ... I will definately keep your offer in my files as I am sure I will need help when I finally get around to it!

Many hugs!

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Sathoro In reply to NTGreen [2009-01-20 13:09:01 +0000 UTC]

Ok then, I would be glad to help anytime

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NTGreen In reply to Sathoro [2009-01-21 00:27:46 +0000 UTC]

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viaviolet In reply to NTGreen [2008-12-16 19:25:56 +0000 UTC]

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Mind-Illusi0nZ [2008-11-20 16:04:54 +0000 UTC]

Hello I came by to inform you that your wonderful work has been submitted to my news

article

article can be found here [link]

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NTGreen In reply to Mind-Illusi0nZ [2008-11-20 19:42:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so very, very much

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Mind-Illusi0nZ In reply to NTGreen [2008-11-20 19:47:06 +0000 UTC]

woohoo thanks for all the hugs

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NTGreen In reply to Mind-Illusi0nZ [2008-11-25 00:06:36 +0000 UTC]

Always have lots of hugs to go around ... where did you get those wonderful emoticons! I really want to learn how to do that!!!!

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Mind-Illusi0nZ In reply to NTGreen [2008-11-25 01:04:13 +0000 UTC]

all around da lol just kinda collect as I go

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NTGreen In reply to Mind-Illusi0nZ [2008-12-05 23:27:30 +0000 UTC]

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Mystik-Rider [2008-11-08 11:30:49 +0000 UTC]

Ooh wow! Cindy, this is really superbbbb! The colors are gorgeous, I love it!

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NTGreen In reply to Mystik-Rider [2008-11-15 20:15:28 +0000 UTC]

Thanks you so much Hugs!

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Amazonofexeter [2008-10-04 14:36:38 +0000 UTC]

Gorgeous!!

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NTGreen In reply to Amazonofexeter [2008-10-05 05:29:42 +0000 UTC]

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Amazonofexeter In reply to NTGreen [2008-12-07 20:16:21 +0000 UTC]

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j3ff3rson [2008-09-24 21:33:21 +0000 UTC]

Really so beautiful

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NTGreen In reply to j3ff3rson [2008-09-25 00:45:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much !

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rammkitty-stock [2008-09-17 12:00:29 +0000 UTC]

this is so stunning, the colors are amazing :]

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NTGreen In reply to rammkitty-stock [2008-09-22 06:34:37 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ... she was a true joy to create!

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Sheishido [2008-09-14 08:57:11 +0000 UTC]

beautiful!! congrats on the win

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NTGreen In reply to Sheishido [2008-09-22 06:31:57 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!!!

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Sheishido In reply to NTGreen [2008-09-28 10:10:10 +0000 UTC]

ur welcome

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AndytheLemon [2008-09-09 18:45:24 +0000 UTC]

I love this!

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NTGreen In reply to AndytheLemon [2008-09-22 06:32:18 +0000 UTC]

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Ouroborealis [2008-09-08 04:16:47 +0000 UTC]

I love the colors you used on this, its simply dazzing for the eye. I can only hope to master a similar palette some day.

The details are spectacular too, the flow of the robe and the appropriate distortions of the patterns on the robe, it was very ambitious and executed flawlessly.

Finally the composition is intelligently done as well, my eyes are always pulled to the paleness of her face, but then continue to cycle around the picture eating up all the details one after another.

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NTGreen In reply to Ouroborealis [2008-09-09 05:31:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for the detailed and well thought out comment ... it is so nice to get an idea of what other people "see" in my artwork! Thanks again!

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Ouroborealis In reply to NTGreen [2008-09-20 23:18:22 +0000 UTC]

YAY!! Please critique mine just so! I need improvement if I'm to succeed in this cutthroat world!

!

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NTGreen In reply to Ouroborealis [2008-10-05 05:59:12 +0000 UTC]

I have a very hard time critiquing others work (although I can alway see something wrong with my own ) ... I am always concerned that I will hurt someones feelings.

More importantly though; I believe that art is very hard to "judge". I can like something even when I KNOW it is not correct in some way (composition, colour, technique, etc.) this makes me very reluctant to voice an opinion. Seeing the beauty in art is soooooo subjective and personal I prefer to stand back and enjoy as much of it as possible.

I guess my problem is I am not "cutthroat" enough

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Ouroborealis In reply to NTGreen [2008-11-04 07:07:15 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

Well "critique" to me doesn't necessarily mean to judge as much as to interpret, but I still dont' mind any additional commentary to help improve whatever interpretation occurs.

I'm sorry it took so long for me to reply, i've had a very busy month.

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NTGreen In reply to Ouroborealis [2008-11-04 07:14:58 +0000 UTC]

Never worry about late replies ... I have been very tardy myself of late. New job and just tired ... getting use to winter. I feel like a bear and I want to hibernate. Bye for now

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Ouroborealis In reply to NTGreen [2008-11-05 05:11:45 +0000 UTC]

lucky lucky i wish i had a job @_@ im so poor it isnt even funny anymore lol.

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Biomech44 [2008-09-07 00:44:11 +0000 UTC]

Truly stunning.So elegant and beautiful and wonderfully expressive.Gorgeously painted with truly lovely details,rich palette and lighting,and amazing feeling of movement..you can truly feel the breeze blowing her hair and clothes,bending the grass..truly wonderful and realistic fluid motion.Such a wonderful sense of emotion,of dreams and wishes,freedom,and a new beginning.Such a magical artwork I'm not surprised it received first prize ,congratulations ,it's truly amazing.Absolutely magical and stunning

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