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OmicronWanderer — Volteer version 4

Published: 2013-09-02 03:20:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 835; Favourites: 36; Downloads: 0
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Description alright. more harsh critique please.

tattered wing membranes and scales will be worked on after the base model is complete. Same with any textures(stripes scars etc.)
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Comments: 13

Spyro1267 [2013-09-07 17:45:10 +0000 UTC]

nice

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NeilFinnArt [2013-09-03 02:54:34 +0000 UTC]

I see nothing wrong with it anymore. I think it's worthy to be put into the film

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MetaKirby1998 [2013-09-02 16:37:41 +0000 UTC]

Now it's better ^^

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Kahunaangelica [2013-09-02 05:27:11 +0000 UTC]

Yech

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XxTheReptileGirlxX [2013-09-02 04:18:55 +0000 UTC]

Wait, I made a mistake, don't change the shoulder fins!

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OmicronWanderer In reply to XxTheReptileGirlxX [2013-09-02 14:23:53 +0000 UTC]

don't worry I wasn't awake yet. national holidays are amazing for getting nothing done.

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XxTheReptileGirlxX In reply to OmicronWanderer [2013-09-02 16:47:18 +0000 UTC]

xD We don't celebrate that in Canada. Also, the top part of his mouth, she be pointed like a beak. His bottom jaw is perfect shape.


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OmicronWanderer In reply to XxTheReptileGirlxX [2013-09-02 18:34:02 +0000 UTC]

haha. I figured that. either way I have time to work on something other than class or witnessing the flow of capitalism first-hand.

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XxTheReptileGirlxX In reply to OmicronWanderer [2013-09-02 21:07:16 +0000 UTC]

Judah I'll bet,min nt excited for school hurrrrrrr. Two more days then back in the slammer of school.

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XxTheReptileGirlxX [2013-09-02 03:56:23 +0000 UTC]

His head is defiantly looking better, now I see the problem with his eyes. They are still too small, but they are also waaaaaay too far apart. That is the main thing causing the creepy eye look. His scalebrows should be longer, same goes for his fin side burns. His side burns should look as if like a fish's fins. His large pair of horns are PERFECT, I hope you saw that in the head reference I posted. His goatee isn't like a side, but are fins like his side burns. The horns on the very top of his head should be slightly wider and taller. His chest plate now when I look at it, they remind me of old wrinkly anime boobs. I'll draw a reference for his chest plate tonight. His thumbs on his wings don't look right, they should be bigger looking. His snout still doesn't look quiet right, check out his head reference again. His fin shoulders should go downwards, not upwards. His front toes need to be closer together, or they just look really creepy or funny looking. Over all, the model is turning into the Volteer we know of! Thank you for all your hard work into this, as it means a lot to us on the team.

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Trix-Master [2013-09-02 03:24:37 +0000 UTC]

Stripes? At least I think Volteer had stripe in the legend of Spyro.

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OmicronWanderer In reply to Trix-Master [2013-09-02 03:38:08 +0000 UTC]

this is just the model. no textures yet.

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Trix-Master In reply to OmicronWanderer [2013-09-02 03:44:34 +0000 UTC]

Oh okay.

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