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Published: 2013-09-20 23:39:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 2775; Favourites: 40; Downloads: 0
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Near is a detective, now going about trying to solve a murder which is connected to an old case of L's which L himself thought wasn't finished, even though the murderer was tried and convicted.Years later when the felon is already executed, a hacker broadcasts a message indicating that while guilty, their death played a part in a bigger plot.
Near follows these bread crumbs until he comes to see an elaborate government organization spanning several nations unbeknownst to even the CIA.
He follows further to find out the identity of an Assassin named Red Witch; famous for killing his victims in what look like horrific accidents, like hexing them.
The more puzzle pieces he puts together, and the more moves he makes, the more he realizes that this is again, a fierce game, with a fast moving timer, and it's and it's on him to solve this mystery that L trusted to him before passing, yet again.
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From left to right: at the top going down
Commissioner Matsuda, now older and married to Sayu, not wanting her or her family anywhere near this but fearing that danger will come regardless, then Yurika Alinhardt the HΓ€schen. She's a hacker who's evaded Interpol, CIA, Assassins, even Near who discovers that she was nearly caught by L, but L let her go after telling him something.
The body of Moira O'kersh, a cop and undercover agent. Red Witch himself, smoking a cigar, a corpse which is one of many Near has been finding, leading him to believe that the movement of Kira is not nearly as unorganized as anyone surmised.
And another body and bones of a past victim.
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Comments: 28
Carmetsys [2013-10-04 11:52:49 +0000 UTC]
Wait, is that a fan-made story concept? So friggin' cool.
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Omnipotrent In reply to Carmetsys [2013-10-04 12:36:48 +0000 UTC]
Yes it is, thanks
I have more on the way, what do you think of the story line?
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Carmetsys In reply to Omnipotrent [2013-10-06 21:20:22 +0000 UTC]
It is intriguing! I seriously thought I'd missed one of the original spin-offs, it was so meticulously thought out. I like how you think that far into the characters' futures, totally believable. It's also interesting that Red 'Witch' is in fact a guy, one that looks like Mello from behind (was that intentional?)
By all means, go ahead.~
A question, btw: is the serial killer Red Witch have anything to do with Kira, or is this a separate case entirely, like the LABB murder cases?
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Omnipotrent In reply to Carmetsys [2013-10-06 21:51:17 +0000 UTC]
It was not intentional, but i'm finding that i may apply the uniqueness of that fact later on.
And as for relation to Kira, no he's just a very lethal genius gun for hire
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Carmetsys In reply to Omnipotrent [2013-10-08 12:30:41 +0000 UTC]
He should be a genius to have escaped conviction during Kira's reign. Or perhaps he started up long afterwards...
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Omnipotrent In reply to Carmetsys [2013-10-08 19:28:50 +0000 UTC]
oh he just faked his own death until Kira was out of the way, and went on very nicely in his life being an architect, and a college professor Β
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IvySoars [2013-10-02 19:37:42 +0000 UTC]
This is just excellent, the chessboard theme fits Near perfectly!
INSTANT FAV!
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Omnipotrent In reply to IvySoars [2013-10-02 20:50:34 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, do you have any questions about the characters on it?
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IvySoars In reply to Omnipotrent [2013-10-02 21:02:33 +0000 UTC]
Yes, did Mello get revived because I think I see him standing there.
And who is that man waaay in the background with the other man using a laptop?
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Omnipotrent In reply to IvySoars [2013-10-02 21:41:52 +0000 UTC]
The man on the laptop is Haschen, the woman hacker actually, he's been trying to get her in check a long time, and she evades with ease without having to leave her computer room sometimes.
The man in the far back is Matsuda, now commissioner of police and the husband of Saiyu Yagami. Β He doesn't want his new family involved in this but unfortunately fate knocks on their door a little to hard.
Red Witch, is the man to the left, not the fallen Mello.
Red Witch is the alias of an assassin who is famous for killing his targets in what seem like horrible accidents, like he's hexing them.
He's of french/south african decent and VERY good.
The body is an undercover cop who was killed when she got to close to a cult following Kira's ideals
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IvySoars In reply to Omnipotrent [2013-10-02 21:53:00 +0000 UTC]
Ah so the person on the laptop hacking is the woman named Hashen, and Matsuda is still working for Near. I wasn't surprised he would be married to Saiyu.
Too bad him and his new family are going to have some troubles in the future of your story.
Red Witch sounds like a badass character, so is his weapon of choice a shovel?
Was the undercover cop killed by someone else with a Death Note?
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Omnipotrent In reply to IvySoars [2013-10-02 21:59:42 +0000 UTC]
Of course he is, i mean allot of troubles came about,
him wondering if he's worthy after helping Kira all those years without knowing who he was, but being the one to turn on him and kill him apparently went along way with Japan's justiceΒ
bureau. Β However he does decide that Mr. Yagami would've wanted him to prevent other Kira's from springing up, so he does.
Saiyu was traumatized of course to find out that her brother was Kira, and became recluse, only her mother seemed to get through to her, however Matsuda kept coming with her to home group and rehab, and the two formed a strange bond having been the only people they know who were that close to this, and both were so sorry for the others involvement in the affairs. It began to feel like they were the only ones in the world who understood each other so they became a couple.
No Red Witch is just finishing up burying a body.Β
And no she wasn't, just a cultist using a fire poker.
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IvySoars In reply to Omnipotrent [2013-10-02 22:05:32 +0000 UTC]
That kind of progress on a character from your own ideas gets an A+ from me.
And the slow progress in romance makes it better.
I have this weird feeling that the cult that follows Kira will be using human sacrifices or they try to "purify" non believers.
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Omnipotrent In reply to IvySoars [2013-10-02 22:07:49 +0000 UTC]
Hmm, it's more like a right of passage, you kill those who deserve death, that the Justice system has failed to punish, and or someone who threatens the order.
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IvySoars In reply to Omnipotrent [2013-10-02 22:11:32 +0000 UTC]
If one doesn't believe in Kira does the order think it's a threat to their own religion?
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Omnipotrent In reply to IvySoars [2013-10-02 22:12:55 +0000 UTC]
No, more like openly oppose it, or pose a considerable threat to them in terms of trying to find them out or shutting them down
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IvySoars In reply to Omnipotrent [2013-10-02 22:25:12 +0000 UTC]
This will be one heck of a ride, Near better watch out because his new foes are getting a bit more crafty.
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Omnipotrent In reply to IvySoars [2013-10-02 22:57:51 +0000 UTC]
Oh he's brilliant enough, but this was a plot set in motion long before he became L
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rumRei [2013-09-28 14:52:42 +0000 UTC]
this is genius! i love the chessboard concept, I find that that was brilliant!
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Omnipotrent In reply to rumRei [2013-09-30 02:47:33 +0000 UTC]
THank you kindly!!!
more to come!!
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Traillbits [2013-09-25 21:28:39 +0000 UTC]
I like the concept and metaphor as they're chess pieces on a board.
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Omnipotrent In reply to Traillbits [2013-09-26 00:16:54 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, want to know who each character is?
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Omnipotrent In reply to Traillbits [2013-10-03 04:12:14 +0000 UTC]
Okay the guy at the top is Matsuda, he's the one in the distance in black and white, he's married to Saiyu Yagami now.
The guy in the Red is the Red Witch, the name of an assassin who kills his victims in horrific ways that look like accidents, "hexing" them.
The woman dead on the board is an under cover agent for the CIA who was found out by a Kira cult and killed.
The woman crosslegged is Haschen, the hacker, she's the on Near is pursuing through out the story.
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