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Omnipotrent β€” The Batman:Yin vs. Talia (partially colored)

Published: 2013-09-10 22:08:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 4800; Favourites: 104; Downloads: 14
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Description This is a partially colored piece in a series I'm doing involving The Batman, and the League of Shadows and exploring what it took for Bruce Wayne to be the Batman, involving old friends like Harvey Dent and Enemies like HUSH.

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Yin skidded her magazine casing across the floor, so as to make a roller chair rotate when it hit the wheel. The moment Talia's gun was trained on the chair to take a shot, Yin lept completly over the desk and hurled herself at the assassin, she used the butt of her gun to move the katana out of the way, and used her other hand to hold the pistol's nozzle away from her, the two women grappled fiercely at first, bumping into desks and trying to loop each others legs, or kick each other, and subsequently blocking each others kicks with their own legs, all the while trying to get each others weapon hands free.

Finally Talia got her Katana free and swiped at Yin's head making her bend backwards to avoid it, but doing so she flipped herself up and kicked Talia in he face. Talia took the kit but replied by firing 3 shots into the floor too close to Yin's foot for comfort.

Yin delivered another kick to Talia's gut but Talia blocked it with her gun hand and was going to pull the trigger a fourth time when Yin arm locked her Katana Arm again.

Talia head butted Yin, then inverted her blade in an attempt to stab Yin in the back with it while her arm was on the other side of her.

Yin simply contorted her body on to the desk near them, which was a gamble she knew, but succeeded in hurting Talia's wrist enough to release the blade, even though Yin felt the edge nick her side a little doing so.

She rolled away from the desk and began to wrestle the pistol in Talia's hand.

Too be continued
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Comments: 38

MartyrFan [2017-07-24 04:26:36 +0000 UTC]

Oh man, I was looking everywhere for these! I came across this stuff a few months back and then completely lost it. I really like The Batman, and I think I'm liking this story where Yin finally finds out the connection between Batman and Bruce Wayne. I really like this fight scene between Yin and Talia, and how you adapted the latter to The Batman's art style.

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Omnipotrent In reply to MartyrFan [2017-07-25 00:19:32 +0000 UTC]

Did you read the comment explaining their strife?

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MartyrFan In reply to Omnipotrent [2017-07-25 04:20:59 +0000 UTC]

I believe I did. Thanks for that BTW. Looks like it's going to be one heck of a fight, especially with all that on the line.

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Omnipotrent In reply to MartyrFan [2017-07-25 04:28:15 +0000 UTC]

I wanted a palpable reason for it to feel like a finale.

Also, what think you of how i incorporated HUSH into the League, and his enmity with Bruce?

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MartyrFan In reply to Omnipotrent [2017-07-25 04:44:50 +0000 UTC]

I think that it follows the freedom with how the producers of the show interpreted the characters and how they played into the show's story. The fanfics are those that capture the themes and feel of the original source material. Great thinking here.

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Omnipotrent In reply to MartyrFan [2017-07-25 05:33:46 +0000 UTC]

Domo Arigato. Β 

I wanted to put in Scarecrow as well.

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Page-Mistress [2013-10-08 13:31:57 +0000 UTC]

...Kick her arse, Yin!

(No, I'm not British, I just find it more satisfying to say it that way sometimes).

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Omnipotrent In reply to Page-Mistress [2013-10-08 19:18:35 +0000 UTC]

LOL! Glad you ship Yin with Batman

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Page-Mistress In reply to Omnipotrent [2013-10-08 20:05:35 +0000 UTC]

It's not so much shipping as it is that I really hate Talia.

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Omnipotrent In reply to Page-Mistress [2013-10-08 22:39:54 +0000 UTC]

Both admirable , you'll really hate her in this story

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Yoru-the-Rogue [2013-09-10 22:18:44 +0000 UTC]

Oooh gorgeous piece! I'm really loving the motion and the dynamic poses in this piece, and the expressions are wonderful! They're conveying so much emotion on both Talia and Yin's part! Excellent job of describing the fight scene as well!

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Omnipotrent In reply to Yoru-the-Rogue [2013-09-10 23:57:06 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!!


I'm having it where HUSH has taken the help of the League of Shadows to take over Gotham, and are looking for the wishing heart

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Yoru-the-Rogue In reply to Omnipotrent [2013-09-11 00:18:19 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome!

OOOOOH! HUSH, YOU SAY? *leans in* I'm all ears!

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Omnipotrent In reply to Yoru-the-Rogue [2013-09-11 00:27:16 +0000 UTC]

omnipotrent.deviantart.com/art…

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Yoru-the-Rogue In reply to Omnipotrent [2013-09-11 00:33:00 +0000 UTC]

*shrieks in glee and favorites*

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Omnipotrent In reply to Yoru-the-Rogue [2013-09-11 00:36:46 +0000 UTC]

He's essentially taking Bane's place in the Dark Knight Rises, only he's using the league more then Talia was using Bane in the movie, but it still comes down to Gotham being taken hostage and a plot to destroy it and such

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Yoru-the-Rogue In reply to Omnipotrent [2013-09-11 00:37:39 +0000 UTC]

That. Is. Beyond. Awesome.

Are you making a fanfiction specifically for this, or are you telling the story through your art primarily?

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Omnipotrent In reply to Yoru-the-Rogue [2013-09-11 02:04:57 +0000 UTC]

I'm teetering on which i should do

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Yoru-the-Rogue In reply to Omnipotrent [2013-09-11 02:14:45 +0000 UTC]

I'd suggest going for writing the fanfiction, personally, because from what I see here, you've got a great idea and you have plenty of skill with story-telling that you can do so. It would be work, definitely, but I think you could do so rather well. That's just my vote though. Doesn't mean you have to write it as a fanfiction if you decide you don't want to.

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Omnipotrent In reply to Yoru-the-Rogue [2013-09-11 02:20:34 +0000 UTC]

No no, I think I will make a fan fic, but I might just put it here, I'm writing one on Fanfiction right now that's about Avatar the Last Air bender

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Yoru-the-Rogue In reply to Omnipotrent [2013-09-11 02:22:39 +0000 UTC]

Oooh ATLA!! And hey, I'd be able to read and review your TB fic if you post it here!

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Omnipotrent In reply to Yoru-the-Rogue [2013-09-11 02:24:07 +0000 UTC]

Β 

You like Avatar????

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Yoru-the-Rogue In reply to Omnipotrent [2013-09-11 02:28:29 +0000 UTC]

But of course! It was such a rare anomaly in that it was such a beautifully written, well-designed cartoon that blended Eastern and Western styles, it transcended audience age limits, it was something totally unique in the sheer mechanics of the world, the concept, and the story-telling, and it was just so all around perfectly made that there's probably never going to be anything quite like it again in the world of cartoons. I LOVE Avatar: the Last Airbender.

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Omnipotrent In reply to Yoru-the-Rogue [2013-09-11 02:37:54 +0000 UTC]

Then riddle me this, how do you feel about "Alternate" pairings within their universe?

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Yoru-the-Rogue In reply to Omnipotrent [2013-09-11 02:41:31 +0000 UTC]

Well, I'm open to the idea and willing to read just about anything. For the most part, I've tended to keep a low profile in the AtLA fandom, so I haven't read any fanfiction for it as of yet. But I believe that as a writer, you should be willing to read anything because you can always learn from it, and sometimes fans also have incredibly wonderful takes on the stories and aspects of a certain fandom. So if you would like me to read your fanfiction, alternate pairings or any other things you would like to use, I'm always willing to read it. I've seen enough Zutara that I'm okay with it for the most part, and personally, I ship Toph and Zuko pretty hardcore. But I'm always multiship-friendly, as a rule.

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Omnipotrent In reply to Yoru-the-Rogue [2013-09-11 02:50:50 +0000 UTC]

You know, I was for Toph and Zuko...for a while....like a "maybe." Β Like in a scenario where the events of Book III happen, he's firelord and they become buddies...and then she crushes on him in that friendship..and visa versa, it's when she's a tad older but something like that

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Yoru-the-Rogue In reply to Omnipotrent [2013-09-11 12:33:06 +0000 UTC]

D'aaawwww, that sounds utterly adorable! X3

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Omnipotrent In reply to Yoru-the-Rogue [2013-09-11 20:19:36 +0000 UTC]

However, what I'm doing is a fanfic about Aang and Ty Lee

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Yoru-the-Rogue In reply to Omnipotrent [2013-09-11 20:22:09 +0000 UTC]

OOOH! Aang and Ty Lee? 8D THAT sounds like a fun pairing!

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Omnipotrent In reply to Yoru-the-Rogue [2013-09-11 20:25:34 +0000 UTC]

Hold up


omnipotrent.deviantart.com/art…

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Yoru-the-Rogue In reply to Omnipotrent [2013-09-11 20:28:09 +0000 UTC]

8D AWESOME!

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Omnipotrent In reply to Yoru-the-Rogue [2013-09-11 20:30:06 +0000 UTC]

Now I have written the fanfic and a few people have said they liked it.

It's going as far as 57 chapters strong, and people are saying it's really good

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Yoru-the-Rogue In reply to Omnipotrent [2013-09-11 20:32:40 +0000 UTC]

That's a good thing! And hey, 57 chapters! Kudos to you for that, man! The longest I've kept a fanfic running for so far is 26 chapters. But I tend to make my chapters a lot longer and I wrap things up before I know it. Still, this sounds really awesome. Would you mind linking me to your fic so I can bookmark it and read it?

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Omnipotrent In reply to Yoru-the-Rogue [2013-09-11 20:42:01 +0000 UTC]

I'd be honored


www.fanfiction.net/s/6244069/1…

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Yoru-the-Rogue In reply to Omnipotrent [2013-09-11 20:53:41 +0000 UTC]

Awesome! I'll start giving it a read tonight!

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Omnipotrent In reply to Yoru-the-Rogue [2013-09-11 21:47:18 +0000 UTC]

Cool! Β I ask your pardon now, because the spelling isn't it's best as it starts out, but by the middle i'm a lot better of a grammar person

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Yoru-the-Rogue In reply to Omnipotrent [2013-09-11 21:53:46 +0000 UTC]

*chuckles* Alright, alright. I'll overlook it. I've been there before, believe me. My first BtAS fic? Oh, it's riddled with spelling errors and moments where I "accidentally a word" and other moments where everything is just phrased odd. And all that on top of the fact that I intentionally wrote the first thirteen chapters of it (the following thirteen are much better) to be awful, as I was working on re-creating the "Well-Rounded Mary-Sue Project" first started by a fanfiction writer for Final Fantasy VII on FFNet. So trust me, I know what it's like to be in that spot and look back on your writing and just cringe at all the errors. No worries, and I'll forgive you in advance for any spelling and grammatical issues.

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Omnipotrent In reply to Yoru-the-Rogue [2013-09-11 21:59:00 +0000 UTC]

Grand, I hope you like the characters



I've made some OC's, not to many though

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