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Published: 2012-03-26 23:45:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 1491; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 10
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DANG.

I MEAN.

SERIOUSLY.

Like, holy crap.

So, Summer decided that I should draw a remake of the first page, which... really did need to be redone. ouo"

I think that I've improved quite a bit since drawing that page over a year ago... |D

The only thing that's really changed on the page is the background, and just slightly. Some heather stalks were added because, you know, WindClan needs heather stalks.

... Heather stalks everywhere. ;w;




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skyclan199 [2015-04-29 22:16:12 +0000 UTC]

I read it and now I'll fav it.

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NayruFaroreDin [2012-03-27 15:19:47 +0000 UTC]

8D Yee~

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Optimistic-Whiteout In reply to NayruFaroreDin [2012-03-29 19:50:49 +0000 UTC]

83

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kuroya-ken [2012-03-27 07:27:17 +0000 UTC]

/eats Troutkit
....this is just too adorable xDDD

And well done! I actually went to dig out your old page 1 to compare. There's a huge difference in style, namely that the 1st version was more 'sketchy' and somehow leaned more toward 'realism', while the 2nd version is a lot 'cleaner' and 'anatomically better structured', as well as that the thicker outlines gives it a more 'professional-comic-y' feel. In the end, I somehow love both, but the 2nd one is definitely more suited for the current 'style' and 'feel' of the comic. Don't scrap the 1st though

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Optimistic-Whiteout In reply to kuroya-ken [2012-03-29 19:55:31 +0000 UTC]

/observes eating

xDD Thanks so much! Yeah, I remember having my old style bent a lot more on realism, but really, I don't like it. ;w; It wasn't very accurate, and while it was easy to change and you could make it seem nice and realistic without totally screwing up the style in general, just... yeah, I like this one better somehow. |D I agree with the fact that it's cleaner and more anatomically better structured. Thanks again! c: I definitely won't scrap the old one, but I think it deserves its place underneath the waves of stuff in my gallery... |3

also, all of the ' things made me giggle the whole time I was reading your reply, not sure why, just saying

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kuroya-ken In reply to Optimistic-Whiteout [2012-04-09 12:53:55 +0000 UTC]

Giggle while reading my reply? Hmm... I wonder why...
/continues to chew Troutkit

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xRandomRockerx In reply to Optimistic-Whiteout [2012-03-30 20:22:36 +0000 UTC]

ACTUALLY, realism is a style of art that depicts everyday life, and is not idealized or romanticized...
/flee
/shot mid-flee

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Optimistic-Whiteout In reply to xRandomRockerx [2012-03-30 20:28:49 +0000 UTC]

Yeah... have fun with that? |3
*never remembers any of that stuff*

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xXxFeatherwishxXx [2012-03-27 00:21:12 +0000 UTC]

OHMYSTARCLAN.
TROUTKIT'S EXPRESSION AT THE END.
ouo
*dies from cuteness overload*

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Optimistic-Whiteout In reply to xXxFeatherwishxXx [2012-03-29 19:56:18 +0000 UTC]

8'D

*revives*

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