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Page 6, in which Whisperfoot and Hideki are spotted by a WindClan patrol, and Whisperfoot nonchalantly tries to explain herself with some tricky lies.
Footsteps in the Wind is an RP between me and done in comic style, where I take the role (and draw the panels) of Whisperfoot the ShadowClan cat (Warriors), while he takes the role (and panels) of Hideki the wolf-doberman.
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HIDEKI I AM SO SORRY
I FEEL LIKE A HORRIBLE PERSON SOB
YOUR COMIC PAGES ARE SO AMAZING AND I JUST
I CAN'T EVEN
;A;
i'm just going to sit in the corner now because hsdfhdoijfdoj
I am so sorry, this page has been delayed so much and I never really went back and finished it.
And I don't have my tablet out at the moment, so I just tried fixing this up without it. I know I should have put a lot more effort into that, but it's late and I wanted to get this done before I went to sleep and stuff because eeeuuuggghhh this has been postponed way too much already ;A;
What Whisperfoot says, in chronological order:
"What now?"
"Mousedung."
"HEY! Before you accuse me of anything, I was chasing this dog out of ShadowClan territory."
"Now, are you going to stand there like a bunch of mousebrains or help a poor cat out for once?"
I'm sorry if that looked like a bunch of ranty blah, but I just feel... so bad... for slowing the whole progress of this... ;u;"
But never fear, hopefully this comic will get back on its feet pretty soon.
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Not at the moment, I think! D: I would finish this page if I could, but it's on my dead computer.
I'm honored at the interest you show in the comic, though! ;w;
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well that sucks and sorry 
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0.0 wow COOL I hope it keeps going I MUST have MORE ^_^
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Wow, it still looks great! Especially so now that you've cleaned up some lines and added the words O_O Despite what you said, it looks so clear and clean! I actually do feel that this gives off a style of its own as well, so keep doing it! 
Oh god I love the "mousedung" panel; Whisper's face! xDDD
Oh, a question, am I allowed to maneuver the actions/speech of these clan cats?
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I had a reply written out to this a couple days ago, but then I navigated away from the page and it was deleted ;A; And I never really went back and we-wrote it, looks like, I'm so sorry!
Thank you so much! c':
That's true, now that you mention it, I hadn't put too much thought into that fact before, and considered it more of work that I had to make perfect. I'll try to keep it in mind later.
And I'm glad! ;u; I think that was my favorite panel to draw~
Aaaand about the clan cats, sure. c:
The pale golden she-cat is Daisypaw, the brown tom next to her with golden eyes is Coonchaser, and the lighter brown-and-white tom is Moorstripe. c: I'm preeetttyyy sure Coonchaser is the deputy of WindClan because of his particularly dominant body language...? He is defending his territory and all. But if not, he's just the leader of the patrol, and either way, Daisypaw is his apprentice. ;o; Moorstripe is just a warrior, and still pretty young.
As for personalities, Daisypaw is serious and focused, a bit of a workaholic, and pretentious toward strangers, because she's prideful of herself and her clan, and she tends to shove that in the faces of others. On the bright side, she's a very skilled apprentice for her age and has an unwavering sense of loyalty and commitment. I just made her up on the spot. |D;
Coonchaser can be snappy at times, because he's a surprisingly emotional character, even though he doesn't show it. He's considerate, kindhearted, but also very judgmental. He's also independent and goes wherever the wind takes him-- and his feet. Coonchaser is quite the fast runner, and lives up to the saying that WindClan cats are the quickest in the forest. Other than that, I don't think I ever really developed his personality much... owo
And Moorstripe is basically a blank canvas, Summer came up with his appearance while his name was generated by a game. owo He might be a little reckless because he's a younger warrior...?
Is that all okay with you?
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Oops, sorry for not replying this earlier XD I wanted to keep this message in my inbox as a 'reminder', and only just remembered I could actually untick the 'remove this message after I reply' box lol
And thanks for the info! 8D That makes the characters so much easier to picture in my head! I hope you don't mind that I get back to this a while later? I've been trying to experiment with styles lately and (as you might have noticed) there's been no activities in my gallery due to it^^" I already have the panels in my head. I'll get back to this, I promise!
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THANK YOU. ;w;
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