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Next page: [link]Hi there everybody!
Sooo I haven't really prepared you for this so you probably have no idea what this is/gonna be
Well I wanted to make my own comic of my characters and stuff but the truth is I don't have the time and patience to do everything as a comic. So then the idea of a storybook came to mind and I loved that
So this is the first page of the story about Sinta and a certain stallion. It will be a very long story, as I'm aiming for a real book lenght here. I probably won't be able to do that but I'll try my very best.
The abbreviation? It stands for Story of Their Own. This will be the name of the series. This particular story still needs a name so that's why it's called no title
About this page: Here I kind of ease you into the story as you learn more about Sinta's past. For the people who liked Dash, sorry but he truly is a jerk xD In the next page the story really begins
I really hope you'll read the story and like it
Story, Characters & drawings: Me ~paardjee
Dash's pose reference: Google image
Sinta's pose reference: [link] by ~InnocenceIsOptional
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Comments: 55
Paardjee In reply to ??? [2013-01-02 22:37:58 +0000 UTC]
Yeah she ain't such a happy girl.
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xXRubyRosesXx In reply to Paardjee [2013-01-02 23:41:08 +0000 UTC]
Idk why anyone would think she's a guy even with a short mane. To me, she looks pretty feminine.
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MissDudette [2011-10-29 04:12:21 +0000 UTC]
STORYBOOK IS GENIUS. I might have to use this idea.
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Paardjee In reply to MissDudette [2011-10-29 10:52:47 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much! It sure is timesaving when you compare it to making a whole comic
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MissDudette In reply to Paardjee [2011-10-29 13:59:50 +0000 UTC]
I definitely like it a lot.
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Paardjee In reply to BowerNFaith [2011-09-14 12:22:25 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad you think so!
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sonyathehedgragon [2011-09-05 23:36:22 +0000 UTC]
i have a few questions, what program did you do this in? and how did you get the text to wrap around the pictures? thank you!
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Paardjee In reply to sonyathehedgragon [2011-09-06 15:45:27 +0000 UTC]
I use Photoshop CS4. I put the text in different text boxes so I can arrange them around the pictures myself, it's quite a hassle but it works. You can probably better use Indesign or a program like that but I cannot seem to figure that program out properly.
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NaporieRizia [2011-08-30 22:45:47 +0000 UTC]
I love the idea. I wish I would have thought of that. I may even do one instead of a comic. I also love the layout and the swirls. It is all so nice. I was wondering how you did the words and stuff like that though. How did you get it to be transparent but still up lode it on DA? I would love to stay and chat but I have to go now. I can't wait to get back and read more.
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Paardjee In reply to NaporieRizia [2011-08-31 15:14:01 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad you like it! It's definitly much more doable than a comic drawing wise and I love to write so for me it's the perfect way to tell my charries their stories.
And it's very easy, I start with my new file and the background is white. Everything I put on it (text, drawings, page numbers ans so on) I put on a new layer. When everythings done I make a layer out of my background and delete it. Then I save it as a png and I'm done
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NaporieRizia In reply to Paardjee [2011-09-01 20:51:09 +0000 UTC]
I also love to write and have already started planning a story I would like to do.
Thank you for the advice. I think it will come in very handy.
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xRedLily [2011-01-20 18:00:19 +0000 UTC]
Aaaaaaaaaaahhh!! @ o @ zo veel letters omg!! lol sorry dat ik het niet helemaal heb geleze hahaha X'DD ik heb echt haat aan tekste lezen enzo... altijd al gehad
Maar zkkr mooie illustaties en mooie layout! C:
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Paardjee In reply to xRedLily [2011-01-23 12:27:37 +0000 UTC]
Haha maakt niet uit hoor Ik had al wel gedacht dat niet iedereen zin zou hebben om het helemaal te lezen
Maar wel bedankt dat je het mooi vind!
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xRedLily In reply to Paardjee [2011-01-23 14:22:19 +0000 UTC]
Ja echt ik weet niet waarom maar als ik zo'n stuk tekst zie lees ik 2 zinne en dan haak ik automatisch af SOWWY!! ; n ;
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mona1995xx [2011-01-16 20:27:36 +0000 UTC]
Ach.. arme Sinta echt lullig dat ze zo word gepest alleen omdat ze korte manen heeft
En Dash is echt gemeen, maar ondanks dat nog wel hÊÊl smexy
Leuk verhaal, je kan echt goed de emotie voelen van de charra's
Ben benieuwd naar de volgende pagina
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Paardjee In reply to mona1995xx [2011-01-16 21:54:52 +0000 UTC]
Ja t leven is oneerlijk, ik vind t vooral kut dat t in echte leven ook gebeurt.
Dash is echt een lul En geloof me je gaat hem nog meer haten in hoofdstuk 2
Ik ben blij dat je het een leuk verhaal vind! Ik ben nu bezig met de volgende pagina
Heb al 1 van de 3 tekeningen af ben nu bezig met de tweede
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Paardjee In reply to kagetora4ever [2011-01-16 16:54:17 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!
I'm working on the second page right now
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kagetora4ever In reply to Paardjee [2011-01-16 17:07:54 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome
Awesome!
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jannaphia [2011-01-16 10:45:11 +0000 UTC]
so interesting, I can't wait for the next page and nice alternative to a comic by the way
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Paardjee In reply to jannaphia [2011-01-16 14:08:37 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much!
Good to hear you like this too instead of a comic
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BloodBriar [2011-01-15 00:50:24 +0000 UTC]
oooo i cant Wait for the next page i love it oh and it seems as if your not on that much is everything okay?i cant wait for your next art work or the other page of the story
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Paardjee In reply to BloodBriar [2011-01-15 11:02:23 +0000 UTC]
Teehee I'm so glad you like it!
And yeah everything's fine I just needed to study a bit for my exams. I gues I had to do it sometime Thank you for caring
I'm gonna start drawing for the next page today so it probably won't take long before the next page
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BloodBriar In reply to Paardjee [2011-01-16 00:04:52 +0000 UTC]
okay glad your alright and yay the next page is soon
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Alanah123 [2011-01-14 17:02:01 +0000 UTC]
cool, de plaatjes zijn mooi en je kan echt heel erg goed schrijven!
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Paardjee In reply to Alanah123 [2011-01-14 19:53:44 +0000 UTC]
Heel erg bedankt! Ik vind t echt een heel groot compliment dat je vind dat ik goed kan schrijven!
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SomersetRaven [2011-01-14 16:00:19 +0000 UTC]
This looks great so far I can't wait to read some more
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Paardjee In reply to SomersetRaven [2011-01-14 19:52:56 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much!
I hope to upload a new page next week
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SomersetRaven In reply to Paardjee [2011-01-14 20:14:52 +0000 UTC]
You're very welcome
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kannognix [2011-01-14 14:56:57 +0000 UTC]
wow...
mooi gemaakt alleen ik kan niet engels lezen dus ik snap er niks van...haha
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Paardjee In reply to kannognix [2011-01-14 19:52:17 +0000 UTC]
Dankje!
Ahh dat is wel jammer.. Kan je echt helemaal niks lezen?
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kannognix In reply to Paardjee [2011-01-16 10:47:40 +0000 UTC]
nee niet echt maar hij is wel mooi gemaakt
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dandyhorse [2011-01-14 13:38:37 +0000 UTC]
Awesome story, i am wonder about the next page, unfortunately this situation thing
like that, there are lots of in the world :\ I really love the drawings in the chapter 1. <3
Dash's expression is very cool, but i don't like him
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Paardjee In reply to dandyhorse [2011-01-14 13:42:54 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much! I'm glad ya like
It's indeed sad that things like this happen way too often in the world..
And yeah Dash is a jerk with way too much ego
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dandyhorse In reply to Paardjee [2011-01-17 18:09:24 +0000 UTC]
Your welcome
I really love it
In my classroom has got a boy how is so redneck.
I am wonder about the next page, and what will happen
with Dash and things like that
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Ister [2011-01-14 13:13:17 +0000 UTC]
Dit is een heeeel goed idee! Het geheel is echt knap, ook perfecte verhouding tekst-afbeeldingen. Meer tekeningen zou te veel zijn geweest denk ik.
Ook mooi geschreven, je wordt echt meegesleurd in de gevoelens van Sinta. Prachtig!
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Paardjee In reply to Ister [2011-01-14 13:31:52 +0000 UTC]
Heel erg bedankt! Ik ben blij te horen dat je dat vind
Ik ben ook blij dat je de verhoudingen goed vind, ik was zelf een beetje onzeker over de onderste aangezien die nogal groot is
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Ister In reply to Paardjee [2011-01-14 13:51:19 +0000 UTC]
Ik vind dat als een tekening vanonder staat en er staat geen tekst links of rechts, dat die best wel groot mag zijn
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skikkie94 [2011-01-14 08:05:22 +0000 UTC]
Wauw!!! Mooi!!! Maak je ook nog een deel 2? Vast wel, anders kun je het ook geen boek noemen, haha!!!
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Paardjee In reply to skikkie94 [2011-01-14 12:50:19 +0000 UTC]
Dankjewel!
En er komen nog veeeeel meer pagina's
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DikkeBobby [2011-01-14 06:32:27 +0000 UTC]
Cool ik wist niet dat je ook schreef^^ ben benieuwd naar het volgende stuk!
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Paardjee In reply to DikkeBobby [2011-01-14 12:49:42 +0000 UTC]
Dankje!
Ja ik schreed vroeger ook altijd al verhaaltjes en nu probeer ik echt een goed verhaal te schrijven
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DikkeBobby In reply to Paardjee [2011-01-14 14:38:04 +0000 UTC]
geen probleem en ik vind het echt goed
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Niblet88 [2011-01-14 02:18:55 +0000 UTC]
You have a wonderful way of describing the story. I'm usually not a big fan of those literature type submissions, but this works really, really well. I'm very interested as to what's goin' to happen next, seriously, you've got me on the edge of my seat! I like the pictures you added, it goes really well, especially when Dash comes into the story and his picture is right there. It adds a little more. I hope you continue this, because you've already got a fan!
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Paardjee In reply to Niblet88 [2011-01-14 12:48:50 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much! I'm really glad you like it!
I indeed figured some people wouldn't be very interested in so much reading so that's why I don't add too much text in one page and add pictures to make it more interesting ^^
And I'll be uploading new pages frequently, at least I hope so. In my textbook I'm already writing chapter 4. I only need to make the drawings for the next page
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