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Published: 2011-10-06 06:35:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 279; Favourites: 12; Downloads: 3
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Description Coffee is my nicotine
Mornings are my hell
I'm inside the in-between
Where no one hears me yell

Sleeping is my coma
Adrenaline's my high
Failure's my diploma
Hello is my goodbye

Long walks in the rain
Blend with every tear
Crimson & scarlet always stain
Perfumes fragrance is fear

Mirrors shatter
Windows break
Incessant chatter
Stereotyped fake

I, myself, am Satan
I, myself, am God
My path will never straighten
And people find me odd

Am I the centre of the world?
No. It's molten lava and heat
Fetal position, body curled
Reality isn't such a treat
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Comments: 8

DilutedCrazy [2011-10-07 22:14:06 +0000 UTC]

so Much emotion, It's really good.

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paper-doesnt-judge In reply to DilutedCrazy [2011-10-08 01:05:14 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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Wolf-in-gray [2011-10-07 03:34:54 +0000 UTC]

I has much emotion follow my view !!! Great !!!

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paper-doesnt-judge In reply to Wolf-in-gray [2011-10-08 01:05:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Sartosis [2011-10-06 17:52:53 +0000 UTC]

This is a very very good poem!

It's in the featured folder for sure!

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paper-doesnt-judge In reply to Sartosis [2011-10-07 02:45:18 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow thank you!! <3

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fadingreverie [2011-10-06 07:49:29 +0000 UTC]

The first stanza is incredible!
I usually don't like poetry that rhymes, but you chose a good rhyming scheme and went with it properly without sounding cliche or annoying.

Great job ^^

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paper-doesnt-judge In reply to fadingreverie [2011-10-07 02:46:04 +0000 UTC]

Awe thanks! glad you liked it ^^

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