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Finished Deviation: [link]Last updated: 3/15
This is a work in progress picture; newest picture is on the right
I was considering renaming this picture. Normally I use the same title as the sketch had, however, I'm pretty sure I will have another Raven picture in the future, and I would like to withhold using the "Raven" title until absolutely necessary. I was thinking of something along the the lines of "Alone", "Lost" or "Without you". Your input is very much appeciated
Lineart by ~angelicravenx3 : [link]
Rain tutorial by ~koisnake : [link]
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whoa, very cool! i like the fourth one! it makes me cold just looking at it. xD 
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~it makes me cold just looking at it
~nice job with the icy breath, by the way
I put in a quick background, and I stared at the rain picture and the snow picture, and I was like, "One of these should be colder", so I put in the breath, just seemed natural 
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>>like I'm almost being cruel by changing her environment
she should have someone to hug so she'll feel warmer, lol. but i think Raven can handle it.
>>I was like, "One of these should be colder"
haha xD and now the 5th one is the best, lol. 
and it looks like changing the line colors [like what you did with Starfire] works here, too..
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~she helped save Earth from Trigon, remember? xD
~and it looks like changing the line colors [like what you did with Starfire] works here, too.
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>>you're a BBxRae fan
lol, YES, that i am!! xDD [i'm also a semi-robxrae fan, haha.]
ahh this looks great! ^o^ and, i'll let you know that i always like looking at `Ish Starfire` because it's so good, lol!! sorry for repeating myself, but i can't thank you enough! ^^
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I also posted up the newest version of the picture (I'm nearly done 
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>>I'll stick with "Without You" as the title
cool! ^^
>>no pressure on the quality of the next one
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~also a semi-robxrae fan
In that case, I'll stick with "Without You" as the title 
~because it's so good, lol!!
Thanks, though it's a lot to live up to with "Without You" 
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Thank you for your input, it is very much appreciated
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I think the one on the far left is the most realistic! But it's kind of strange seeing her look like she is standing on thin air.
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~But it's kind of strange seeing her look like she is standing on thin air
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Of course! Anytime!
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Thank you very much for your input
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If you're going for dark and depressing, the pic on the far left is great. Now I can understand what you mean, the left and center pics are kinda "meh". Perhaps a dark, snowing forest atmosphere? Best of both worlds?
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~Perhaps a dark, snowing forest atmosphere? Best of both worlds? 👍: 0 ⏩: 1
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What, it's cool!
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~Ignore the bad pun
I also uploaded a new version with snow, does it look better (for a first draft)?
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I say that the second one looks the best, in terms of which of these is better. But she is more of sad than cold in the picture so being lost would probably look better
angelicravenx3 had said that Raven was sad in this drawing anyway
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~angelicravenx3 had said that Raven was sad in this drawing anyway 
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now the 4th one is looking to be the best :3
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