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EDIT: I went back in and edited the panel where Joe is stressing out so that it reads more like his thoughts and less like the people around him are actually saying bad things about his crying child haha (but i'll still leave the author's note below). I find it super interesting how many people had concerns about human/pokemon double standards when it looked like the people in the bg were complaining about Tyson crying. This is not that situation, but keep big braining ya'll OvO



During which the pokemon finally get their share of screentime again!


Author Notes:


- MISS LUCEILLE IS HERE! Okay so full disclosure she's just a side character for this scene but she became an art stream darling (it was the luceille and joe show LMAO) and it still warms my heart so much that riverplath went and drew her for my birthday last year!!! Now she's finally, officially joined the fray! You can view her original design here!


- Oh man, Tyson ALSO makes his official appearance. Fun fact, he originally didn't have clothes like a regular machop until the entire stream screamed why is this child naked while his dad's strutting around in khakis??? To which I replied. Bet.


- Hopefully it's obvious but in case it's confusing, nobody's actually talking in that purple panel where Joe is freaking out. Those are just all the things he assumes people are thinking around him at that moment.


- Iiiiittt's AKELA! I definitely made varying character interactions a priority this arc. So there's mons and people crossing that you wouldn't normally consider/ haven't seen at this point, and I love seeing how they play off of each other


- The Pokeroom!! It's essentially a hollowed out conference room with faux grass stages of sorts where the temp workers' service pokemon can grab n go. It's largely self sufficient, but there are several lombre and 1 ludicolo (that being miss luceille ofc) to help cleanup or serve food to those without opposable thumbs. Not kiba though. Kiba's a big girl.


Or well she was until the last few panels. Guess you can say's been...kibnapped.



as;fjkdsjfd that's it for now lolll thanks for reading!!


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ACottontail [2021-12-19 00:37:22 +0000 UTC]

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Pcaara In reply to ACottontail [2021-12-31 17:00:39 +0000 UTC]

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XMaveria [2021-03-30 21:40:09 +0000 UTC]

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Pcaara In reply to XMaveria [2021-04-06 15:54:27 +0000 UTC]

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wastelander-nick [2021-03-26 19:43:13 +0000 UTC]

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Pcaara In reply to wastelander-nick [2021-04-06 15:56:44 +0000 UTC]

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A-KTheLittleFairy [2021-02-27 10:10:10 +0000 UTC]

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Pcaara In reply to A-KTheLittleFairy [2021-02-27 16:22:19 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!! πŸ’– We're about to see alot more of them so get ready heheheh

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A-KTheLittleFairy In reply to Pcaara [2021-02-27 19:05:29 +0000 UTC]

You are welcome!!

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Gecko-Comics [2021-02-26 13:12:31 +0000 UTC]

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Flavia-Elric [2021-02-26 11:29:33 +0000 UTC]

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Pcaara In reply to Flavia-Elric [2021-02-27 16:20:58 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad this one is alot clearer! Honestly if I was as dramatic + free with my paneling then as I am in recent chapters, I wouldnt have stuck to joe's insecurities just being in one panel. As it is now, I'm not suuuper sold on the edits, because I feel like Joe isn't much of a "talk yourself up" sorta guy the way Asadi is? If that makes sense. You're right, that many people complaining is TOTALLY cartoonish, and that's why it worked so well with joe's particular insecurities πŸ€” Everyone has mean girls high school energy to him sometimes loll quotations are an option too. I may take another stab at the panel or just leave it as one of those "rough patches" on the road of improving my execution of this story xD

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theNessiArtist [2021-02-23 17:32:31 +0000 UTC]

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Pcaara In reply to theNessiArtist [2021-02-27 16:12:56 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!! You definitely hit the nail on the head in some area. There is, infact, some element of double standard amongst pokemon and humans. But in this situation, Joe's insecurities are mostly just a personal thing, and it reflects on his parenting. I love when people throw their interpretations at me, so it will never be too much heheheh it's always so interesting reading about what sort of critical thinking my work inspires. So thank you for sharing!! ;u;

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Gecko-Comics [2021-02-23 16:33:30 +0000 UTC]

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Pcaara In reply to Gecko-Comics [2021-02-27 16:08:36 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for letting me know! I also saw your other comment after I went back and fixed it and I'm glad it reads much clearer now heheh. I'm also glad you managed to nail what the scene represented even with the confusing way the panel was drawn! Joe has so many insecurities about being a parent, but he's trying his hardest! Also thanks, the bulk of the design is def attributed to riverplath

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riverplath [2021-02-23 16:29:01 +0000 UTC]

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Pcaara In reply to riverplath [2021-02-27 16:03:22 +0000 UTC]

SHE!!

and goddd. Joe does indeed try his best smh. I'm rooting for the big guy. I'm glad you're excited to see the kids!!!! And that's so funny I actually got hit with how big my cast is when you said that and I'm just as 🀯 thank you for the kind words!! ;;u;;

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