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Published: 2013-06-25 04:10:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 2012; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 3
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Second page of the comic I drew after being inspired by 's amazing fanfiction, Retroactive. Check out the original fanfiction here on DA: [link] or on fanfiction.net: [link]Page one: [link]
Page three: [link]
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I think you achieved the ultimate level of scariness with Azula's eyes.... *Shivers* Nicely done!
~*~ Rad
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Thanks! But actually, I just tried to copy the way Azula's eyes are always drawn in the show--they're just naturally very scary
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Meeeeeh... I think you did a very good job!
~*~ Rad
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haha.
love your icon, btw
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jejeje ^^ thanks very much
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This is great! I like the balance between cute and serious styles here. They both work well.
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Thanks so much 
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I really enjoyed the sudden shift into chibi style for when Ty Lee get sidetracked by the notion of dream symbolism. That perfectly conveys her airy way of talking to people.
Once again, Suki and Ty Lee are wonderfully expressive in every panel without being over the top, and Suki's sense of fear is very much palpable in the depiction of her dream. I also like how her narration cut out when Azula approaches. It did a great job of adding dread. I especially liked how Azula's eyes glowed in the darkness; I actually wonder if some Firebenders can really do that when they want.
Major props for Azula's face being instantly recognizable even with a close-up of her eyes. You have mad skilz, yo.
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Haha, yeah. Ty Lee is just that kind of person who always has a chibi-esque air about her.
Thanks! I kept wondering if Suki's expressions were too much; thanks for the feedback on that, it's really helpful.
Haha. Well, Azula's eyes are pretty distinctive. As are her bangs. I looked at a lot of references from the show so I could make them recognizable.
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