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peterdawes — February 2009 HaikuWriMo
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Published: 2009-02-01 05:54:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 1050; Favourites: 28; Downloads: 8
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1.winter's bite
not so sharp
in california
2.
seasons change,
but snow takes an
eternity to melt
3.
exchanging secrets
a warm breath and
a cold wind
4.
melody of wind
a subtle lullaby
to a tired thinker
5.
song bird
with broken notes
induces migraine
6.
impromptu skate
ice rink and
wing-tipped shoes
7.
late night stroll
celestial companion
keeps secrets
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*chuckles* i must relocate from the northeast.
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Glad the sun's out. Otherwise, the cold bites.
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*chuckles* that it does. right now, it has some teeth here, but has not sunk them in for a few days.
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That's good. When it's freezing, man...
Cali ain't all surf and sun, though. Besides, people seem to care less about each other nowadays...
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I hear you - sharing as I do the California winter 
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*chuckles* we are only jealous.
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we do have cold places here in cali - I'll write about that part too, yanno 
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*chuckles* yes, this is true.
but there are some portions... that cause us a bit of jealousy.
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:giggles: yes! we do that by design
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T-shirt weather here today. Mmhmmm. That's right.
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you are evil. evil, i tell you!
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Meh, it's easier when you're evil. YA KNOW?
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"and now you see that evil shall always triumph. because good is dumb."
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I DO BELEIVE MY SCHWARTZ IS LARGER THAN YOUR'S.
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probably so. i got mine in a cracker jack box.
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Wow. Don't let the ladies know that one. teehee.
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Very nice Peter! This piece actually does contain a kind of cheeky bite. An excellent contrast to the mildness of your winter!
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thank you! actually, he is the lucky devil with the milder winter. *chuckles* at least it is not in the teens here again.
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Yeah, its been freezing here in GA!
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i have a friend in south carolina who says it has been chilly this year there, too.
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I'm entering too hopefully
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and i hope to partake of your poetic challenge too. hopefully life permits this time around.
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It should. Mine's just a little contest, not a day to day challenge
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Hehe, this one's very lighthearted and fun (I wish it was winter here, no matter how sharp its bite).
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*chuckles* i can imagine. conversely, i could use... well, i do not know about summer temperatures. but... warmer weather.
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Lol, you definitely don't want these summer temperatures. It's about 43 degrees Celsius today.
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Yep, made even worse by the laptop being in close proximity.
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ahh... i understand. i think one could cook breakfast on mine some nights.
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