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all for the taste ofsweet, red warmth
liquid fire through my veins
replenish me again.
can i lean a little closer?
smell the scent of your perfume.
drown myself within your essence;
can i take another drink?
porcelain dances across sweat
teeth tangling with flesh
you my temptation and i
your sanguinary lover.
replenish me again.
it's been too long
since i've felt the warmth.
let me drink a little deeper,
until our bodies meld as one.
let me slide my tongue across
the lingering droplets
you taste like wine; so rich
the finest merlots
could never compare.
replenish me again.
be like the carnal maidservant
serving the master.
sink into the arms that hold you
within the lover's grip.
so deceptive,
still, i promise i will not let go.
i will hear your darkest confessions
as you whisper them to me.
all the things you'd like for me to do
for i have fallen from grace as well.
replenish me again
and i will take you under
the deepest spells.
drift to slumber; into the hands that hold you
i will sing you a lullaby.
and in the midnight hour,
as you slip through satin sheets
into the realm of saints and martyrs
i shall thank you again.
all for the taste
sweet, red warmth
liquid fire through my veins
your essence, love.
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My girlfriend commented on how she wanted to use this in her book. Well, about a week ago, I looked up this poem and decided to see if I could write as well as you. I was wondering if you could check this out? I just uploaded it now because I haven't had the time to do it before hand.
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It's fabulous, I couldn't pick a favorite line because I loved them all. Great work!!!
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I loved your poem, and the black rose on the preview. I'm new at this, can you please tell me how to add a picture on the side of the preview? Thanks in advance.
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that was simply... i can't describe how beautiful...
i'm an aspiring writer... i write stories of vampires and seduction...
i was wondering if you would mind if maybe i used some of this in a story? of course, you don't have to let me. i'm simply wondering because it would help with my inspiration of writing.
its still absolutely beautiful.
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apologies for the delay in responding. yes, by all means, you are more than welcome to. please allow me to read it when you are finished if you do not mind. (if you feel too self-conscious, i will understand completely. 
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well I'm going actually publish it, maybe put previews on devart. when i do finish the story, it will most likely be under the name of A.L.L.S. (my initals) lol but i will send u a copy when it's done, if you like, and if i can lol.
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*nods* if and when you complete it, i would be delighted to take a look.
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ok lol^^ whats ur name? i mean so i can give u credit
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*grins* my name is peter dawes.
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ur name sounds familiar o.o
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mmm... hopefully they are pleasant ones.
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Your essence, love
Or,
Your essence, my love
Somehow both speak to me on this excellent romantical piece.
k
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that was the most beauitful thing that i ever read
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i am flattered you think so. thank you.
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Ahh, so good to see the words of such a wonderful vampiric mind. I have been writhing vempire stories lately and this poem shines with the sublim scarlet light of a the seductive charm of the hunters of the night. So if a madmans words is of any consern to you, rest asured that this poem is among the best i have read.
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Thank you kindly for your feedback, from one madman to another. Yes, the vampire mind is one I am all too familiar with myself. I am glad I communicated the sentiment well.
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I loved this, beautiful in a scary kind of way.
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I can be beautifully scary at times.
Thank you, Kelly.
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You can also have a wonderful sense of humor that I envy so much.
And - you're welcome.
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oOoOohh... i got chills.
loved it, i'm definitely faving this one. worded beautifully. it's different from the latest, somehow... different is good!, very good, indeed.
i agree with denisie. take me, take me!
just kidding. i'm far too young for this. *shakes head in frustration*
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Ha! I could not harm a hair upon your head, my dear.
Not to say I could harm Denise as well. But you gather what I mean.
Thank you for the kind words and the favorite.
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hah, couldn't, or wouldn't ? -.^
no problem <3
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BTW, I far prefer "Seduction OF the Vampire." It is, truly, isn't it?
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Yes, quite true. You do like this title better, then? I shall keep it. I am perpetually at a loss when it comes to titles.
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Yes. Absolutely. Trust your first instincts.
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"...teeth tangling with flesh
you my temptation and i
your sanguinary lover."
Quite simply my absolute favorite of all your poems. Ever. Bar none. My neck is yours. Will you hear my confession now?
Zach Karson and Marcus Raines have nothing on you, fella.
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Ha ha! I'm not certain. How long of a confession is it? Although, I believe yours might just hold this devil's attention.
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Zach and Marcus lack a little finesse - which is, in no way, a deficit toward their creator. They do not have to be charming bastards like I do. Still, I pity them. There is so much they miss out on because of this.
Heaven help me, I'm in one of those moods again.
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Skip the confession. Let's go straight to the swooning.
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Absolutely fabulous ^_^ I love it! It reminds me of someone I know hehe
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I couldn't imagine who.
Thank you.
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Until the earth shall boil to a sea of blackness,
the sun burns to a dull, charred piece of coal,
the lands sweep to barred lots of sand,
will the essence we so deserve fill our souls.
Until the structures crumble to incoherent masses,
the streets twist and hook to endless holes,
the skies are but a blurred existence of what used to be,
with the essence we so deserve fill our souls.
Until our hunger is but a memory of the past,
the chimes of Hell's bells have echoed their final tolls,
the curse lifted, pushing aside the burden of our beings,
will the essence we so deserve fill our souls.
-Solemon Sands, London, January 1850
Essence...:::smiles:::Bravo!
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Thank you, dear Leonie.
I quite enjoy when you share poetry with me. Thank you for that as well.
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::twinkles:::
You are far and away my favorite read.
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OOOHHHH....What should I say here... I am at a lost for words and that does not happen very often..One of my favs..
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Oh dear, I've taken her speech.
Perhaps I might gift it back by saying thank you. 
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It is slowly returning..
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*peeks in* hi pete... this has to be one of my favorites. while i drown in my own self-loathing and lament on my dear vampire friends who stand on the sidelines like angels with no script, this sort of gives me a sense of comfort there. i don't quite understand why, is the problem, tho... i think it's this bit... "and i will take you under
the deepest spells.
drift to slumber into the hands that hold you
i will sing you a lullaby.
and in the midnight hour,
as you slip through satin sheets
into the realm of saints and martyrs
i shall thank you again."
reminds me of that chapter with reiney and jackson...
anyway, i love it.
*turns back into a ghost quickly before anyone sees her*
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Thank you, dear Rabbit. I consider that a high compliment.
I know self-loathing and my heart breaks for you, my friend, that you find yourself in such a repose.
I am glad I could provide you with a warm thought.
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shouldn't this be titled 'Seduction BY a Vampire'??
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Hmm. . . I do believe I like that better. Thank you, Lindsay. Titling my poetry is not my strong suit.
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i suck at titles. it took forever to come up with the title for ItM.
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It almost takes longer for me to title the work than for me to pen it.
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