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The original sketch.Please note the this animal is part of a "Burgess Shale" of Beta Colibri, it, however, survived to the present in the form of its descendants.
It is called Cryptobranch, because it can retract its gills inside the body to protect them against other animals. Because the entire body is protected by sclerites, little mineralized plates, the three feather-like gills are the most vulnerable organ of this animal.
This peculiar animal is not blind, it sports a set of three light sensitive pits, which is better than nothing. Its predecessors retracted their gills after being atttacked by another animal, but this particular cryptobranch evolved a way how to avoid damage of its gills almost completely, all thanks to these simple sensoric organs. When a shadow creeps over, simple muscles pull the gills inside the body and the blood is forced into the body cavity. when the danger is over, the blood is pumped into the gills again to inflate them.
Though it looks like a sedetary lifeform, the underside of the body is free of sclerites, so the animal can use its muscular "leg" to crawl slowly along the seabed much like slugs and snails on Earth. It has three pairs of fused metanephridia, three single-chambered hearts which beat in clockwise sequence, suck the blood from the body cavity and force it to the gills.
The oxygen-rich blood then races back into the body cavity. (the blood pressure is all that keeps the gills inflated)
It has a simple nervous system composed of six ganglia with an associated vertical nerve. The ganglia are connected in a ring around the esophagus.
Its digestive system is fairly simple, consisting of retractable esophagus, sack-like stomach and simple gut with the rectum on top of the animal.
It also has three ovaries and three testicles, though there never are both of those active at the same time to avoid cloning itself and maintain genetic diversity.
The Cryptobranch is a predatory animal, albeit small, being only 1 - 3 inches tall, but it's a real wolf in sheep's skin of the ancient seas on Beta Colibri. To actually notice it can move, you'd have to speed up a video recording, but such speed is enough for the Cryptobranch. As it slowly crawls along the sea bed, the bare underside also functions as a sensory organ. When it senses a movement in the sand, the end of the esophagus seals tightly and then it finds its way down through the sand to reach an unsuspecting worm which is then quickly sucked in.
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Comments: 18
indigomagpie [2012-02-02 10:41:17 +0000 UTC]
Really sorry about this, but apparently the word "cryptobranch" is taken by a type of nudibranch
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PeteriDish In reply to indigomagpie [2012-02-02 10:55:00 +0000 UTC]
*curls in a corner and cries*
Damn. Thanks for pointing that out!
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indigomagpie In reply to PeteriDish [2012-02-03 14:28:59 +0000 UTC]
Animal is still nifty, though .
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PeteriDish In reply to indigomagpie [2012-02-03 14:48:07 +0000 UTC]
thanks! But it's nameless now! any idea?
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indigomagpie In reply to PeteriDish [2012-02-19 13:39:45 +0000 UTC]
...polyscleroderm? Triadiate?
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PeteriDish In reply to indigomagpie [2012-02-19 15:28:34 +0000 UTC]
The first one is awesome! Thankies!
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Rajalyoko23 In reply to PeteriDish [2013-01-13 11:32:29 +0000 UTC]
Palmobranch.
since it looks like a palm, nut it's a nudibranch.
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Adiraiju [2012-01-21 10:06:57 +0000 UTC]
So many strange critters live in the Burgess Shale, I could believe this is one of them!
Wonderful work here!
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PeteriDish In reply to Adiraiju [2012-01-21 10:28:59 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I'm glad you like it! I've skipped most of the evolution and Iยจm currently working on a recent predator, but I will go back, I want to follow the evolution of life on this planet, picturing various ecosystems with animals of increasing complexity
I decided to start with a "Burgess Shale" stage on the planet, because there is not much fun with single celled organisms, and it was the alien look of (pre)cambrian creatures on earth that led me to this idea, you sea something that looks like a sedetary filter feeder, but is actually a mobile predator. The fact that this animal has its mouth far from the mouth made me think about how to incorporate this to the complex animals, relatives of the vertebrates on earth. Even though the animals on earth form a rich palette of shapes and forms, similarities of some degree can be spotted if one seeks for them, but there is an equal or greater ammount of differences. Having an animal with sensory organs far from the mouth is the sole fundamental common trait of the majority of animals, but because evolution follows certain trends, "complete cephalization" took place on this planet, and the mouth gradually travelled towards the head. This would lead to a peculiar nature of the internal anatomy, which is everything I wanted, being as unearthly as possible, while still functional and plausible.
I am so glad you like this, you don't even know how much!
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Adiraiju In reply to PeteriDish [2012-01-22 09:20:55 +0000 UTC]
Very neat ideas, and you're welcome! I oughta start making my own...
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PeteriDish In reply to Adiraiju [2012-01-22 10:29:01 +0000 UTC]
that would be so cool! there is never enough of speculative evolution!
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flufdrax [2012-01-21 00:23:44 +0000 UTC]
Very cool little mini beast. Invertebrates have such amazing ways to do things.
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PeteriDish In reply to flufdrax [2012-01-21 00:28:12 +0000 UTC]
Yeah!
I hope you know this is my fictional creature! But yeah, it is an invertebrate.
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flufdrax In reply to PeteriDish [2012-01-21 00:46:42 +0000 UTC]
It's close enough to realistic that I didn't care fictional or not. Who knows, something like it can be found one day, and you will have already named it. ^^
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PeteriDish In reply to flufdrax [2012-01-21 01:52:30 +0000 UTC]
Many thanks again!
The point is creating a lifeform that, though fictional, is plausible, so I'm extremely happy one of my first ideas succeeded. One animal doesn't make an ecosystem though, all of the work is still ahead, I have envisionned the most complex lifeforms to be hexapods with a rather freaky internal anatomy (which I haven't really finished yet) but that's about all. Yes, I had a load of freaky ideas, but those wouldn't work well within the anatomical framework I started to work on. I have to sketch them before I forget them so I can get back to them later.
On the other hand, nothing is too outlandish for evolution, sheer chance can lead to extraordinary results, like a behemoth hexapod "Diprobosciscus elephas" with a separate trunk for each nostrill that can reach the highest branches, break them off, reach underneath the belly where it has a giant beak that can crush wood and bones of predators, but I had a more externally conservative animal on mi mind as my next project.
I could have been a little bit ahead now, but I so messed up the digital version that I had to turn it into a silhouette to have at least something useful from it. This unfortunate creature was meant to be a jaguar of the planet's jumgles, you can see it even is of somewhat similar size to an earth's big cat.
I have always loved nature, recent or prehistoric, and I have been a passive spectator of many speculative biology projects, and i felt like I was too interrested in things like that to not join in.
I'm propelled by the ammount of beginner's
Now is the time for creating the "gillchewer" I so elusively hinted in the description!
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flufdrax In reply to PeteriDish [2012-01-21 02:27:47 +0000 UTC]
Fun stuff. It's nice to see someone who thinks in ecosystems and worlds as well, though most of m ideas stay in my mind as my creative energies get spent elsewhere.
I saw the silhouette, and think it's a good start. Hexapodal/tripodal anatomy is odd, and takes a bit of a mind twist to get to, but it is so fun.
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PeteriDish In reply to flufdrax [2012-01-21 07:12:05 +0000 UTC]
there'll be "centaurised" folms - that means the forelegs would be used asmanipulatory appendages or grasping appendages, so the animals would be functional quadrupeds but with free limbs ready for a different use. I will also have "birds" here, maybe various lineages (here on earth are various flying or gliding animals, so it is only logical to expect a variety of forms to be present. I have two basic body plans in mind one very bird-like, with the forelegs transformed into wings, midlegs would be walking legs and the hindlegs would shorten, but the feet would retain long digits, which could fold when perched and fan out when in flight, the other idea are "tetrapterons" havind six limbs just begs to be used that way...
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