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PitchBlackEspresso — ENDC Chapter 1 Part 2
Published: 2013-04-26 18:33:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 1982; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 4
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Here we go with part 2!
So, for everyone who had issues about what my starter might be, here he is, it's Mudkip sillies!
Also, forget everything I said about those old pages I had up, I just noticed they lookes waaay to awful to post them here, so I just redrew this part, and the next couples are going to get redrawn again. I know you couldn't care less about this, but I need something to write in here, and this funny fact came in handy to me. I know I'm useless
So, whatevs, hope you like it and stuff, and now I'll go eat ice cream, my reward for working so hard on this! Bye ~
PitchBlackEspresso out and over.
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Comments: 77
Hah, that Zigzagoon made me snicker a little, and Landon's attitude is just amazing.
I'm eagerly waiting what's up next...
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that was exaclty what i wanted, and, yes, landon IS amazing
i'm working on the next update!
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Your artwork is pretty great!! 
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Your handwriting is pretty.
... I just imagined how creepy it would be to start a conversation in real life like that. Fortunately, we're on the internet. ouo
Ummmm, moving on. 
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... you are the first person who ever said that to me. i swear.
eveything is possible on the internet, my dear~ omg that sounds slightly creepy
beginnings of gen 3 games take forever, but i tried to make it less painful, and it was fun to draw. and i can already tell you that this little guy isn't the last zigzagoon you will see (and this is totally not a spoiler) well, she wasn't totally useless, she took landon out of his pokeball after all
thank you
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But but but it's so remarkable!
Everything but physcial violence, so this becomes a little less creepy! :3
You definitely succeeded at making it less painful, and I have high hopes that you'll do the same for the 'saving Peeko' part because that's my least favourite part of any videogame ever. ouo
Good job then, Vera!
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remarkably horriblesay my friends
if something like that was possible, then the fact of being creepy would be our last problem xD
saving peeko, oh dear, there you got something i reeeeally fleshed out, you won't see anything of the in-game plot, ooh no
vera:
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Either they just want to annoy you or I have the worst taste ever.
Yeah, getting punched by the computer screen would be pretty uncool.
Oh yayyyy, that sounds very promising!
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both of those possibilities are rather worrysome
then you can punch it back. mashine will never be stronger than human being. i hope
it will (i think)!
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"and recently something really shocking happened.."
WHAT DID? TELLME.
ITS A MUDKIP. I TOTALLY GUESSED THAT RIGHT.
That.
Zigzagoon.
is so adorable<3.
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... shit. i didn't think anyone would read that wall of text (i was already thinking how intelligent i am by hiding that sentence in the middle of that pointless babbling)
how to explain? one BIG thing happened. one major spoiler for the entire comic T_T i can't talk about it now, it's a shhhhhhhhhecret~
here you get a cookie! 
thank you, i tried to make him as ydorable as possible
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Mwuahahah. I always check those texts for hidden messages~<3
/noms cookie
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i shall remember this for the future ~
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Hey! Looky here a Profesor's in danger. If a zigzagoon can scare him how does he research?
(Also do you want my opinion on the comic?)
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i guess he's just a retard well, the reason is really simple, you see, actually...
...
...
... next question, please.
well, yeah, why not, i hope it's not too bad so far :3
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Iiiiittttts EVALUATION TIME!!!
Your comic art is very expressive and uses font, over exaggeration and other techniques well to provide humor.
However You must work on paneling. Comics are red like English words left to right top to bottom. So most readers read the the next panel to the right not the one below them. So those little 3 stacks you have don't really work. There's two ways around them though. You can speperate them from the other panels so there the only panel on that line. Or second you could have some connection point between the panels (A word balloon a sound something that overlaps the panels). Also sometimes the balloons crowed the panel (Mostly the very bottom). That's my review!
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iiiiiittts ANSWER TIME! (omg i love adventure time xD)
thank you for this, it's good to hear what i've done good so far and what i can do to improve. now, are you talking about the three panels on the first page, right next to the bigger panel? i know, i didn't think about it at that moment, but the others are kinda, connected, i guess ( i guess...) however, thank you for the hints, i will try to avoid them in future pages!
thank you
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Well it was more based off of cilan from pokemon. XD
Well yeah in general those 3 panels stacked ontop of eachother right before a big panel tend not to work as well.
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pff, that's almost the same
then i shall connetc or avoid them
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SCREW THE RULES!!! 
an dawwww my god this is brilliant
YAY a mudkip 
i love them1!! an he's a bad assssss!
also Landon, heee sounds like London 
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I'M TOO COLL FOR THAT SHIT.
thank you!
and yes, he's totally badass
i'd love to go to london someday T_T
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heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee IM GOING THERE MONDAY woop woop!!!
gonna go to Camden town, where everythings gothicy and nerdy an SO AWESOME
maybe ill take some photos
I WANNA GO TO AMERICAAA one day.....one day!!!
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take me with youuuuuuuu, please, i don't want to go to school tomorrow, we have math exam
omg that will be AWESOME! cant' wait to see the pics, how long are you staying? :3
...me too, but i don't think that will ever happen...
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MATHS EXAM *grabs your arm* YOUR COMING WITH ME!!!
naaaa but seriously, good luuuuuck
I was TERRIBLE at maths i hope you do better than me!!!!
an hahaa only the day, we cant sleep over there, we are just traveling by train
im lucky i dont live tooo far away, about an hour trip by train
an what ill do is bring my camera, but if i dont take photos ill upload some of my old ones i have
wait....your NOT in america? where are you???
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EEEEEEEEE THANK YOU!
i'll need it T_T, thank you 
well, doesn't matter, it's quite awesome anyway
can't wait!
... wait, you thought i'm from america? that would be waaaay too awesome, nope, i'm from europe
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