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About the MOC
This is a MOC I tinkered together in one session/morning-afternoon. I was feeling the need to MOC but didn't have any plans, so I sat down and started tinkering with some of the parts I got from Witch Doctor , and out came this guy. I initially wanted to use just Hero Factory parts(minus pins and connector type parts that are essential), but I quickly found this MOC was going to be severely lacking if I had done that. So I opted for using bionicle and system parts, but with an emphasis on a HF build.
I kinda built this guy too fast. he's all done, and I had no time to think up a name or back story. For now he's just a nameless fighter. With some feedback from you guys, I'll go back and add his name and background, thusly finishing the edit and character.

He's probably gonna come apart once I need any of his parts, but I'll go ahead and turn on the critique for this MOC to get some feedback on the simpler HF build aspect of things.

Bio
Name suggested by Gale Winthrope on MOCpages. Neevak was temporarily known as "nameless Warrior"
Neevak is an excommunicated member of the Order Of Mata Nui . He was Exiled after questioning the order's leader, Helyx and refusing to follow orders when told to kill some rogue members who simply wanted to leave. Neevak will still protect Matoran and assist toa who bear no threat to him, but is not above killing toa or order members who try to assassinate or capture him.
Neevak is a very skilled warrior when it comes to hand to hand combat, but it's come at a price for him. He has very little control or use of elemental energy as he's spent his lifetime versing himself in hand to hand combat. His size also means he's not very strong, even for a toa. He relies on skills and tactics more than anything, and with this he's able to survive the assassination attempts and attacks by Makuta and Dark hunters. Neevak mostly spends his time wondering place to place, not staying in one place for too long. Most know him as "the nameless fighter," or "the mute warrior." Neevak is able to speak, but seldom does. He makes Kopaka seem chatty in comparison.

Description
About the MOC
This is a MOC I tinkered together in one session/morning-afternoon. I was feeling the need to MOC but didn't have any plans, so I sat down and started tinkering with some of the parts I got from Witch Doctor , and out came this guy. I initially wanted to use just Hero Factory parts(minus pins and connector type parts that are essential), but I quickly found this MOC was going to be severely lacking if I had done that. So I opted for using bionicle and system parts, but with an emphasis on a HF build.
I kinda built this guy too fast. he's all done, and I had no time to think up a name or back story. For now he's just a nameless fighter. With some feedback from you guys, I'll go back and add his name and background, thusly finishing the edit and character.

He's probably gonna come apart once I need any of his parts, but I'll go ahead and turn on the critique for this MOC to get some feedback on the simpler HF build aspect of things.

Bio
Name suggested by Gale Winthrope on MOCpages. Neevak was temporarily known as "nameless Warrior"
Neevak is an excommunicated member of the Order Of Mata Nui . He was Exiled after questioning the order's leader, Helyx and refusing to follow orders when told to kill some rogue members who simply wanted to leave. Neevak will still protect Matoran and assist toa who bear no threat to him, but is not above killing toa or order members who try to assassinate or capture him.
Neevak is a very skilled warrior when it comes to hand to hand combat, but it's come at a price for him. He has very little control or use of elemental energy as he's spent his lifetime versing himself in hand to hand combat. His size also means he's not very strong, even for a toa. He relies on skills and tactics more than anything, and with this he's able to survive the assassination attempts and attacks by Makuta and Dark hunters. Neevak mostly spends his time wondering place to place, not staying in one place for too long. Most know him as "the nameless fighter," or "the mute warrior." Neevak is able to speak, but seldom does. He makes Kopaka seem chatty in comparison.