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PM-James — 042 Shining C. Leaving the Guardian's Lair
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Published: 2017-10-18 08:46:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 2646; Favourites: 28; Downloads: 1
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So first things first, sorry I'm late, I was very unhappy with this age and spent a while cleaning it up. Still have some issues with it but I'm much happier with it than I was. So with this we'll be saying goodbye to Dragonite (Enigma actually but they don't know that) and the Guardian's Lair for a while, they'll be back later but not for a little while. With that we'll begin the final segments of the first chapter of this story, Crystal's Attack very soon. Not to much else to say really, hope you guys enjoy and more to come.First: Next: , Previous:
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that not Dragonite because i can smelllllll him i can smellllllllllllllllll him then i can khow are he a reallllllllllllllllll dragonite
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Yeah it's Enigma at this point.
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Uh...why does it say in the description the next page comes out on Sept 6th but it's Oct already.
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Who's the vaporeon?
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His name is Aqualus.
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Replied to the wrong person.
That Vaporeon is a member of the family. I can't remember his name right now.
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I was not asking you. I was asking the creator
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Right but you replied to my comment. That's all. No worries.
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Okay. I wasn't trying to be rude.
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I know. It's okay.
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Good,butdon'talkaboutdisturbingthings,becauseI'malady
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...never said anything disturbing...as far as I know.
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I was just trying to tell u that I'm a girl. Not trying to be rude. You'll see me when I get a computer for Christmas. I'll draw myself for you. You'll see me, but wait 'till xmas!
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Uhh... Okay..? You...don't have to go and do that...I mean you can if you want to...as it's your choice.
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I mean Moon! (Me) I'm in character on DA!!!
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Ah. So then you mean you're a Shiny Umbreon? I get ya.
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Yes. As I said earlier, female.
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Uh huh. And my in character pokemon is Sylveon...and I'm a male.
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Not sure if intentional, but
5th panel - dragonite has an uncoloured eye on his right. And the placement of the bridge of the nose looks pretty odd having a straight black line there
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I don't really get what you're talking about. Dragonite isn't in the 5th Panel, he doesn't show up till the 7th and his eyes are only visible in the 7th and 8th. His eyes are colored in both, the time is about sunset, with sunlight coming straight into the doorway. In both both of these panels, light is directly hitting the right side of his face, the other side being shadowed, so the left side of him is much darker. Line on his nose looks fine to me, don't see anything wrong with that either.
I'm not real happy with this page still but most of my issues are background or shading related.
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Regardless I liked it anyways
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8th panel sorry. I just figured it was something because it looked pretty unusual. I guess angles do things eh?
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Enigma is a fine name for that Zoroark. I am a little sad to se them that reliefed and happy while they are talking to a key-pokemon in Nightmares plan to possibly kill them all.
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Yeah, I liked that name in general for Zoroark and I thought it fit the character too, so works all around. Yeah kind of a bitter sweet sequence, given they're all happy but don't know about that.
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good thing he turned down the party invitation damn
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Yeah, well he's supposed to keep a low profile, so showing up to a party isn't really doing that. He might tell Nightmare about it though.
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Now I am imagine this:
Nightmare: "Well hello dear Family!"
All get ready to fight. They secure the children.
"You won't get us killed Nightmare! We will fight till our last breath!" Solar says
"Very well them, I will....wait...is that...Mr. Skittyloom Deluxe champagner?"
"Eh....yes?"
"Well...you know...tommorow is still a day to fight. Let's open up this baby!"
"But, you can't...."
"What, only because I am a villain doesn't mean I don't need a good time?"
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That take the story in a different direction XD
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