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Published: 2018-07-13 03:28:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 2528; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 2
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This sequence continues with the most heated part of it. This page is what I often call the meat of something, this page contains the emotions, the characterization, etc. I must have done about five drafts for this page to get it just right and spent quite a bit of time choreographing it to achieve the goals that I set out to achieve and I think it really shows here. I am very happy how this page came together and I really hope it has the impact that I sought to achieve. If successful, this should be one of the most, if not the most, emotional pages I have ever done. One page left to go for this sequence.
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Comments: 5
This is a great page. I really feel for Tyler.
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This is my favorite of Tyler's Goodbye, think it achieved everything I set out to achieve.
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Yeah, you did a good job.
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So here we go with the argument. This page showed me that I never really realized how big of a troubling situation they are really in. Cause Tyler is right: They had this much trouble with one attack of Crystal which she not even finsished. While I disagree with Tyler that they would have been utter defeated, not mentioning dying in this, I believe there would have been much trouble. I still can't fully see behind it. It really is a complicated situation with both sites fully being right. After a little time has passed, I realize now: I am a little dissapointed in Tyler he has so low confidence in his family.
As for the page itself: Text wise "You can not deny that!" and "until I saw mom on the ground..." got me most. You really did well with the language in this page, which is my provisionally favourite out of the three. That might change.
Drawing wise I have some highlights too of course. Tylers body language along with his tear- filled face in panel 3 is impactful and sad. A reallly smmart combination you did there. Harvests face in panel face 4 really gets me too. Oh how I just wanna hug this boy and stroke his neck. Favourite, like you may have expected, is the balck and white panel. It's just very meaningful and also kinda acts like a center point of the argument to me. It's a little hard to say what I mean.
Oh, and I was going to do this in my last comment on page 3, but I wanna know a little in detail if you don't mind: Now that some time have passed, are you satisfied in all areas and why?
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Yep, that’s the Shining Consequence the story is named after. Well he’s not exactly wrong, Blaze and Aqualus were defeated and could have been killed. Solar so far was the only one in the family that has been confident challenging her. They both are right.
It’s not really that he doesn’t have confidence in them, it’s kind of the opposite really. He expects that if he remains with them, they will protect him and risk injury, death, etc by doing so. He’s basically having a guilt complex, believing it’s wrong and selfish of him to expect that of them.
Thanks, I probably wrote about five drafts to get this page just right, since it is supposed to be the heat of the argument. The Black and White panel I wanted to be the most impactful. If anything sticks with you, I wanted it to be that shot and what is said there.
I am very happy how these pages came together, I think they accomplished exactly what I set out to accomplish.
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