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probirdbrain β€” Problems with HIE #2

Published: 2016-06-18 02:10:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 1016; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 1
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Description Sin #2: While not as common as making the human character a doormat, there are quite a few HIE fics where the human character is prone to angry outburst to any ponies that are unfortunate enough to be in close proximity of them. While many has the human character in situations that would be emotionally troubling to anyone, it makes it hard to sympathies with the character every time they yell at a pony for seemingly small reasons. This is not to say that they are not justified in feeling angry, this sin is directed to the stories where the human would rage even when the ponies are just trying to help in certain situations because god forbid they make mistakes.Β 

Side note: Here's #2, for the record 1,2 and 3 are both made before I even released the 1st one. Anyway, agree, disagree or want to make a suggestion, I would love to hear it.

Bonus sins: ( for the record, these sin are not pre-made, I'm writing this as I'm posting)
> heavy is not wearing cosmetics despite wanting "humans (as in any person) in Equestria" and not "Tf2 characters in Equestria" Β ( in other words, not being a OC)
> anime reference X3
> heavy was not this close to a wall when we last saw him
> explosion has a random cube in it
> Pinkie's leg position looks weird when she drops the dime

Sin #3: Sin #3: anthro for the purpose of sex (maybe NSFW)
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Comments: 7

CommanderCTC [2016-06-21 19:23:07 +0000 UTC]

Wanna know another sin that is in almost all M.L.P. stories?
It's always the ones that had or came from a F***ked life... Or ones that have an extreme P.T.S.D. that if they hear a whistle from a tea kettle...
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Run... Just run and hide from those guys...

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probirdbrain In reply to CommanderCTC [2016-06-21 19:42:03 +0000 UTC]

yes, I've been noticing that as well, my best guess on why people do that is to make "being trapped in Equestria" or "I'm making a new life in Equestria" seem a lot less dramatic than it should be.Β 

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CommanderCTC In reply to probirdbrain [2016-06-22 22:42:58 +0000 UTC]

And lets not forget that almost all of them are from the military or had served in their time... Or killed in action...
Funny thing about the soldier boys... They're always from the U.S. and are in the marines too...
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What about the rest of the world?

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probirdbrain In reply to CommanderCTC [2016-06-22 22:47:06 +0000 UTC]

I think we have different interpretations of your original comment, whoops...

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CommanderCTC In reply to probirdbrain [2016-06-22 23:01:29 +0000 UTC]

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Opps...
Sorry, I was racking my brain around a bit on writing a reply... But I typed out the wrong response. Sorry.

But I had noticed this when it comes to their back stories is that most of the time, their parents are dead from (Insert tragic death) and the M.C. is kept being reminded about his parents.
Granted, I understand that it's supposed to give the hero(?) some back story and to make us feel bad for them... But keep bringing up "MY PARENTS ARE DEAD! I'M ALL ALONE!" line again and again, can get a bit annoying.
Doesn't improve theΒ hero(?), it just makes them a broken record player.

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probirdbrain In reply to CommanderCTC [2016-06-22 23:02:30 +0000 UTC]

already made a comic on it

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CommanderCTC In reply to probirdbrain [2016-06-22 23:08:38 +0000 UTC]

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Oh yeah... Β Heh...

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