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psycobabble402 — Jim Sketch Comparison

Published: 2010-08-04 03:16:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 761; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 20
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Description Feed back is appreciated!!!!

The more I look at the bottom sketch on [link]
the less I like it.
So I redid it, bigger this time so I could do the face better. While this body is better this time around I'm not yet satisfied with his face. Its off. And his hair was an issue for the first time. Try as I might I couldn't get it to work with me. :anger:

Here's the two side by side for comparison. Thought?


Based on a screen shot from the movie, directly from TP.

Jim Hawkins (c) *Disney
Both sketches are mine
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Comments: 11

eva0mwah [2010-08-05 10:15:40 +0000 UTC]

The second attempt is way better cause the head works with the other whole body(in the first the head is a bit small i think)Plus,i think his eyebrows should be a bit more higher.
Still,awesome work and try-it's pose is really good and correct and I love his boots and his hands!(i know how hard it to draw-.-'')

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psycobabble402 In reply to eva0mwah [2010-08-05 14:06:09 +0000 UTC]

yeah, hands are a real pain in the neck to draw, but his boots I actually rather enjoy doing cuz I love them! XD
And yeah, the head of the 1st one is rather small. Thanks so much!

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Thunderscape-7 [2010-08-04 04:15:27 +0000 UTC]

You definetly improved on the second one. I love the face and the hands, basically everything looks great
The proportions look improved as well. On the first one it looked like his head shrunk

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psycobabble402 In reply to Thunderscape-7 [2010-08-04 05:00:45 +0000 UTC]

yeah! I know (about the tiny head) that's what drove me to redo it lol

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Thunderscape-7 In reply to psycobabble402 [2010-08-04 05:06:20 +0000 UTC]

hehe

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psycobabble402 In reply to Thunderscape-7 [2010-08-04 16:36:06 +0000 UTC]

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3rYnALDG [2010-08-04 04:08:28 +0000 UTC]

The one on the right is much better then the one on the right but both of them are still very good. I'm not very good at drawing people doing much other then standing.

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psycobabble402 In reply to 3rYnALDG [2010-08-04 05:00:39 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. And it really helps when u're working with a good reference. XD

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3rYnALDG In reply to psycobabble402 [2010-08-04 21:38:48 +0000 UTC]

Oh so true!

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psycobabble402 In reply to 3rYnALDG [2010-08-05 14:10:11 +0000 UTC]

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3rYnALDG In reply to psycobabble402 [2010-08-05 17:08:28 +0000 UTC]

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