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Celestial Soul (c) *Purrlstar
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Celestial soul and all the characters are (c) to me (Purrlstar) and if you steal them I. Will. Hunt. You. Down. >8C
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COOLCATGIRLS [2015-02-19 19:07:05 +0000 UTC]
aw! I think they are so cute together ! Right? You did a great job to make that! You know?
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mollo98 [2011-07-15 23:23:57 +0000 UTC]
Aryn! its your cuzzzz! i love this picture! it is sooo awesome and very...AWESOME! i love u!! cant wait to see u soon!
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SophTheKrazyKittyKat [2011-07-12 04:25:42 +0000 UTC]
sophie be my name......XDDDDD cools! x3
iluvurart.
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aqua23water [2010-11-08 23:26:49 +0000 UTC]
AAAAAAAW I CANT WAIT TO SEE MORE IT SUCH A CUTE COMIC <3333
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Purrlstar In reply to aqua23water [2010-11-10 01:51:44 +0000 UTC]
Thank-you! I decided I'd open up with a cute litte love scene, I dont know many comics that do that xD
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Purrlstar In reply to aqua23water [2010-11-10 02:03:21 +0000 UTC]
especially an awesome action-mystery comic like mine |D
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KT-245 [2010-10-25 23:19:08 +0000 UTC]
Nice! I love the layout of the page, and the subdued colors. I also like how you made the collar prominent in the final panel... we know the main characters name and we know she's a kitty pet, but it doesn't have to be explicitly stated.
My only complaint is that you could have added more details to the buildings (mainly windows) to make them look more realistic and interesting.
But seriously, great start.
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Purrlstar In reply to KT-245 [2010-10-25 23:22:26 +0000 UTC]
Thankyou so much! I'm getting all kinds of awesome feedback on this picture, and it makes me so happy that you guys like my work!~ >w<
My sister said that too, but I was so tired of shading those things xDDD (I used like 7 layers of shading on the buildings in the first pannel alone)
and if you look closely, I hid my username in the picture in two places ;D
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KT-245 In reply to Purrlstar [2010-10-25 23:26:18 +0000 UTC]
I noticed one username, not both. XD
Wow, thats A LOT of layers, you really shouldn't need that many. I have found that in Photoshop I often had many layers that could have easily been only one or two. And I have a bad habit of not naming my layers so I often got confused, lol.
Adding details like that can be tedious, but it really pays off in the long run. You can also use brushes and patterns to make you work easier for you when dealing with repetitive imagery. (But remember, make your own brushes!)
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Purrlstar In reply to KT-245 [2010-10-25 23:30:13 +0000 UTC]
I didnt actually make new layers for each thing, I used the dodge and burn tool and shaded the intire thing once going back over it twice that I smudged into the main structure, and counted that as one layer, I did that two more times, before going over them again with the spraycan twice.
so adding windows would have been very dificult seing how I did most of my shading on the main color of the blocks of the buildings, but I made up for it I think with the last minuite decision of putting reflcections of the first scene in the glass window and door of the last pannel.
and yes, most of the time I hide two of my signature in my images, the first one is usually very easy to find, the second one.. not always ;D
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KT-245 In reply to Purrlstar [2010-10-26 00:39:19 +0000 UTC]
You could have added windows on a layer above the buildings, then adjusted the opacity/contrast ect. until it looked good. Just a suggestion.
Also, I wouldn't rely too much on the smudge and dodge tools. They are nice shortcuts, but overuse can hurt your art in the long art. That's the general consensus anyway.
Oh and random, but i actually did a Thunderpaw sketch back in my art block, if you want i could color it for ya. XD
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Purrlstar In reply to KT-245 [2010-10-26 00:54:48 +0000 UTC]
yes, I agree. I'm just lazy and wanted the main foucus on that pannel to be the sun, and the light and shadows x3
I know, I try hard not to, but I was an MS paint artist for so long, and I only descovered the dodge/burn last year xD so I'm a bit obsessed with them
REALLY? 8D that makes me so happy! thunderpaw is like my favorite OC right up there with Phoenix, I'd love to see him
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KT-245 In reply to Purrlstar [2010-10-26 02:28:23 +0000 UTC]
Ugh MS paint never did use it much. Actually my main piece of advice for you is to try to do more natural blending and not use the smudge tool so much. But keep it up, the comics great so far!
And i'll let you know when i'm done coloring him.
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KylieKattu [2010-10-25 22:14:14 +0000 UTC]
You did so good! 8D It starts it off pretty well
And yes...your bgs...I am jealous.
JELOUSYYYYY.
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Purrlstar In reply to KylieKattu [2010-10-25 22:16:12 +0000 UTC]
that means a lot, since I reffed most of my comic layout from yours XDD;
It didn't take as long as it looks, but it was a pain in the rear to do x3
(the buildings in the second pannel are lazyyyyyyyy |D )
but the potted plant was fun
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joek09 [2010-10-25 20:29:42 +0000 UTC]
Oh my goodness I love it so much!!!
I love how you shaded the rooftops, great sense of light, and the bar is placed pretty perfectly dividing the attention from the landscape and the characters, done very well!
If I had to give a hardcore crit on it, the building on the bottom right seems lit weird, and the one right above them seems lit odd... but that could just be me. and the depth on the little thing on top of that same building seems a bit odd... but I don't really know how you would work that out. :/ The bottom is pretty great, love how you handled the background and the text bubble is just opaque enough to read it, but still translucent, good call. I absolutely love how you do eyes in general, and this is no exception, haha.
Again, if I went in super crit mode the right side of the flower pot thing seems odd... but it is pretty good... I'm just too used to super crits, haha.
The more I look at the top scene the more I can see it on a poster for the comic or something, haha.
Great stuff overall, can't wait to see the rest of it!
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Purrlstar In reply to joek09 [2010-10-25 20:31:58 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much!
I am trying my best to work on the comic, but my life is about to get really busy
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joek09 In reply to Purrlstar [2010-10-25 20:34:52 +0000 UTC]
Aw, no problem at all, haha. I love your art, and I'm glad to help any way I can.
Aww, in a good way or bad way? I hope in a good way, haha.
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Wolfy-Artist [2010-10-25 20:14:17 +0000 UTC]
B'awwww Sophie is so cute >w<
I can't wait for the next page!
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Purrlstar In reply to Wolfy-Artist [2010-10-25 20:23:01 +0000 UTC]
Remember not to say the names of the ones that haven't been introduced yet ;D
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Wolfy-Artist In reply to Purrlstar [2010-10-25 20:55:35 +0000 UTC]
I know ;D
(Sophie has a name tag~)
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Purrlstar In reply to Wolfy-Artist [2010-10-25 22:04:24 +0000 UTC]
Yes she does~ ^^ I hope its easy to read xD
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Dreaming-of-fall [2010-10-25 20:14:12 +0000 UTC]
Cuute~ 8D ... your BG makes me weep with jealousy. D< XDD NEXT PAEG
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Purrlstar In reply to Dreaming-of-fall [2010-10-25 20:22:44 +0000 UTC]
it took forever xDD
but I'm glad you like it C:
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