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Purrlstar In reply to kyuubi1161 [2011-09-30 00:19:42 +0000 UTC]

yes! I lost my thumbnail sketches of the next few pages, and forgot to script out that part, but I promise the production will continue soon!! right now I have a pretty crazy life scedual, and it started back in june and hasnt slowed down, we're /almost/ at the point where everything will settle down, and then I'll start working on all my delayed prodjects c8

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Purrlstar In reply to mollo98 [2011-09-19 15:18:49 +0000 UTC]

I'M WORKING ON IT, DONT RUSH ME WOMAN! D8<

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Purrlstar In reply to The-TAE [2011-09-01 19:10:24 +0000 UTC]

it shall get better >|3 I'm glad you like it

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The-TAE In reply to Purrlstar [2011-09-01 19:17:26 +0000 UTC]

awesome XD
and yeah i had seen it being posted a while ago, i just like to wait for a bulk to build up makes me sink into the story more XDD

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Purrlstar In reply to The-TAE [2011-09-01 19:19:18 +0000 UTC]

Yes, I do that same thing sometimes xD
I neeeeeed to find the thumbnail sketches I did on paper somewhere so I can draw the next four pages for the end of the first chapter! ;3;

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The-TAE In reply to Purrlstar [2011-09-01 19:26:25 +0000 UTC]

i missplace my sketches for comic ALL THE TIME it's such a pain, but i always find them eventually X3
i hope you get a hold of them soon

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Purrlstar In reply to KT-245 [2011-06-25 22:29:09 +0000 UTC]

More details story-wise or better shading? I only put one layer of shading to make it look more simple like memories c8
The wording for this page isn't the best, because I didn't lay out the scene this way in the script xDD

ah, good point, I didn't even think about that I was just putting them where they were out of the way from the picture xD;
No, no humans ;D you'll see what happened to daddy on the next page C:

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KT-245 In reply to Purrlstar [2011-06-25 22:35:58 +0000 UTC]

I mean in terms of story. Do you really want it to be so vague?

What kind of rouge? Why did he attack the family: because he was a jerk? Because he wanted their food? Maybe a sinister feud? If you want to leave such details out, maybe flesh out the feelings main character cat had when mom died. Or a little bit of who mom was. This just feels a little flat for what should have be an emotional flashback.

It's still good, I'm just trying to give constructive criticism. There is still a lot of story left. But remember that details can make a story much, much better.

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Purrlstar In reply to KT-245 [2011-06-25 22:44:44 +0000 UTC]

That is true, but this part has almost nothing to do with the plotline. I'm just trying to answer the main questions that the reader has from being thrust into the middle of the story like this, to be honest

Main character cat wouldn't know what happened as to why the rouge attacked, so that's why that is left out, the next page has his feelings for when his mom died.
I meant to add her personality and such, but I was having a hard time figuring out how to describe that, and again, he's so little he may not know either. I figured her actions would speak louder than her words ;D

Don't worry I love your constructive criticism <3

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KT-245 In reply to Purrlstar [2011-06-26 01:12:15 +0000 UTC]

True, but back story is important for developing a character. And if he didn't know, you should have let us know... that he didn't know. lol.

And good! Some people get upset if you criticize in any way so I'm careful.

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Purrlstar In reply to Ando-An [2011-06-25 22:25:55 +0000 UTC]

it is rather fancy looking~ and it was quick and easy to do c8

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Purrlstar In reply to Annalane [2011-06-25 22:26:15 +0000 UTC]

thanks

you'll have to wait and see ;D

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Annalane In reply to Purrlstar [2011-06-25 22:27:37 +0000 UTC]

np

wahhtt?? the suspence!!
lolz ok! x3

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