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Published: 2009-10-16 09:55:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 1904; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 60
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The required design sheet for my Entervoid submission.Don't worry, I'm still working on the commissions
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I can get to you on here or on Void, either way- it's the same.
On most of these shots, her body is generally disproportionate and extremely masculine. I would start by watching the size of the limbs. Her arms seem alright, but her legs, torso and neck are very long. I would give her more definition in her bust to make it appear that she IS female and has some sort of indication that she has breasts. (folds in clothing, underline of breast) Watch with the bulge lines in the arm, its giving that old fat circle man look. Smooth the lines and connect them instead. Another small note, minimize the width of her ankles, they have some awesome cankle action going on.
I would strongly suggest giving her a bit more detail clothing wise. Here you have a cool mask, and then plain white clothes, it's a real let down. Maybe add some color to make her pop more.
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Oh god, I feel like such a geek, her name and her powers made my mind immediately bring up seeing her as a Trapinch ;A;
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Trapinch is uh, is a Pokemon-thing, that picture is pretty much what it looks like .A.; (It's some kind of ant-lion)
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I know what a Trapinch is.
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Oh, okay, I'm sorry-again, I'm sorry <:'D
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lol, no need to be sorry
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for the text about her, writing it neater or using a typeface from photoshop would make it easier to read what you wrote about her. it's small and the edges of the brush have the lines run into each other.
Luniara's right about the limbs, things are out of proportion and the muscle definition isn't right. Smoothing out the lines would help. In the forward shots, the definition on her stomach is too deep, a thinner brush would help it not seem as off.
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cool character man but i was wondering what does the 2 metal stuff on her back do or whats it for or how it came there
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You'll have to wait for her story to unfold on entervoid.
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awesome i want 2 see her fight fooray's bro
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I think you have done excellent work a design sheet is hard , you shined.
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hands are a smidge small on the forward-profile. neat mask though
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I don't see anything they would find wrong unless they are super nit-picky. Aside from the thickness of the feet in the back pose I don't see anything wrong with the proportions. Don't forget to post in the Incubator section of the forums before you submit it.
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why for?
Given some of the terrible stuff I've seen that's approved I don't think they're going to be too nitpicky
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It's recommended and they prefer that everyone do that.
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Yes well I might be one of those terrible things approved but to clarify... you don't have to post in incubator. It's not mandatory. Not everyone does. But incubator is if you want people to see your character and you want feedback. Otherwise as long as your entry is complete and you feel confident about it, you can just submit it.
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Indeed nice. A very visually interesting character. I just can't find better words to describe it.
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