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Description Pretty-Pretty Marin.
My Shakugan no Shana oc. <3

Basic Information
Given Name: Marin Tyrrell (Roughly: Stubborn Star of the Sea)
Name: Rin (Translates to Cold in Japanese)
Gender: Female
Origin: England
Age: Physically: 21 (DOB: January 1st, 1640)
Race: Flame Haze

Theme Song:
We are Scientists --Nobody Move, Nobody Get Hurt ([link] )


Appearance:
The Frosted Sword of Animus can most accurately be described as Lyr's 'ideal beauty'.

Her facial features are very feminine; a small nose and chin, full, glossy lips and a high, tailored brow marking her gender without question. In contrast to her otherwise minimized features, however; Marin's eyes are fairly large, and appear as a haunting shade of ice blue—the kind of colour that could literally freeze a man's heart. For the purpose of accentuating her eyes, Marin will often wear heavy black eyeliner and shadowy, glitter-infused powder to further stress the frigidity of her gaze. Velvety platinum waves frame her face and taper off somewhere around her mid-back, her fringe covering the majority of her forehead in a silvery shroud. Regardless of its seemingly refined appearance, her mane appears to be styled somewhat haphazardly, messy waves punctuating a series of arbitrary layers, which create the illusion of precision.

Physically, Marin is of average height and weight, (5'7" and 130lb respectively,) and appears evenly balanced in terms of proportion. While her ample bust and broad hips tend to detract from an otherwise slender waistline, her stature retains a sense of frailness not easily counteracted, regardless of muscular toning. Marin's complexion can most accurately be described as a mix of peaches and cream, and is more or less unscathed in terms of physical alterations and scarring. As an exception, however; the name of her Contractor "LYR" is tattooed on her lower-left abdomen in a Gothic Blackletter font, effectively branding her as 'his property'. In addition, there are a few scars on her personage that have yet to fully heal, leaving minor imperfections to stain the canvas of her flesh. Her nails, (including her toenails,) while trimmed to a workable length, are often decorated to match the trim of her clothing and coated with a thick, water-resistant gloss.

In terms of clothing, Marin opts to dress both simply and immodestly. Consequently, she can commonly be seen wearing a strapless black dress, (which can be reversed to white,) with pearl white boots, (which happen to be the Houga Taleria,) and baby blue tights that extend a few inches above her knees. A fairly oversized white belt can be found stretching between her hips, the buckle comprised of an odd formation of liquid-like blue crystal most know as 'Deep Pocket'. The crystal itself is often situated to the right of Marin's hips, as she feels that drawing a sword from one's crotch is a lewd remark waiting to happen. She will usually wear a long hooded jacket over this ensemble, which boasts sleeves that stretch beyond the length of her arms when straightened. The jacket itself is primarily black, though the bottom third of either sleeve, as well as the rimming and interior of the garment, match her tights. Silver hoops can be found in her ears, and matching bangles can often be found on either wrist, amidst the Houga Vajra, should she choose to remove her jacket. A blue topaz pendant rests around her neck and its chain is wrapped in triplicate, allowing the remainder of the chain to dangle freely towards her breasts.


Personality:
There is something to be said for those who choose to dance on thin ice, though the edict itself is questionable at best. Marin is the type of woman who would sing a solemn tune with the utmost gaiety, or glide across an ice-flow as it shattered beneath her feet; she is a woman who lives from moment to moment. Unsurprisingly, she has a tendency to act without considering the consequences of her actions, and has been described as impatient, reckless and egoistic by those who have had the displeasure of facing her. On the reverse, her intelligence, determination and reliability have also been subject to notation. In addition, Marin is well known for her willingness to treat individuals indiscriminately, regardless of power or status, and is one of the few Flame Haze who offer empathy to torches.

Marin's temperament is most accurately portrayed as a fluctuating entity, though she is commonly characterized by a disingenuous smile and an air of perpetual disinterest. If these facades should falter, however; she is notably quick to anger, and prefers acrimony to extroversion. Consequently, she is frequently perceived as pragmatic and finicky, and is quite difficult to persuade or please. Despite a tendency to resort to introversion, Marin is a fairly passionate and decisive individual, and seems to thrive during stressful and overbearing situations. She firmly believes in herself and her ideals, and hopes that one day, she may be able to look back on her life knowing she made a difference. As a result, Marin resents being criticized, corrected or ignored, though she tends to hate being ordered around just as much.

Regardless of a penchant for distemper, Marin is consistently loyal to those she happens to care for, going so far as to devalue her own existence in times where such individuals are threatened. She rarely shows signs of fear or trepidation, (despite feeling their full effects,) and meets distressing situations with a sense of indolence. During conflict, Marin trends towards sarcastic and mockingly polite verbatim, and commonly resorts to humorous small talk to mentally disarm her opponents. This often makes it difficult to discern whether or not Marin is flying by the seat of her pants or truly prepared, and tends to work in her favour. On occasion, and if the stakes are large enough, Marin will actually make an effort to act strategically.

A few interesting facts about Marin
*Her favourite foods come in drive-thru bags as a result of a certain distaste for, (and inability to,) cook.
*Marin frequently spends her free time driving around in expensive rentals, despite her Houga's affinity for flight.
*She will not be seen in public without make-up.
*She has a soft spot for animals despite being unable to keep a pet, and frequently donates money to animal shelters.
*Marin actually hates expressive activities like dancing and drama, but loves listening to music.
*She tends to be a bit of a 'Grammar Nazi', and enjoys reading and writing.
*Slushie fishbowl drinks are the quickest way to get her to 'open up'.
*Stargazer lilies are her favourite flower. She despises roses.
*Marin has written a 'fictional' account of her journies as a Flame Haze, though she has made no effort to publish them. The main character's name is Riddel.


Biography: -Timeline for the time being-
*Born in England (Parents Demelza and Bartholomew Tyrell; Older Sister Riddel.)
*Father mercilessly beat Demelza, who took the brunt of his anger to protect Riddel and Marin.
*When Demelza tried to leave, Bartholomew countered with an acquisition of witchcraft.
*Demelza was imprisoned, tortured and eventually convicted. She was sentenced to death by hanging.
*In the months leading up to Demelza's execution date, Bartholomew began to terrorize the children.
*Both Marin and Riddel would visit their mother every day after church. One one of these days, Demelza handed each a piece of the pendant she had always worn—twin halves of a simple treasure tool.
* The day prior to her execution, they were confronted before leaving to see Demelza, prompting Bartholomew to lose his temper with Riddel.
*After a failed attempt to disarm her father in the abbey, Riddel would be brutally assaulted.
*Marin hid herself in a secret crawlspace, silently crying while her father searched desperately for her.
*When she emerged on the day of her mother's execution, Marin tried to see Demelza one last time, only to be caught by Bartholomew's hand. Before an intense alleyway beating could commence, however; the entire square, which had been packed with people crying out for the witch to be burned, had been overtaken by a Fuzetzu.
*Marin was initially floored by the results, as she had been the only one moving. When the Rinne responsible for the disturbance showed itself, (ironically in a form bearing a startling resemblance to a witch,) it quickly began to convert the occupants of the Fuzetzu into power of existence. Marin had no idea what to do.
*Riddel, despite her injuries, had appeared from the sidelines, urging Marin to run. Marin, however, found herself unable to move.
*When the Rinne noticed the girl's banter, it was confused. The two girls had been moving within the Fuzetzu, and yet...were obviously human, evident by their lack of 'flame'. Nevertheless, the Rinne attacked the girls. Marin was saved by a last minute 'shove' from Riddel.
*Soon thereafter, the Rinne removed Riddel's half of her treasure tool from her possession before eating her, a response which had Marin both frozen and teary-eyed. Rather than assault the younger girl directly, however; the Rinne utilized an unrestricted spell to bind her to the ground so that she may witness the 'wickedness' the villagers had sought to eradicate.
*Everyone inside the Fuzetzu was eaten that day, save for Marin.
*When all was said and done, the Rinne approached Marin to ask if she had anything left to live for, to which Marin did not reply. Pleased with her ability to effectively crush the girl's spirit, the Rinne then asked her if she was ready to be 'cleansed' of her misery, or, by implication, life.
*Before Marin could answer the Rinne's question, however; a voice had come to her. A smooth, comforting tone that urged her to ignore the Rinne's jeers. After slyly talking his way into the child's frail mentality, he managed to convince her to 'take one last stand', and to make a contract with him.
*Despite an inherent lack of understanding, Marin chose to cling to her life, and accepted the contract with The Surging Tide of Influence. His only condition was that she remain 'forever his'. At the time, this was something the child did not understand, though she would certainly come to discover his meaning over time. When asked to choose a Jinki, Marin chose the 'puzzle ring', because it represented a cooperative attitude.
*This contract made Marin a flame haze at the age of ten, and as per Lyr's request, permanently aged her body to that of someone in their early twenties. It was at this time that Marin retrieved the Houga 'Emania'.
*With Lyr's power, Marin defeated the Rinne with minimal trouble, (though her success had been an indirect result of the Denizen's surprise.)
*After the Rinne was defeated, Lyr told Marin how to unlock the Fuzetzu. Since the entire village had already been destroyed and consumed, and because he really didn't care either way, he did not tell her to use the remaining power of existence to repair the damages.
*Once the seal was lifted, Lyr urged Marin to leave the village, to which she obliged. After all, there was no reason to remain in a destroyed, empty village.
*Over the course of a century, Marin engaged in many battles, and along the way, received the Houga 'Deep Pocket' and 'Talaria'. She also mastered the art of swordsmanship, and became a master with Lyr's Houga.
*Unfortunately, as Lyr's 'property', Marin is terribly lonely, and constantly seeks to fill the void in her life with something of substance. She still hasn't found a long-term solution.


Battle Information
Weaponry: Emania (See Houga)
Supplies: Deep Pocket (See Houga); Talaria (See Houga); Vajra (See Houga); Dúcheist (See Jinki); as well as the multitude of items stored within Deep Pocket.

Flame Haze Extension
Title: The Frosted Sword of Animus

Jinki: Dúcheist: A puzzle ring with intricate detailing and six pieces. While the majority of the ring is comprised of silver detailing, two out of the six bands are created from sleeves of thermochromatic liquid crystal, allowing them to change colour based on Marin's body temperature, much like mood-rings of modern day. Unfortunately, this effect is often spoiled by Lyr's influence, and the ring often remains a cold shade of blue.

Colour of Flame: Ice Blue

Houga:
Emania (Land of the Moon):
A Treasure Tool in the shape of a medieval long sword. It is considered an Arms-type treasure tool, and was crafted by the Crimson Lord Lyr prior to his contract with Marin.

While Emania's hilt is relatively average compared to similar swords, (regardless of customary detailing,) the blade itself appears vaporous. In fact, the entire cutting surface is formed from a collection of particles so faint, most question their existence. The reflections from Emania's ever-changing blade are indeed beautiful to behold, though they are often mistaken for 'mere tricks of light', and consistently underestimated. Consequently, no weapon is more suitable for catching unsuspecting enemies off-guard.

Rin has long since realized the full potential of Emania's power, and his capable of channelling Power of Unrestraint through the weapon. While her ability to transform the particles used to forge the blade to ice, (as well as sprout additional ice flows,) earned her the title 'The Frosted Sword of Animus', she is also capable of dispersing the particles in streams of water.

Deep Pocket:
A Treasure Tool in the shape of a strangely crystalline belt buckle, which can commonly be found on the right side of Rin's belt. While the item itself appears impressive in terms of appearance, it possess a helpful, yet ultimately unimpressive, chain of abilities. It is capable of multiplying and storing an infinite supply of non-magical objects, (money, clothes, etc.) While it will not multiply magical objects, it is capable of storing them. If the user wishes to withdraw an object from this tool, she need only concentrate on the item she wishes to withdraw, reach inside, and remove the item. However, if the user is unfocused during retrieval, they may not immediately withdraw the article they desire, (as shown when Rin accidently pulled a pair of cartooned underwear from the void instead of Emania.)

Taleria
A Treasure Tool in the shape of a pair of boots with small, wing-shaped patches sewn onto the outermost sides. When activated, (which is commonly accomplished by clicking the heels together,) large, angelic wings sprout from the position of the patches, allowing Rin to increase her speed, extend her jumps or even fly. While the tool itself takes a little getting used to, it is one of the fastest Treasure Tools, and offers multiple applications.

Vajra
A Treasure Tool in the shape of a decorative bracelet. When activated, the item will nullify the effects of lightning and electricity, making it invulnerable to enemies whose powers are lightning-based. This effect works in two ways: it can either be invoked by using Power of Existence; or it can respond to the intentions of the wearer.

Unrestricted Spells:
Fuzetzu
Fuzetsu (literally "Seal" in English) is the most commonly used Power of Unrestraint. It is a spherical area where the Crimson Realm and the real world meet; inside this area (also called Fuzetsu), all sorts of causalities, including time, is stopped for ordinary living beings. In this area, only Crimson Denizens, Flame Hazes, Mystes and ordinary humans which has a device to counter the effects of a Fuzetsu can move around.

Despite the absence of time for normal humans, however, battles in the Fuzetsu can damage real world objects in real-time, and harm the paused living beings, though thankfully for both it is possible to reverse the effects, if one uses enough Power of Existence. However, if the Seal is ever unlocked during a battle, the damage is irreparable. After a Fuzetsu is lifted, any damage done to existences inside will be realized, and time inside the Fuzetsu will be adjusted to the time outside.

Purifying Flame
A generic ability amongst Flame Haze, this allows Flame Haze to eliminate specific "impurities" in their bodies like the effects of alcohol and dirt among others. It uses minimal Power of Existence.

Sli Samhradh (The Path of Summer) and Sli Geimhreadh (The Path of Winter)
A pair of Unrestricted Spells the Flame Haze "Rin" is most famous for. Both paths speak to the her ability to manipulate water to varying degrees and temperatures. Individual attacks classified under either facet generally go unnamed, and are instead referred to by their baseline 'path'. Unlike most offensive methods, techniques which relate directly to the composition of Emania's blade are defined separately, and are recognized as powers independent of either viewing. This does not, however, include attacks that simply utilize Emania as a catalyst for execution.

In essence, both measures are one in the same, and can be accomplished through an alteration in the material state of a particular spell—for example, a standard ball of water could be boiled to achieve mist, or frozen into an iceberg.

* Scaip Ceogéar (Diffusion of Bladed Mist)
A sub-ability of Sli Samhradh, which allows Rin to dislocate the particles used to form Emania's blade into streams created through the Unrestricted Spell.

* Comhdhlúthaigh Ceogéar (Condensing of Bladed Mist)
A sub-ability of Sli Geimhreadh, which allows Rin to condense and solidify, (by way of freezing,) the particles used to form Emania's blade. This technique is what earned her the longstanding title 'The Frosted Sword of Animus'.

Crimson Lord:
Name: Lyr
Title: The Surging Tide of Influence

Personality:
Defined by his smooth voice, playful attitude and overabundance of charm, the Surging Tide of Influence is unnaturally skilled when it comes to getting what he wants. This master manipulator has been called suave on more than one occasion, and is well known for his ability to command and influence others through personality alone. Described as somewhat of a lady killer, Lyr thrives on the thrill of the chase, (despite a certain tendency to disappear after reeling in his catch,) and is constantly searching for ways to improve his 'game'. However, in light of his collected nature and shrewd misdemeanour, Lyr can be very temperamental, and has been known to discard his carefree persona when provoked.

Commonly referred to as "The Reflection of Vanity," Lyr is a narcissistic Crimson Lord with little respect for the large population of individuals 'beneath him'. In fact, Lyr deems nearly everyone he meets as unworthy of his time, and tends to treat them rather flippantly, mocking their ideas, values and/or beliefs on a continuous basis. Consequently, those do not pay him the respects he feels he deserves are often faced with with swift, (and often brutal,) punishment. Lyr is also very protective of his reputation and property, and will apply similar reprimand to those who violate anything 'belonging' to him, including his charges. A sinner by definition, The Surging Tide of Influence is guilty of five out of the seven deadly sins.

While Lyr does not appear to care for the balance of the world, he consistently encourages his vessel to protect it for unknown reasons, (though he has mentioned that 'she looks exceptionally cute when enraged.') Regardless of his flaws, he seems to care deeply for Rin, though it is unknown whether or not the feeling is genuine or brought about by his tendency to regard her as 'property'.
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Comments: 14

SnapFissure [2010-06-18 18:43:36 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


Honestly, what can I even begin to say about the epic success that just seems to roll off this image? I think I'll start from the boots and work my way up... with a mix of overall thoughts in there. First of all, the colors are awesome choices. If anything, she really gives off a serious sense of her abilities even if a bystander wouldn't know. The wings on the boots are just epic with the glowing effect on them, and the white compliments the blue and black nicely. Going off your description of her body on the sheet beforehand, I think you've certainly captured exactly what the description will form in someone's mind. Or, well, my mind, anyway. As I've said before, short dress is /certainly/ short... and very tight... though it looks very nice on her. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title="LOL"/> The folds are well-drawn, the belt is really cool, and the necklace is interesting. The pose and sword have to be my favorite parts about the whole thing. The pose is awesome in the fact that it shows off everything you intend to, including the Hougu quality of the boots, and the sword is awesome in the fact that it's transparent and ice-like. As for the eyes, you already know what I think of those, and I have to say this is the most attractive character I've seen with gray hair. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/n/n… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title="Nod"/> Maeve will have her work cut out for her attempting to sway Dion's attention away from her. xDD Great work, overall!

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Pyro-Productions In reply to SnapFissure [2010-06-18 19:32:02 +0000 UTC]

Oh Snapple. Firstly, I have to thank you for your kind critique! I do-so love her boots, and really like the fact that the majority of her outfit is more classical in terms of colouring. I agree that the dress is short, though it was done primarily to emphasize her overall figure. Thanks again for the super-fun eye tutorial as well, my friend. I really love the way they turned out!

Anyways, thanks!

Love, Meron-Pan. <3

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SnapFissure In reply to Pyro-Productions [2010-06-18 20:11:05 +0000 UTC]

You're certainly welcome, Meron-Pan...
I had fun making the tutorial. <3 I'm just glad it helped. ^^

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Pyro-Productions In reply to SnapFissure [2010-06-18 21:15:14 +0000 UTC]

XD

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Divine8 [2013-08-19 00:37:20 +0000 UTC]

HOLY EPICNESS!!!

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halomarine [2010-07-01 03:23:19 +0000 UTC]

really artisic. the mouth prbly could use a little more detail to get it to show up a little. like the invisible sword

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SnapFissure [2010-06-18 18:06:13 +0000 UTC]

The eyes are the sort that one could never hold a grudge against. All Marin would have to do is bat her eyelashes, let the sun hit her irises, and stick out her bottom lip. Though I'm not sure that would work for Maeve. :F Anyway, very awesome. <3 -goes to write critique- Adorable and awesome.

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Pyro-Productions In reply to SnapFissure [2010-06-18 19:27:52 +0000 UTC]

XD. Thanks Snapple!

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SnapFissure In reply to Pyro-Productions [2010-06-18 20:08:32 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome. :3

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AquaAerios [2010-06-18 11:40:52 +0000 UTC]

her eyes D:

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Pyro-Productions In reply to AquaAerios [2010-06-18 15:23:08 +0000 UTC]

Crazy anime-eyes.

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NahxsTheEnd [2010-06-18 06:53:28 +0000 UTC]

shes cute

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Pyro-Productions In reply to NahxsTheEnd [2010-06-18 15:23:01 +0000 UTC]

Thankies!

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NahxsTheEnd In reply to Pyro-Productions [2010-06-18 20:22:26 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

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