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Published: 2017-09-03 14:57:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 474; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 0
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An old drawing that i tried to colorize.Related content
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Good piece that you've got here. From the looks of it, seems like you're going for something a sort of monk motif, especially considering the pants and the choice of the weapon. In some regards, it looks pretty decent with the shoulders being hunched, and one leg forward. It gives the impression that he's advancing, and the overall design is pretty decent.Β
With that said, there are a couple of things that could be improved upon. I would have to say the lines around the arm muscles look a little too thick, in which they're the same as the rest of the outlines. Details often have thinner lines, as they're there to mainly help build the image, rather than stand out with the picture.Β
To help with your work, I'd suggest looking up a bit of human anatomy. You don't need to have it look human, but studying the muscles will help you at least see how to give dimension to the character. You've someone what an idea with the pants and arms, so a little more may help when doing the chest as well.Β
Overall, a pretty good job here.
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Thanks for the great feedback!
I do need to train more on human anatomy, the lines were on purpose though, but they don't seem to have got the overall feeling i intended for them.
I got a little better at it now, since it is way easier to fix those in digital then in hand draws
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Hi! IΒ΄m fromΒ Β
This design makes a new twist as far as designing lizardmans are concerned
The exaggerated proportions, the way it gives the sensation of the scales with the green color of its skin and the details on the chest side, the details like that kind of wounds it has on the neck and part of the chest, the overall design of the launches, his mask that gives a lot of style, the design of his pants and gloves with dark colors that make him contrast and more with those details in brown, the tail and how the overall design clearly gives a very spectacular dynamism.
Keep it up, because he clearly has the talent to make spectacular designs!
Thanks for the feedback!
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Hoddy, I'm fromΒ ProjectComment
The body looks a little sniff, but their are many nice details to it too.
Folds on the pants look a little to random.
Don't think much of the character design. Not my kind of thing.
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