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Published: 2013-10-13 10:36:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 3725; Favourites: 56; Downloads: 0
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Sorta has something to do with these sketches:fav.me/d6pmx83
fav.me/d6daldc
For the doujin I've had in mind since April. Maybe I'll do it, maybe I wont. I dont know. Im very busy, dont expect too much. But Japan is one of the 4 main characters. The other 3 are: America, Nyo!Romano, and choco-java 's Luzon OC. My own Phili OC doesnt even have a part in this! TTwTT. Maybe I could squeeze her in somehow. But maybe, it wouldnt even matter anyway. hehe.
Anyway, I guess you can call this a teaser, or a sneak peak. Yes, its Japan and Nyo!Spain. I gave them different human names because these names are similar to the name of the person to whom their character is based from. I hope the Spanish words I used are correct. I just copied them from a book.
Thanx to choco-java for giving me a link for some pencil settings for Sai. Theyre very helpful, I love it! Thanx a lot!
And I got a little carried away in using them, and then I got lazy. So, Im very tired ok! I cant help it!
Torn: You are here
Abandon: fav.me/d6qw0ao
Trapped: fav.me/d6tfgal
Betrayal: fav.me/d6tk8ao
Price: fav.me/d6xo5sc
EDIT: Thanks to MzVerlac for providing me with the correct Spanish translations and accents for nyo!Spain's dialog. Now I know why they have those inverted ! and ? in their sentences. hehe. But I let the accents pass with Japan. He's not Spanish anyway(obviously).
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Huh? Nyo!Spain? I'm getting more and more confused. And that's a sign that the plot is complex! Gaaah~
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Wow! This looks great!! >w Awww~ ¡Doña María is so kind! Like a sweet mom~ =//w//=
I hope you can do it, one day in the future~ ^w^
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This was quite well drawn and very expressive! But the Spanish wasn't grammatically correct..
You might wanna try Spanishdictdotcom for help.
Otherwise, a very creative fan art!
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Thanks! I'll check that site out sometime. Anyway, somebody already translated for me, I'll edit it as soon as I can.
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"Hiro, más mejor que escondes aquí" it's wrong, don't have a verb, the correct form is "Hiro, más vale que te escondas aquí" or maybe "Hiro, es mejor que te escondas aquí"
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yes. Somebody already corrected me about and Im thankful. I only got it from a book and the authors' memory could be rusty('he's really old), or he could be using a creole language. Anyway, I'll edit it when I get some free time.
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This is gonna be a tear jerker isn't it?
I can't take those Filipino curses seriously now after watching this.
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Oh! I've seen a lot of his act in Youtube. He's hilarious! love him!
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*Seees comics
I can't fight this feeling anymore.
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You're welcome, the pencil settings are awesome for doodles and shizz, noh?
Damn tho, I'm really curious now about your doujin..>w<
But i feel you about "so busy i dont even wanna move"
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yeah! I love them! They're very close, if not the same to how I would sketch on paper. I cant thank you enough! XD
I really want to make this doujin. I want your OCs to represent the Philippines. hehe. But yeah. Im very tired most of the time, and its pretty obvious here. The only one that I like here is Japan in the second panel. Thats my first try on the settings you gave me. The rest is just, ugh just have to finish what I started. -_-
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It's a great comic with an interesting idea :3!
I really like the way you drew them, as always ~
But just for your information, most part of what you've written in Spanish is wrong — those words exist, but the sentences are wrong. I'm just telling you because I'm Spanish c:
So, if you want to correct them, here you go ;;
- Japón guerra con America! — here you say "Japan war with America", you've forgotten the verb, so it's "¡Japón está en guerra con América!"
- Aeroplano Japon attacka el barracks! — we usually don't use the word "aeroplano", we use "avión/aviones", and "attacka" and "barracks" don't exist. It should be "¡Los aviones japoneses atacan los cuarteles!"
- Hiro, mas mejor que escondes aqui. - "Mas mejor" is something that children say, but it's incorrect. Also, the form of the verb is incorrect, the present can't be used here. It's "Es mejor que te escondas aquí/Lo mejor será que te escondas aquí."
And just as a detail, in Spanish we use ¡ / ¿ at the beginning of exclamations and questions, and there are some words wich should have an... accent? idk, for example, María instead of 'Maria', or mío instead of 'mio'.
I hope was useful and you can understand my English! xD
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Ah I see! Thanx a lot for the clarifications! I was kinda skeptical about the Spanish. As I've said, I got it from a book. But to be fair, the author of the book is really old (the book is a memoir), so his memory could be rusty. Also, there is also the possibility that they are speaking Chavacano (Spanish creole language in the Philippines), The author did mentioned he spoke Chavacano and Spanish, but since I dont speak either language, and the author didnt really specify, so I have no way of confirming.
But thanx a lot anyway, I'll edit it later as soon as I got free time. ^_^
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Don't worry dear! I'm sure it would happen to everyone, trying to speak a language that you don't know is difficult. As you wrote it it's somehow understandable, but it just doesn't sound right, that's all. If you need some help with Spanish for your next comics you can ask me if you aren't 100% sure, if you want (I love languages~). (:
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Oh thanx lot! I'll be sure to keep that in mind next time I need some help in Spanish.
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gooosh, I do hope you decide to do the doujinshi~ I know you're busy though, so I understand if you can't because of constraints... but either way, this stuff looks interesting~
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Thanx! Im kinda thinking that I'll make this if Philippines become canon in APH. As a trubute to all the wonderful Phili Oc's out there. But, I really do wanna make this, its not really my schedule that worries me, it's my laziness.
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Hmm, in all honesty, I'm really doubting that Philippines will ever be made a canon character. After all, Himaruya hasn't really been as APH focused lately, what with other ongoing series and so on, and still an already large cast to flesh out and so on.
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hehe. Thats why I said. maybe i will, or will not make this. As cool as it would be for Phili to be an anime character, I kinda doubt it too. Plus the fact that after seeing all the colorful OC's out there, I'd hate to say this, but part of me doesnt want Phili to be canon.
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lol the PH fandom may hate me for this, but I don't want Philippines made canon either - because then I'd feel weird having my OC and... then the weeb side of the overall APH fandom would be ruining canon!Philippines' portrayals just like all the other characters and just nope-- plus uh, canon!NZ isn't really a very good NZ portrayal either soooo canon!Philippines could end up quite inaccurate as well--
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I know what you mean! TTwTT
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