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Raspberry-Heaven — Do you ever?
Published: 2005-06-29 04:44:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 844; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 23
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Do you ever look awayWhen some one catches your eye?
Do you ever get frustrated
When you're just about to cry?
Do you ever wish that you were stronger?
Do you ever supress blinding fear?
Do you ever want someone to love you?
Do you ever curse unbidden tears?
Do you ever smile so brightly
When you fool the world that lurks outside?
Do you ever feel so guilty
When you run away and hide?
Do you ever hate emotion?
Do you ever feel so cold?
Dp you ever feel so youthful?
Do you ever feel so old?
Do you ever clam up silent
When the time calls for you to speak?
Do you ever think that feelings
Are the things that make you weak?
Do you ever feel so blinded?
Do you ever cry when you finally see?
Do you ever wish that you could love?
Do you ever feel like me?
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Comments: 16
wow, you have som pretty amazing poems, and stories, i think you should become a writer!!
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wow this is great. Usually I'm not a big fan of poetry, but this is awesome
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Gah, next thing you know you'll be putting a "Writing Gods" section in yer journal. XD Thank you soooo much as always, Isis-chan. Yer so sweet.
And since when am I a "-sama"?! XP
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hmmm.. *evil smile* ne not a bad idea mwahaha! 
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wow ... i really love this poem ... it's amazing and i feel like i can really relate to it. 
i must keep an eye on you for any future masterpieces
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Wow... Thank you for the compliment. Masterpiece? XD Thank you very much.
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You've been feeling poetic lately correct? O_O..
I love all the lines cause..yea..I feel like I can relate to the actions ._. ..
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The second paragraph: Do you ever want someone to love you?
Story of my life. 
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Very pretty. I shall keep it in my favorites.
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Thats beautiful! My fav. vurse would have to be the third with 'do you smile so brightly'
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*hug* Thank you very very much! *grin* And thank you for the favs on this and "No pain, No gain."
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oohhh...*stares* dude, pretty...wish I could steal it for my writing folio but the muse who doubles as my conscience wont let me...*glares at her* something about morals...
Seriously though, I'd never steal someone else's work. I dan write things just fine...^_^ woot! Raspberry-sama rocks the hill
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