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Raspberry-Heaven — Hold me, take me, break me
Published: 2005-05-21 20:02:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 761; Favourites: 12; Downloads: 28
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Hold me, take me, break meNever yours to keep
Hold me, take me, break me
As you held me in my sleep
Hate me, heed me, need me
Tell me pretty, sweetened lies
Hate me, heed me, need me,
That pass us by through time that flies
Grasp me, release me
Nothing you can do
Grasp me, release me
No longer bound to follow you
Hate me, spite me
"Why can't you be like all the rest?"
Hate me, spite me
"Do you really think that would be best?"
Trash me, rage me
Tell me that it's all my fault
Trash me, rage me
Anger through an endless waltz
Love me, despise me
Tell me it will be all right
Love me, despise me
Lies doused in resonating light
Guide me, forsake me
Lead me down the liar's path
Guide me, forsake me
Leave me to face ruthless wrath
Use me, abuse me
It's never quite enough
Use me, abuse me
Because we still are bound by blood
Hold me
Take me
Break me
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Comments: 14
Wow that has a really powerful eaning I love your use of words
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*laugh* Have you ever heard of an easy struggle? *grin* But thank you very much.
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wow so deep and sophisticated~ yes very true, most despised relationships may be by blood because no matter how much you hate them.. they are still family and it will end up hurting both of you 
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*huggles* That was kinda depressing...I love it though its like the stuff I used to study when I still did lit.
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O.O Wow, it reminds me of my many crushes over the years. Is it okay it I post a link to this poem in my xanga site? I sorta relate to this poem but I don't wanna steal the credit from you.
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Sure, I don't mind. Just don't say you wrote it, okay? (Not that I'm implying you would- just making sure.)
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OHHH.....
That's great!
I say (Itachi and Sasuke.)
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WOW thats deep ... when you were writing this did you have Naruto's and Sasukes relationship in your thoughts or somthing that happens outside that. Like ChaseReyes said is it a family problem? It seem that it has nothing to do with NarSas WITCH IS TOTALY NOT A PROBLEM... Im just curious so I can understand the poem better.
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No, not NaruSasu. ^_^; Outside that, just family stuff. But writing it made me feel better. So it's all good.
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Awww, if family stuff made you write that, things must not be very happy at all, ne? *hugs you*
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That's pretty intense.
Being a parent is not easy...sometimes it's easy to forget that being a child (not by age, but by relation) is just as difficult, though something tells me that there is more behind this piece than typical parent-child struggles.
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Thank you. And I do acknowledge the fact that parenting is not easy. I don't deny that, and I'm not trying to whine. But I don't know, I just wanted to write something like this for a long time. That's all.
But thank you for the comment.
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I'm sorry, I didn't mean that to come across as a "well the grass isn't always greener" kinda remark. Sometimes tone is so hard to convey in text. I meant it that as a parent, it's easy to forget that being on the receiving end of parenting is just a difficult, if not more so, because of the lack of control. I think we would all be better parents if we kept that in mind......
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