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Rhyshian — xorganization-xiiix correction
Published: 2011-10-30 01:02:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 994; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 7
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Original deviation: [link] by =Xorganization-xiiiXBasically the only things really off were the fact that the proportions were off (unless you were doing so in a chibi style; in which case PLEASE let me know and I'll fix that.) and that the pose was a bit stiff.
I'm not expert, but I do pick up a few things here and there that help me, so I hope that I can help you in return.
(I had this sitting in my computer for a while so it's a bit old. XD I finished it up today, but you know...)
If you have any questions, feel free to ask me. <:
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Comments: 5
Good correction
Can I just say one thing though? The last picture that you drew for the correction seems a tiny bit out of proportion. The head might just be a tad too small compared to the long legs.
Sorry I dont know this character, and maybe its supposed to be like that >.<
Other than that, this was wonderful and helpful to me as well! Good job and thank you
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No, you're certainly right, it is a bit off. I'm REALLY not an expert so most things I say about anatomy should probably be disregarded until I actual take an anatomy class. Or maybe get a book. I'm always making mistakes in my proportions; it's one of those things I can't seem to get right all the time yet... 
I'm glad I could be of some help though. c: Thank you
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Oh haha thats alright, Im an amateur myself
Im glad my critique wasn't taken poorly! Some people really get offended, and I really wasnt trying to offend.
Yes, keep practicing
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I actually wasn't, so it's perfectly alright.
Thanks for the help~
It seems that I've forgotten all about the heads thing. I was practically addicted to it when I first started (chibis three heads high using the circle as part of the shoulders, anyone?) and somehow I got away from it. Now to force myself back into the habit. lol
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