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Hellsing and the hellsing Characters Β© Koutha Hirano
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My only problem so far is that the Doctor died so soon after being reintroduced.
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As Walter said, the Doctor doesn't know when to "leave the stage". As long Schrodinger is alive, I'm sure he will be at least mentioned in some way
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Maybe, but he certainly won't return in person, considering he committed suicide by fire.
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This story is great but I have one question. How the hell did Doc survive? Didn't he get his face smashed in by Walter?
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Well, the Major was a cyborg so the Doc is quite handy with finding way to make people live longer. And obviously the Doc was not a vampire, but neither did he age, so he had probably a few tricks in his sleeve that he didn't reviel in the manga.
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aaaaaaahhhhh that makes senseΒ
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Oookay. Read thru 3 chapters, time for a nice, short review.
1. I love the story! It's simple, but all those not-quite-revealed details are making me want to read.
2. Great visuals! The style is so close to the OVAs, I was really surprised. Top notch! Really great chapter covers, too.
3. Your grammar could use some work, but I understand what the characters are saying, so it's not a big concern.
All in all, good job
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Thank you very much
Yes, I will sum up and fix my previous horrible grammar one day
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I've only ready up to this chapter, and I really really REEEAAALLLYYY like where this is going. Β At the end of chapter 2 I thought that was anderson and almost drowned in the root beer I was drinking.
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Thank you very much! I know there are a lot of imperfect stuff such as my english in the beginning, but I'll get there to fix it someday 
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The storyline is amazing. However, and perhaps this is because English is not your first language, so please do not be angry, but your grammar could use some work. I can understand just fine what the characters are saying. But as far as the storyline goes, I love it! I always wondered what would happen if Schrodinger survived and joined Hellsing.
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Thank you very much! ^w^
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seriously fatum never introduces himself properly
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Yes, 
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fatum....FATUUMMMM fatty fatum ._. gawd
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Fatum and Eris...damn, things are getting interesting!
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I really like that you have the Major's war speech in the background of this scene. it parallels very nicely with the rest of your story.
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Thank you ^^ And Thx for the 
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I really love this
pity theres no new millenium now but oh well
and sorry once again...could i ask for the description of page 12 at least tell me the dialouge?
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Thank you!
I hope you will like the new enemies designed by me
I Changed the options of Page 9 and 12, I think you are able to watch it now.
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okay thank you for doing so!
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So, let me get this straight, Fatum killed the Doctor and his 600 vampire soldiers? Or did he just kill the Doctor? O_O
What ever the case, I have to say that your art style is fantastic.
Pages 13, 14 and 15 are done beautifully. What program do you use to draw?
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OH! And thanks for 
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No problem. Keep it up.
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You using handdrawings as well, right?
You use inking or you make the Contour in the computer?
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Yes, I am.
I draw them with a pencil, scan them, then go over the lines in Photoshop. It's hard work considering I don't have a tablet. DX
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I thinked about to buy a tablet, but the good tablets cost too much money. I thinked about waiting until the screen-tablets (like Wacom CINTIQ tablets) become less expensive, because those are better for handdrawers like us. But I just readed about the EZ Canvas Screen Tablet, it look's interresting: [link]
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Thanks dude! I'm honored
Fatum killed the 600 vampire soldier and because of that the Doctor killed him self
I use handdrawings with my HP psc 1210 all-in-one Scanner. I don't use any digital graphics table or pen, if you thinked about that 
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You're welcome.
He killed himself? O_O
Awww that's too bad.
Wait, so actually draw on a scanner or something? I don't think I understood that right.
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suicide: normal nazi reaction for defeat
No....
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Fatum vaguely reminds me of la croix from vampire the masquerade bloodlines. I say vaguely because the hair is different and I really doubt he is a member of the venture vampires. But that shit eating grin just reminds me of him.
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Well, everyone sees the character in him that he is most used to see. I didn't played with that game, so I don't know who this La Croix is, but sounds like a fun character. Maybe I'll try out the game someday
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The video game is really good. if you ever play it I suggest playing as a tremere because they have blood magic and that is a good thing to have when fighting the other vampires because you can just force them to puke up 4 gallons of blood by waving your finger tips at them.
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Good point.
Oh, okay. Now I understand.
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I'm getting the feeling thatsometime in this we get romantacism with Schro and Seras.
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Finally the new enemy has a name.
Now it becomes intresting.
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Did you enjoyed the 3rd Chapter?
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